The stolen pear core is three points white.
Borrow a wisp of plum blossom soul
-Lin Daiyu
Poetry Review: This is also about Bai Haitang. The author uses "stealing" and "borrowing" to write funny stories. In fact, it is as white and fragrant as pear flower, with charm and plum blossom spirit. You can see her cleverness by saying "Borrow a wisp of soul". (In fact, it is also written in the shape of Daiyu, with a white pear core and a plum blossom soul. It can also be understood that Daiyu's response to Baochai's satire on them made me pale with anger, and I borrowed a wisp of plum blossom soul to continue living. )
A flower is brighter only when it is pale.
Trouble makes jade seamless.
-Xue Baochai
Poetry Review: This is a poem about Bai Haitang. The author compares Bai Haitang with lightness to illustrate its whiteness. This is very consistent with the dialectical method. Glory is not necessarily red. Only when it is extremely white, will you think the flowers are more colorful. This is also in line with Xue Baochai's own temperament. She is very light, and she shows her beauty in it. There is no trace of jade when you are sad. Bai Haitang is compared to jade, while Bai Haitang is like jade, with dew on it, just like tears. Of course, if you are worried, there will be tears. Zhi Yanzhai said: This sentence is a bit like satirizing Er Yu (Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu). Two people worry too much, always crying. ("Sorrow marks jade") If "sorrow marks jade" refers to Daiyu, then "jade" should refer to Eryu. "Scar" can refer to Dai Yu's tears or hate Baoyu's heart. )
Also suitable for corners and pots.
-Shi Xiangyun
Poetry Comment: Her poems give people a feeling of natural language style, fresh and free and easy. This sentence is casual, saying that this flower is good, it looks good in a pot, and it looks good in a corner. This is very similar to her attitude towards life. At home, after her parents died, people treated her badly and had a hard time, and she could adapt. After coming to Jiafu, she changed to a good environment, and she was also suitable. A person can adapt to any place, which means that it is written in. (Write the corner first and then the washbasin, secretly writing that she will have a good life in the future. I think she should eventually marry Baoyu instead of becoming a brothel woman. This reminds me of what Jia said that Wang Xifeng is not a blessed person, because she only enjoys wealth, food and injustice. )
Write in the frost at the end of the performance
Quarrel is fragrant, singing to the moon.
-Lin Daiyu's "Yin Ju"
Poetry Review: The author "sings" with pen and mouth, while "chrysanthemum" is hidden in rhetoric. Both Frost and Moon are about autumn. "quarreling with the fragrance of the moon" is a good rap poem, so it is quarreling. Pretty girls are sweet when they quarrel, let alone rap a sweet sentence. If she had a chrysanthemum in her mouth, it would smell even better. Singing to the moon, written against the background, is really beautiful. Reading this sentence, I seem to see Daiyu singing and writing at the window with my own eyes. It's pathetic and lovely. )
Full of words is your own sorrow.
Who can untie Su Qiu's heart?
-Lin Daiyu's "Yin Ju"
Comment on Poetry: Guess and Autumn Heart are intertextual. The word "insipid" is not just insipid. "Plain resentment" is autumn resentment, and it is plain autumn. The meaning of reading chrysanthemums is all in it. There are many grievances in the poems I wrote about chrysanthemum. Self-pity and self-hatred are all over the paper Few people can understand my feelings. "Autumn Heart" means sadness. In these two poems, it seems that Cao Xueqin's voice is heard. He wrote "Dou Yun's author is stupid, but who can understand his taste" and "a bitter tear" with different objects. In Lin Daiyu's poems, I heard the echo of Cao Xueqin's poems. (Showing Daiyu's sentimental character. )
Xing Zhao Lian Yin Ke
In wangyou mountain villa
-Two Jade Flowers, Apricot Curtain in Sight, Daoxiang Village
Poetry Review: The style of writing is sophisticated, and the title is captured in the first couplet. The title is written in two sentences, and it is so natural to say it at once.
