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My motherland,
You have a long history and splendid culture.
You come from ancient times,
You experienced a hundred schools of thought contending during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period.
You witnessed the heroic and cruel struggle between Chu and Khan.
You wrote Tang poetry, Song poetry, Yuan poetry, Ming and Qing novels,
You turned Xiao Zhuan into a regular script.
You unified the weights and measures.
You have trained countless heroes,
You have trained a group of artistic geniuses,
You have The Analects of Confucius, Historical Records, Si Ku Quan Shu and The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival. ...
You have Qin Terracotta Warriors, Potala Palace, Forbidden City and Jinggangshan. ...
My motherland,
You have a vast territory and magnificent mountains and rivers.
9.6 million square kilometers of land,
The Great Wall of Wan Li, the Himalayas,
There are rushing Yellow River and Yangtze River,
There are beautiful and rich Hainan, Taiwan Province Province,
There are vast grasslands and vast forests here.
You have more than 18 thousand kilometers of coastline
And a border line of more than 20,000 kilometers.
……
My motherland,
Your products are rich and outstanding.
You have rare treasures: giant panda, baiji, golden monkey and Siberian tiger. ...
There are rare species Metasequoia glyptostroboides, ginkgo biloba, cycad and ginseng. ...
You have inexhaustible coal, oil and natural gas. ...
You have Qin Shihuang,
You have Sun Yat-sen who restored China and established the Republic of China.
You have Mao Zedong, the savior of the China revolution,
You have Deng Xiaoping, the forerunner of reform and opening up;
You have a tireless teacher, Confucius,
You were demoted because you were pregnant, and you fell in love with Qu Yuan in Li Sao.
There is a brave soldier Lu Xun in your spiritual world.
……
My motherland,
Anyway,
You have a hardworking and kind people,
You have a peace-loving nature,
You have a tradition of self-improvement,
You have the character of defending your country.
……
Believe,
In the future, you will definitely:
Sing for a hundred days and sing to the world!
Taiwan Province Province] Huang's Chinatown
This is a port.
The local accent of China people.
There is no need to ask where the guests are from.
A bright yellowish complexion.
Yangzhou Yima
Chang 'an Quegong
Yan yuan became a kind of queen.
The wind is Xiao Sheng in history.
It sounds like
A song as soft as a dream
It is a castle that will never be stationed.
Twenty-four flowers from China gathered together.
You are a bluegrass that can take root without soil.
Drinking the cold of frost and snow
Bloom the fragrance of the East.
Unique flag image
The waves of the Yellow River always flow eastward to the sunny side.
This is an excellent relief.
Yangshao Ming yellow glaze in Yin Ruins.
Clouds will change.
Like an emissary from the Yumen Pass in the Western Heaven.
The sea is the Silk Road in your heart.
Lonely sails and distant shadows
The bright moon in my hometown is looking up at the magnetic field of Beidou.
You become a careful collector.
I was once poor and pawned my soft hands.
Just refused to pawn the furniture brought from the motherland.
Five thousand years is not an antique that can be auctioned casually.
But a magic lamp that can bring happiness.
I used my injured palm.
Dai wangshu
I used my injured palm.
Explore this vast land:
This corner has been reduced to ashes,
That corner is just blood and mud;
This lake should be my hometown,
(In spring, the embankment is full of flowers.
There is a strange smell when the tender willow branches are broken. )
I touched the coolness of seaweed and water;
The snow peaks in Changbai Mountain are freezing cold.
The water and sediment of the Yellow River slip through the fingers;
The rice fields in Jiangnan are so soft ... now there is only Artemisia scoparia;
Litchi flowers in Lingnan are lonely and withered,
There, I was immersed in the bitter water of the South China Sea without fishing boats. ...
Invisible palms swept the mountains without complaint,
Fingers stained with blood and ash, palms stained with darkness,
Only the far corner is still intact,
Warm, clear, firm and vigorous spring.
On it, I stroked it with my broken palm,
Like a lover's soft hair, a baby's milk.
I put all my strength in my palm.
