On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. (In fact, this sentence is also wrong, which will be mentioned later. )
In the second half of the sentence, the word "through" was deleted.
With the theme of "the art of recitation",
Many famous performing artists have perfected the art of recitation as an attribute.
Take "college students" as the object, supplemented by "blood boiling and deep shock".
The Art of Recitation () College students are full of blood and deeply shocked. Obviously, a predicate "yes" is missing.
If "pass" is not deleted, then "pass" is a verb and should be a predicate.
But who is the subject at this time? It can't be a "big poem recitation" because the first half of the sentence is an adverbial. So there is no subject here.
As mentioned earlier, the first half of the sentence is also wrong, because as an adverbial clause, it can be divided into components:
A large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre.
"As an object, there is no subject.
The correct change of the whole sentence is:
On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. The perfect recitation art of many famous performing artists made the college students excited and deeply shocked.
You don't need to recite special language diseases to make sick sentences. The key is to divide the components, simplify the complexity, check the trunk (subject-predicate-object) first, and then check the branches and leaves (definite complement) to cultivate a sense of language.