Speaking of Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry", people can't help but think of Gorky's masterpiece "Clock". Although their styles are quite different, the two writers happen to coincide, grasping the images that people are accustomed to and easy to ignore, or expressing their feelings or commenting, lamenting that youth is fleeting and life is short, and there is an urgent need to cherish time, cherish life and make a difference.
In a hurry was written in March 1922, when the May 4th Movement was at a low ebb. Facing the disappointing reality, Zhu Ziqing felt depressed, nostalgic, depressed, sorry and disappointed. But after all, Zhu Ziqing is a man with strong self-control, earnest, diligent and practical. He is sentimental but not depressed, hesitant but not depressed. In his letters to Yu Pingbo on 1922 and 16543817, he disclosed his contradictory thoughts: "I feel very tempted, decadent and annoyed about modernity", "I feel that time is in a hurry, which is a pity", and he decided to "throw away metaphysics and focus on reality" and implement it. Yu Pingbo once commented that Zhu Ziqing "this intention is to combine decadence with realism to form a positive instantaneism", and this view of instantaneity "is always positive, affirmative, shouting and struggling in behavior" (read "Destruction"). Understanding Zhu Ziqing's mentality in writing in a hurry is helpful to grasp the author's unique aesthetic feeling caused by the bright flow.
Invisible and intangible time has passed away from people mercilessly and hurriedly. With his rich imagination, Zhu Ziqing vividly captured the trace of the passage of time. At the beginning of the article, the author depicts the picture of swallows gone, willows withered and green, and peach blossoms withered, rendering the rise and fall of natural objects and the change of time sequence, suggesting the traces of time passing. From this, the author reminds himself that more than 8,000 days in 24 years have disappeared like "a drop of water in the sea", "I can't help but shed tears". The author further describes in detail the moments of eating, washing hands, sleeping and even sighing in daily life. Time flies, and his past days disappear like "smoke" blown away by the breeze and "fog" evaporated by Chuyang. The author deeply feels that since he "came to this world", he can't "walk this time for nothing" and reveal the theme in an orderly way. Undoubtedly, Zhu Ziqing's thought of cherishing the inch of gold coincides with the ancient poem "Young people don't work hard, but old people are sad" and the motto "An inch of time is worth an inch of gold, and an inch of money can't buy an inch of time". And Zhu Ziqing's description of places that people ignore will surprise you even in ordinary life (Shan Ye Collection).
Remarkably, in the quiet flow of time, in a short space of only more than 600 words, Zhu Ziqing uses various rhetorical devices to show his inner world in twists and turns, so that readers can clearly grasp his ideological context. At the beginning of the article, the author uses three parallel sentences to describe the spring scenery, that is, the swallows come again, the willows are greener, and the peach blossoms bloom again, in contrast to "the days are gone forever", which reminds people of the passage of time, causes thinking, points out problems, and puts forward the question of whether time is "stolen" or "escaped by itself" with lyrical rhetoric sentences, deeply feeling that time waits for no one. Then, in the second and third paragraphs, after the previous question, another question was raised. The author compares the flow of time in his past life to a drop of water, compares the "flow of time" of nature to the sea, and compares smallness to vastness, expressing his feelings of hurting and cherishing time. In the rush of time, personification gives life to the sun, a symbol of time, saying that the sun moves quietly around it, crosses smartly and flies lightly, which makes it feel at a loss and uneasy. He took advantage of the rush of the sun full of feelings, entrusted his surging feelings and deepened the theme. Finally, in the fourth paragraph, the author traces back the "gossamer trace" of his past life by asking questions, showing his serious thinking about the value of life and his persistent pursuit of life, and asks, "Why are our days gone forever?" Repeatedly echoing the beginning, showing anxiety. On the one hand, the author gives full play to his wonderful imagination, on the other hand, he makes full use of various rhetorical methods, especially the eleven questions that run through the whole article as clues to emotional development, expresses infinite thoughts through limited images, and uses ingenious ideas to make the feelings that have been "majestic and lingering in his heart" extremely "layered and tortuous" (short poems and long poems)
Zhu Ziqing showed the beauty of painting and poetry with his subtle observation and experience of objective things, vivid brushwork and the brushwork of blending scenes. For example, the sun in his works is not the usual natural scenery, but an artistic image created by the author. The author combines subjective feelings with objective external things, with both form and spirit and unique feelings, which is the unity of subjective and objective. Language has a sense of rhythm and melody, which exudes a strong lyrical atmosphere in simplicity and plainness, reaching a poetic aesthetic realm. The full text deeply attracts readers of different times with the beauty of style, rhetoric and emotion.
Zhu Ziqing's expression of time with the title "Hurry" is a rare and changeable feeling, which not only contains strong emotional flavor, but also implies interest in life. He is a graduate of the philosophy department of the university. He often can't help but observe and think about social life from the perspective of a philosopher. In many essays, he describes daily life in a lyrical style like a poet, which makes his works philosophical and profound. In this article, the author's thinking about time is centered around the meaning and value of life, and the contradictory psychology of loneliness, passion, distress and realistic pursuit revealed in this period certainly represents the general psychological state of young intellectuals who pursued progress but could not find a way out for a while during the May Fourth Movement, reflecting the state of mind of the times, but his attitude towards life is to cherish, love and inspire. Because Zhu Ziqing strives for the true interest of life and has new insights, his works will be full of rational interest and make people alert.