Put it on, send love and all hope,
Because there is only the sun, no spring,
Will dispel the haze and bring Su Sheng,
Because it's the only place where we don't live like animals,
Die like an ant ... there, eternal China!
Motherland, my dear motherland.
Shu Ting
I am your shabby old waterwheel by the river.
Tired songs that have been spun for hundreds of years;
I am a miner's lamp blackened on your forehead,
Do what you do in the tunnel of history;
I am a withered ear of rice; It is a roadbed that has been in disrepair for a long time;
This is a barge on the beach.
Draw the rope deep
Pull into your shoulder;
-the motherland!
I'm poor,
I am sad.
I am your ancestor.
Painful hope,
It's a flying sleeve.
Flowers that never fall to the ground for thousands of years;
-the motherland!
I am your brand-new ideal,
Just broke free from the spider web of myth;
I am the germ of your ancient lotus under the snow;
I am your laughing vortex with tears hanging;
I am the newly painted white starting line;
This is crimson dawn.
It is sprayed;
-the motherland!
I am one billionth of you.
Is the sum of your 9.6 million square meters;
With your scarred breasts,
raise
Lost me, considerate me, boiling me;
And then from my flesh and blood
get
Yours; Abundance, your glory, your freedom;
-the motherland,
My dear motherland!
Shu Ting's motherland, my dear motherland.
I am your shabby old waterwheel by the river.
Tired songs that have been spun for hundreds of years;
I am a miner's lamp blackened on your forehead,
Do what you do in the tunnel of history;
I am a withered ear of rice; It is a roadbed that has been in disrepair for a long time;
This is a barge on the beach.
Draw the rope deep
Pull into your shoulder;
-the motherland!
I'm poor,
I am sad.
I am your ancestor.
Painful hope,
It's a flying sleeve.
Flowers that never fall to the ground for thousands of years;
-the motherland!
I am your brand-new ideal,
Just broke free from the spider web of myth;
I am the germ of your ancient lotus under the snow;
I am your laughing vortex with tears hanging;
I am the newly painted white starting line;
This is crimson dawn.
It is sprayed;
-the motherland!
I am one billionth of you.
Is the sum of your 9.6 million square meters;
With your scarred breasts,
raise
Lost me, considerate me, boiling me;
And then from my flesh and blood
get
Yours; Abundance, your glory, your freedom;
-the motherland,
My dear motherland!
This poem draws lessons from the circumferential sentence "I am Goya, ... I am ..." Goya is the work of the former Soviet poet Woznetsky, but it has a creative development. Circumferential sentences often appear in works that express strong feelings, and are best used to render sad and painful feelings. Shu Ting wrote about the relationship between "I" and the motherland. With this sentence pattern, the depth of pain and love increases. The first section is a reflection on the history of the motherland, and five groups of images are carefully selected to symbolize the backwardness, poverty and disaster of the motherland for thousands of years: the first four lines are steady and long, colorful, giving people a feeling of deep thought; The fifth and sixth lines are short and have no description; The last three lines are long, short and tight, showing emotional ups and downs, and the main body appears. The second section connects the preceding with the following, revealing that the flower of hope hidden in the soul of the Chinese nation has never withered. Although the disaster is heavy and the ideal lasts forever, it has not been realized so far. In this section, short sentences are followed by long sentences, and then the subject appears again. It seems that the meaning is still unfinished, and a deep regret is sprinkled on the pen. In the third section, I poured out my hopes and passions and used five groups of images to describe the face of the motherland in the historical turning point. Each image has its own unique meaning, and five groups are used together to form a metaphor, which strengthens the excited and enthusiastic mood and expresses the poet's happy mood. Before the fourth festival, the two lines used "one billion" and "9.6 million square meters" to form a contrast between small and big, indicating that "I" is a member of the motherland, but my chest contains the whole motherland. Then, raising "I" with breasts, from my flesh and blood, becomes a contrast, highlighting the blood-milk relationship between "I" and the motherland; Even confusion, deep thinking and boiling are the opposites of richness, glory and freedom, so that we can see the endless joys and sorrows. If the first three sections are about the relationship between "I" and the motherland, then the fourth section is about the relationship between the motherland and "I" in turn. Syntactic ambiguity is the expression of extreme emotions, which ends with a double call to the subject and reaches its climax.