Lingbi goose shuier
Sang Yu Yan Ziliang
-Two Jade Flowers, Apricot Curtain in Sight, Daoxiang Village
Poetry Review: No verbs, no subject predicates, no adjectives, all nouns. This is a special syntax of poetry, but readers can imagine that there are geese playing in the water and dragonflies on the water, so don't talk about it. The same is true of the "throat elm swallow beam", where swallows pass through trees and make their nests with branches of mulberry and elm trees. All this depends on the reader's imagination. (Haha, who builds a nest? Whose nest? This was written by Daiyu with the help of Baoyu. I laughed at the ancients for not showing their feelings and even falling in love. )
A spring leek green
Shili daohuaxiang
-Two Jade Flowers, Apricot Curtain in Sight, Daoxiang Village
Poetry Review: The second couplet and the third couplet should be changed. The front is serious and the back is hilarious; Sit in the front solemnly and run at the back. The posture of the two couplets is different, the upper part is thick and the lower part is light. So this couplet is natural, and the appearance of the two sentences has changed with the above two sentences. (If "spring" here refers to the imperial concubine Yuan Chun, then "leek" should mean "long" or "nine". "Long green" can mean that the imperial concubine is always young. "Jiuqing" can mean that the emperor is always young, because the "Ninth Five-Year Supreme" represents the emperor, and the imperial concubine invites everyone to write poems to represent the emperor. As a scholar, Cao Xueqin should have integrity and should not be suspected of flattering others. But his sister is here, representing the emperor. With so many elders present, why not write a better poem? So it is reasonable to use Daiyu to help Baoyu cheat here. Both Daiyu and Baochai like Baoyu very much, but why didn't Baochai think of helping him? Didn't Baochai? I don't think so. What a clever person Baochai is. She is the second Wang Xifeng. She must have thought of it, but Baochai's character is like this, unlike Daiyu. It can be seen that Baochai's fate is fake. This also shows Cao Xueqin's cunning side. )
There was no hunger in the incident.
Why bother farming and weaving?
-Two Jade Flowers, Apricot Curtain in Sight, Daoxiang Village
Poetry Review: Daoxiang Village is a landscape in the Grand View Garden, not a real countryside. Nobody tills and darns here, but it's for Jia Yuanchun. She is not only a sister, but also a noble lady. She came out on behalf of the emperor, so she should praise the saints. No one yearns for a grand event. Now, no one is hungry to watch the Taiping Festival. "Why farm and weave?" Why farm and weave? You can't eat all the food. Therefore, Zhi Yanzhai's comment on writing is "take illusion as illusion, push the boat with the current, and do not lose the system."
The wine has not been opened, and the sentence has not been cut.
Seeking spring and wax in Penglai
-Jia Baoyu visited Miaoyu and begged Hongmei.
Poetry Review: This pronoun is well used. "Spring" is red and "wax" is plum. "Looking for spring and asking for wax" means asking for plum blossoms. "To Penglai" went to the fairyland, which means Qi Cuian, and the second jade is a monk. I wonder, is Secondjade Baoyu's fifth sister? Because this "spring seeking" spring can be said to refer to it in the names of all Baoyu's sisters, the word "wax" refers to both 65438+ February and plum blossom, which is homophonic. Whether it refers to the last month of the year or there is no word, it means that spring is gone, or it is late, so we have to ask around. And Baoyu's four sisters are: Yuan Chun, representing beginning of spring; Spring Festival stands for Spring Festival; Visiting spring means visiting spring; Cherishing spring means cherishing love or regretting spring. But spring is still there, not yet, which means there is still hope for his family. So will La Chun or Xi Chun be hidden? Haha, just kidding. )
Do not ask for dew in a bottle of toast.
Begging for Chang 'e's help.
-Jia Baoyu visited Miaoyu and begged Hongmei.
Poetry Review: Compare the second piece of jade to Guanyin Bodhisattva, and Master Guanyin holds a bottle filled with nectar. She is compared to Chang 'e, and Chang 'e lives alone from home. "Plum blossoms outside the threshold", plum blossoms outside the railing, and Eryu calls herself an outsider. It's just that here they point out the plum blossom of plum blossom, which is a reference. These four sentences come naturally, and they are all metaphors of Er Yu's identity. ("Dew in the bottle" implies going back there for tea)
Naturally, frost moths prefer cold.
-Shi Xiangyun
Poetry Review: "Frost E" is the goddess, and a "girl in green" is in charge of frost and snow. This place is more beautiful than Bai Haitang. Zhi Yanzhai said, "Don't lose the shape of the future". Shi Xiangyun's later marriage is very happy in people's eyes, and her husband is beautiful and talented. Suddenly, his marriage broke up. Does Shi Xiangyun really love cold? Although her fate is not very good, she is a very lively person. If you put a question mark on this sentence, it means that she is unwilling to be lonely and is a very talented person. )