In a hurry, the style is euphemistic, smooth, light and long. The full text is short in length, simple in structure and short in sentence patterns. Swallow, willow, light smoke, breeze, mist, Chuyang, steaming, gossamer and other words are erratic and clever, and the artistic conception is clear. The whole text appears harmonious and symmetrical, which is consistent with the subtle flow of the author's pursuit of the traces of the passage of time to express his thoughts and feelings. Respondent: Lengchong | Level 4 | 2007-4- 13 20:39
In a hurry is an early work of Mr. Zhu Ziqing. In a mournful style, the article describes the helplessness and helplessness of the old literati in a turbulent era in the face of the "fleeting" hurry.
The article pays attention to language: first, it skillfully uses rhetoric to turn ethereal and abstract time into a tangible object. Second, the combination of whole and scattered sentence patterns, coupled with the use of reduplicated words in oral English, makes reading very rhythmic and elegant. Respondent: Ding Wenting of Grade 8 | 6 | 2007-4- 13 20:40.
Love for father Respondents: underhill | Grade II | 2007-4- 13 20:4 1
Let's cherish the good times now! Respondent: zhzhyuan96 | Level 1 | 2007-4- 13 20:44
It expresses the author's hatred that time is too short to start all over again, and expresses the author's confusion, sadness, helplessness and final awakening in the absence of time. Respondent: 634489363 | Level 1 | 2007-4- 13 20:44
We Should Cherish Seconds More —— Analysis of Hurriedly
Liu xinshuang
When evaluating the achievements of literary creation since the May Fourth Movement, Mr. Lu Xun once had such a unique and incisive insight: (Since the May Fourth Movement) "The success of essays is almost above novels, operas and poems." Mr. Zhu Ziqing is one of the outstanding prose writers since the May 4th Movement. His unique and sincere prose works show the achievements of the "literary revolution" and have enduring artistic vitality. Hurriedly is one of them. The concrete image of "hurry" used to express emotions is an illusory time that is extremely difficult to grasp and express. However, the author's ingenious pen can give this "intangible thing" a concrete, sensible and vivid image, and express all the feelings of the author.
This article uses the beginning method of poetry. "Swallows have gone, and there is a time to come again; Willow withered, there is a time to green again; Peach blossoms are thanks, and there are times when they bloom again. " Compound sentence's three sentences are poetic in one go. Swallows, willows and peach blossoms, which can be caught regularly and traced, have gone back and found again, setting off the "time" that has passed in a hurry without trace. Followed by a series of four questions, there are no answers, but the reader can get the answer with a little wrong thinking. This method of expression is novel and unique, and it is also intriguing. From the perspective of language style, it is also fleeting, such as a white horse passing by, such as a quick glance. This passage is clear and fluent, but it is a bit hazy and implicit, and it begins to show a faint artistic conception that dominates the whole text.
The second paragraph "I don't know how many days they gave me" is asking myself, so naturally I began to integrate "I" into the text and write about my life. "More than 8,000 days" is a record of half a turn. The author was born in 1898, and wrote this article in 1922. * * * spent 24 spring and autumn periods, 365 days a year, * * * 8,760 days, which is exactly what the author summarized as "more than 8,000 days". "Like a drop of water on the tip of a needle in the sea" is a vivid metaphor to further contrast and render the "hurry" atmosphere. At the end, the author's inner world is empty and melancholy because of the passage of time and unfulfilled ambitions. This is a confession of feelings, but it is not a direct expression of feelings, but a manifestation of sincere fear at the thought of wasting time. "Sweat on my head" is an extreme statement that the author is deeply ashamed of wasting his time, and the sweat on his forehead is like a piece of paper: "Tears" is a sign that the author cries because of wasting time and making no achievements. Speech represents the soul, and form represents the thought. If the appearance is like this, the mood is self-evident. This passage can be said to be a romantic without ink.