There is not a word in the whole poem, which is described by images and runs through with emotions. The selected image is concise, vivid, unique and appropriate, and every word is closely related to the described scene. Lyricism is not an all-in-one view, but pays great attention to its ups and downs, from sadness and depression to joy and height, and from excitement to profundity, interwoven with a variety of complex and dignified feelings such as sadness, anxiety, fierceness, disappointment and hope, sigh and pursuit, which embodies the poet's unique euphemistic, deep, soft and meaningful lyric personality.
3 Reply: Appreciation of patriotic poems
Guo Moruo's Coal in the Furnace
Ah, my lady!
I will live up to your hospitality,
Don't let me down.
I'm doing this for the people I love.
Burn like this!
Ah, my lady!
You should know my predecessor.
Don't you think I am a reckless slave?
In the chest of my black slave,
As long as there is a heart like fire.
Ah, my lady!
I think my predecessor
Originally a useful pillar,
I've been buried alive for years,
Only now have I seen the light of day again.
Ah, my lady!
Ever since I saw the light again,
I often miss my hometown,
I'm doing this for the people I love.
Burn like this!
The poet compares himself to "coal in the furnace" by imitation, and compares his motherland to "my beloved" and "girl" by personification. The whole poem is based on this group of core images. The image of "coal in the furnace" has rich aesthetic implications: first, the burning of "coal in the furnace" symbolizes the poet's passion for sacrifice for the motherland; Secondly, the "heart like fire" under the black appearance of "coal in the furnace" symbolizes the humble status and great personality of the working people. "coal in the furnace" refers to both the "ego" and the "big ego"-the working people endorsed by the poet; Thirdly, the predecessor of "coal in the furnace" was originally a useful pillar. After being buried alive for many years, it finally "saw the light of day", symbolizing that the poet wanted to do something because he didn't want to live a mediocre life, and also symbolizing that the huge energy hidden among the working people to transform the world would be released. The image of "girl" implies that the poet's love for the motherland is as passionate as love, while the word "teenager" implies that the motherland was full of vitality in the May 4th Revolution. Guo Moruo said in Ten Years of Creation: "In my mind, China after the May 4th Movement is like a very young and enterprising girl. She is like my lover ... "Coal in the Furnace is a love song I gave her. This passage clearly illustrates the significance and role of metaphor in this poem.
The image of "coal in the furnace" combines the characteristics of melting, the temperament of "I" and the spirit of the times in one furnace; Writing about the burning of "coal" is to express the passion of "I", the feelings of the people and the feelings of the times. Artistic form and lyrical thinking fit perfectly. From the perspective of composition, the first section summarizes the ambition of patriotism, the second section focuses on expressing patriotism, the third section focuses on the ambition of patriotism, and the last section and the first section overlap and echo each other, pushing the whole poem to a climax. In terms of format and rhythm, there are 5 lines in each section, and the syllables in each line are basically the same; One, three and five elements rhyme, and one rhyme goes to the end; And each paragraph begins to sing with a kind, gentle and affectionate call of "Ah, my girl", which makes the melody beautiful. Poetry rises and falls with the rhythm of poetry and has a long lasting appeal.
Author: Qi Yuan replied to this remark in April 2005-13 17: 40.
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4 Reply: Appreciation of patriotic poems
Wen Yiduo's Song of the Sun (excerpt)
The sun-golden bird-the sun!
Let me ride you around the world every day,
You can visit your hometown once a day!
Wen Yiduo's Song of the Sun (excerpt)
This is a poem written by poets 192 to 1925 during their study in the United States. Because of the poet's eager yearning for the motherland, such a magical and magnificent imagination has been produced. In Qu Yuan's Li Sao, there is a saying: "I love jade if I want to take advantage of it." The magical imagination in ancient and modern romantic poems comes down in one continuous line. Qu Yuan only imagined driving a phoenix bird ("owl") in the universe, but the author of this poem actually wanted to sail on the sun, and his imagination was bolder than that of the ancients. (