Huang Huahua, deputy secretary of Guangdong Provincial Party Committee and governor, recently wrote a group of poems "Ode to Guangzhou's New Wind and Light", which enthusiastically eulogized the gratifying changes of Guangzhou's urban environment.
There are five poems in Praise of Guangzhou's New Wind Scenery, including the seven-character quatrains "Praise Little Yao Man", "Praise Lessing Chiwan" and "Praise Greenway", as well as the seven-character poems "Praise flower city square" and "Praise the Opening Ceremony of the Asian Games". Taking the new representative landscape of Guangzhou as the object of chanting, the poem wrote the new face, new image and new symbol of Yangcheng, which not only wrote the beauty of the new world, but also pinned the poet's love for the scenery written.
At the same time, the poems truly reflect that Guangdong and Guangzhou, while vigorously developing their economies, pay more and more attention to ecological civilization and environmental protection, strengthen cultural construction and pay attention to people's happiness under the guiding ideology of "Scientific Outlook on Development".
Guangzhou Xinfeng Jingzan
There are five poems in Praise of Guangzhou's New Wind Scenery, including the seven-character quatrains "Praise Little Yao Man", "Praise Lessing Chiwan" and "Praise Greenway", as well as the seven-character poems "Praise flower city square" and "Praise the Opening Ceremony of the Asian Games".
Cultivate self-cultivation with classics and history, and cultivate interest with poetry and prose; Self-cultivation, heroism and interest make talents. Throughout the ages, many outstanding figures have left wonderful works praising the beautiful mountains, rivers and cultural scenery of the motherland. These masterpieces contain the feelings of "worrying about the world first, worrying about the world later". Patriotism, love for people, love for hometown, as long as there is love in the heart, such words can always awaken the beauty in people's hearts. It is precisely because of this that people can't help but think of such words. Word of mouth tells us that scenery, scenery and feelings are all fixed in a certain place in history. Huang Huahua, deputy secretary of Guangdong Provincial Party Committee and governor, recently wrote "Praise of Guangzhou's New Wind Scenery", which continued this feeling and emotion.
Our Xiao Man?
The pearl river inkstone is full of clear waves,
Yunshan is twisted like a water mill.
There is a wonderful pen hanging around her waist.
Can the sky write geometry?
Zan flower city square
Where is the scenery in the country,
In the center of Guangzhou.
Buildings stand in the water,
There is a faint fragrance of books and ink in the bushes.
Dancing in disco village,
The fountain overflowed to sing.
Guests in the modern Peach Blossom Garden,
Leisure is better than heaven.
Zanxin litchi bay
I don't know Lai Chi Wan anymore,
The style is far better than the ancient Xiguan.
Just like the riverside scene on Qingming Festival,
Tourists forget to go home.
Praise the opening ceremony of the Asian Games
With the city as the background and the river as the platform,
The fire tree and silver flowers are blooming all over the sky.
Fishing boats are good at water,
Exhibition guide of Flying Shaolin.
Lingnan is picturesque,
Friendship in the Asian Games is universal.
China firecrackers rose into the sky,
The blazing flame shines on the future.
Zanlvdao
The greenway is right in front of us,
Thousands of miles of trees are haunted.
Flowers and birds like company,
Stroll back to nature.
Guo commented that Huang Huahua, the governor of Guangdong Province, brought us a group of pictures and poems in addition to his busy government affairs. This surprised us a little. The benefits of this group of poems have been commented on above, so I won't go into details. But from the point of view of poetry, I don't admire ancient style and new poetry. Personally, I think Huang Huahua still needs to be tempered in leveling and fitting. In terms of phonology, I personally think that there are still many problems in Huang Huahua, so we should study more and improve our cultivation in this field. Huang Huahua's poems are worth mentioning and studied by poets. Here, I just make a simple comment without making a specific analysis.
Praise the opening ceremony of the Asian Games
With the city as the background and the river as the platform,
The fire tree and silver flowers are blooming all over the sky.
Fishing boats are good at water,
Exhibition guide of Flying Shaolin.
Lingnan is picturesque,
Friendship in the Asian Games is universal.
China firecrackers rose into the sky,
The blazing flame shines on the future.
Guo commented on "praising the opening ceremony of the Asian Games" in "Yellow Flowers": "Lingnan is picturesque and the friendship of the Asian Games is universal. China firecrackers go to heaven, and the flames shine in the future. " The word "sea" is rhyme, which is not in harmony with the flat rhyme of the whole poem. And here, I think it is also related to the author's deliberation.
Our Xiao Man?
The pearl river inkstone is full of clear waves,
Yunshan is twisted like a water mill.
There is a wonderful pen hanging around her waist.
Can the sky write geometry?
In Guo's comments on Huang Huahua's poems, the biggest feature is the imbalance of "ping". In "Zan Xiao Yao Man", "The Pearl River inkstone is full of clear waves, and Yunshan is twisted into a ink workshop." The words are vivid, but "Pearl River" is "flat" and the next sentence "Yunshan" is also "flat", so the so-called "flat" is out of balance. And "exquisite waist, can heaven write geometry?" Also committed the "flattening" disease.
Zanlvdao
The greenway is right in front of us,
Thousands of miles of trees are haunted.
Flowers and birds like company,
Stroll back to nature.
Guo commented that in Huang Huahua's poems, losing "stickiness" is also a normal feature. In "Praise the Greenway", "The Greenway is in front of us, and thousands of trees are lingering." And "flowers and birds are happy together, strolling back to nature." "Yin" and "grass" should be "flat and even", and the result is flat and even. The "flowers and plants" in poetry should not be difficult to modify, and the author needs to modify, temper and scrutinize more.