The passage of time is experienced by everyone personally, but it can be said that most of them are commonplace and turn a blind eye. How can people have a concrete image of this feeling? So in the third paragraph, the author focuses on the daily life of "me", starting with trivial things that people have to experience personally, and vividly depicts the hasty passage of time. Zhu Ziqing once said: "When writing an article, you should describe twice as much as what people ignore, so that you will have surprises in your usual life." This kind of description is the practice of his creative theory, which can be called "double" description with fine and dense stitches. Please look at these concrete and slightly exaggerated descriptions, such as "life from a birdbath", "life from a rice bowl" and "life from a frozen eye", which are novel enough to "double", but the following descriptions are more chic and exaggerated. "When I reached out to cover my arm, I passed by the covered hand." "When it was dark, I was lying in bed, and he quickly passed me and flew away from my feet." This kind of description really makes people "distinguish many novel and different flavors" from familiar life. And the last "my sigh is hidden, but the shadow of a new day begins to flash in the sigh" is even more superb. Sigh is only a few seconds, and during this time, if you are in a daze, if you are graceful, Youlong's time will not even be met, only a faint figure will flash by. The exaggerated description here is doubly hard. And the fleeting nature of time is also full of charm. The "time" in Zhu Ziqing's works is like observation under a microscope. After hundreds or even thousands of times of expansion, even the smallest details are clear and vivid. This paragraph is the most important part of the full text. In order to show the rapidity of time more clearly, the author describes it step by step and in a hurry. At first, things that show the passage of time last for a long time, such as getting up in the morning, washing hands, eating, and being silent. The corresponding passage of time is not very fast, but "moving" and "past". Next, the time of metaphor is shorter, and the time flies faster, from moving past to crossing, flying away and slipping away, until the last shadow is shining. This kind of description, which is more and more urgent, not only vividly shows the characteristics of time flying, but also makes readers feel from shallow to deep, experience from shallow to thick, and involuntarily enter the artistic conception created by the works, and a strong sense of "surprise" arises spontaneously.
Prose is a style that needs strong feelings. The purpose of prose narrative landscape writing is to express emotion. In the above paragraph, the author described in detail the traces of the passage of time in emotional language, and expressed his subtle feelings euphemistically and implicitly. This is a typical thought and feeling of some progressive young intellectuals who are dissatisfied with the present situation but have not found the right way out. They are depressed and hesitant, but they don't want to be lonely, hoping to make a difference. The appearance of this feeling is contained in the narrative of the facts, which is the so-called "that is, things are emotional, realistic and moral." Therefore, from the perspective of writing, realism and writing in a hurry are still the main contents.
However, with the further development of the article, the author's strong feelings gradually converge into an unstoppable Hong Tao from the trickle flowing slowly in the mountains, and gush out. Quoting has also changed from realism to realism, and feelings are slowly revealed between the lines and directly expressed-the Hong Tao Waterfall of feelings is like a spring. Please see, in the fourth paragraph, there are six questions in a row, such as rivers rushing and pouring thousands of miles, which vividly express the author's emotional waves. These six rhetorical questions are closely related. The first sentence first asks, "What can I do in a world of thousands of families?" Immediately replied: "only wandering, only in a hurry." Then he buckled "wandering" and asked, "What is left except wandering?" This is actually a rhetorical sentence of "nothing but wandering", which highlights the author's melancholy and sad mood. The third sentence asks yourself: "What traces have I left?" The fourth sentence further emphasizes: "Have I left traces like a hairspring?" There is no trace of gossamer, which shows that life is mediocre. The lack of "trace" is exactly what makes the author depressed. The fifth sentence uses two "nakedness", which clearly shows the author's anguish and hesitation. And the last "but it can't be flat, why must we go in vain this time?" However, it shows unwillingness to sink into depression and hesitation. Because if you can't live like this, of course you can't live like this, so of course there is hope.
This passage expresses the author's sigh for years and hatred of mediocrity. I hope to make a difference, and I want to add luster to my life. Feel sincere and strong. Literally, however, a series of impassioned and clever questions, without missing a word, have successfully demonstrated their touching power, but they are touching and charming. This passage focuses on expressing feelings, but it is not vague, but closely follows the specific images that cause emotional waves, and there is no sense of floating at all. The six rhetorical questions are all sighs caused by the rapid passage of light at the same time. Moreover, while asking questions to express his feelings, he also inadvertently touched and vividly described the fleeting time. "Run away like a fly" is a vivid description, "Like a wisp of smoke, blown away by the breeze; Like fog, it is steaming in Chuyang. " It is also a vivid description of the shape of things.
At the end of the full text, I repeated the key sentences in the first paragraph, pointed out the theme, and highlighted "urgency", which made the structure of the article appear rigorous and meticulous.
Throughout the full text, the length is extremely short, the total length is only about 500 words, but it vividly depicts the characteristics of fleeting time and drifting away. In this description, the author's inner world is subtly and naturally exposed. Vivid realism and emotional expression are harmoniously integrated through exquisite structure and concise and fresh language, which constitutes an artistic conception of "light spirit" beauty that dominates the whole text. The whole article is quiet and natural, but it is thought-provoking, thought-provoking and very artistic. It is indeed a rare masterpiece of prose. It is worth learning in art, and it is not useless in thought. Although the thoughts and feelings reflected in the article are not high-profile, relatively low and depressed, they are by no means decadent and depressed. The expression of the lonely and desolate thoughts and feelings of young people in the old society contains ridicule and criticism of the semi-feudal and semi-colonial social reality in old China, which is obviously of progressive significance. Moreover, through the writer's "double" description, we are extremely amazed at the passage of time from the "ordinary physical experience" and can also get great enlightenment. Dong Lao said: "As the old saying goes,' It's a pity this day', we should cherish the second yin." We have read this article and learned the same lesson.