Wen Yiduo of stagnant water
This is a backwater of despair,
The breeze doesn't move at all.
Why don't you throw more rubbish,
Throw out your leftovers.
Maybe copper will turn green into jade,
A few rusty peach petals on the tin can;
Let greasy weave a layer of Luo Qi,
Mold steamed some clouds for him.
Let the stagnant water ferment into a ditch of green wine,
Filled with pearly foam;
Little Pearl smiled and became a big one.
I was bitten by a flower mosquito who stole wine again.
A desperate backwater ditch,
And a little image.
If frogs can't stand loneliness,
Dead water again. It is singing.
This is a backwater of despair,
This is definitely not the beauty,
Why don't we leave it to ugliness to cultivate,
See what kind of world it has created.
Appreciation 1: Dead Water is the most important work of Mr. Wen Yiduo, a representative writer of Crescent School. Its brushwork is spicy and sophisticated, its conception is novel and delicate, its reality and reality set each other off, its language is elegant and rich, and its meaning is long, which has always been praised. However, there has always been controversy about the thoughts and feelings contained in it. Some people think that stagnant water shows a kind of disgust, hatred and disappointment to the dark reality, some people think that stagnant water expresses a desire to destroy the world and create a new life, and some people think that stagnant water conveys a bitter irony and ruthless curse to the old world and old things. All these, to name a few.
I think, in Dead Water, the poet's feelings can be said to be severe and cold mixed with fiery enthusiasm. For the former, it is easier to understand, because the poet is desperate for the symbol of reality? This is the attitude. For the latter, it is difficult to be perceived because the poet's enthusiasm is hidden in fierce irony and clever teasing. Wen Yiduo felt very wronged and people didn't understand his mind. He said in a letter to the student Zang Zaike's family. You keep saying that dead water writers are only good at skills. God, where is this grievance? ?
? I only feel that I am a volcano without eruption, and the fire is hurting me, but I still have no ability (that is, skill) to blast the earth's crust that imprisons me and radiate light and heat. Only a few friends who have been with me for a long time (like dream family) know that I have a fire, and they feel my fire in stagnant water. ? Wen Yiduo's heart? Unfair? , in my heart? Pain? , in my heart? Fire? What are they? It is not difficult to see from the above two dialogues. Unfair? It is because people mistakenly think that the skill of stagnant water is better than thought, and misunderstand the author's creative basis and performance theme. In this heart? Pain? What is the fire in your heart? You need to contact the content of "stagnant water" for specific analysis.
? Pain? And then what? Fire? They are mutually causal and closely related. Pain is the condensation of sadness, anger, pain, disappointment and despair. Prolonged suffering and pain will undoubtedly arouse the author's anger, and the fire and anxiety in his heart will only increase the author's struggle and struggle. "Dead Water" is full of unstoppable fire in the cold and harshness. I thought, what's in Still Water? Fire? It contains two meanings: first, it refers to the poet's anger at the darkness, ugliness, corruption and sin of reality; Second, it refers to the author's fiery enthusiasm for light, hope, struggle and rebirth. Why is there still a long way to go?
The whole poem consists of five sections, which are divided into three levels in turn. The first section is the first floor, the second to fourth sections are the second floor, and the fifth section is the third floor. The first and second stanzas are connected with each other, echoing each other from a distance, and the middle three stanzas are combined with movement and irony, which constitutes the main part of the whole poem. The first section? This is a ditch of desperate stagnant water,/the breeze doesn't move at all. ? Section 5? This is a backwater of despair. /This is by no means the beauty. ? Used twice? Despair? Come and give it? Dead water? Qualitative positioning not only shows? Dead water? The decadent, lifeless and hopeless situation also expresses the poet's feelings of hatred, indignation and despair. The next sentence, firmly, hit the floor, like a court ruling, undoubtedly sentenced the criminal to death as soon as the town wood rang. On this basis, make up a sum respectively? The breeze doesn't move at all? This is definitely not a beauty, okay? , or exaggerated description, or total denial, is like adding insult to injury, adding fuel to the fire, cursing and flogging, without mercy, that is, clapping your hands and cheering people up. The first two and the last two? How's it going? From point to surface, highly summarized, the former? Why don't you throw more rubbish/your leftovers? ? Fighting evil with evil and fighting poison with poison are full of grief and excitement after death and despair. Can we still see this backwater of despair? Isn't it a beauty? . It hides evil and practices evil, and it is sinful; It's alive and dying. The latter? Why not leave it to ugly to cultivate/see what world he has created? It is by no means that the author is disheartened and stands by, but desperate angry words. Since such a desperate backwater cannot be transformed and saved, and it has rotted to the bone and is full of evil, it is better to let nature take its course and let it perish. Extremely sharp language subtly conveys the author's profound hatred for the dark reality and reactionary warlords. ? See what world he created? The implication is that if ugliness is cultivated, it can only be ugly and ugly, and evil is evil. He just made the world smoky and dark. In the face of such a predictable society, where black and white are indistinguishable from right and wrong, justice is lacking and hope is hopeless, can you expect it to create one? What world? Coming?
Appreciation 2: Dead Water is one of Wen Yiduo's important representative works. After returning to China in 1925, the poet was furious with him when he witnessed the tragic situation of domestic warlords fighting and people living in poverty. Did this poem pass? Dead water? The multi-angle and multi-level composition of this symbolic image exposes and satirizes the corrupt old society and expresses the poet's despair, indignation and deep patriotic feelings towards the ugly reality. From the poem? A ditch of desperate stagnant water? It is a symbol of semi-feudal and semi-colonial old China. Poets catch stagnant water? Die? Write the dead silence and color first, and then write bubbles to highlight the stench and corruption of stagnant water. Despair? Emotional expression is incisive. Wen Yiduo is an advocate and pioneer of new poetry meter, and Dead Water is his introduction to new poetry meter? The most satisfactory experiment? . He stressed the need to have? Sammi？ The beauty of music, painting and architecture. The whole poem consists of 5 sections and 20 lines, each with 9 words, and the second and fourth lines of each section rhyme, with strong sense of rhythm and full of musical beauty. Many colorful words and images are used in the poem, and the ugliness of the content contrasts with the colorful words, which makes? Dead water? The more disgusting your face is. The whole poem consists of 5 sections, 4 lines in each section and 9 words in each line, which has both a sense of neatness in appearance and an inner sense of rhythm. "Dead Water" has made a serious and fruitful exploration for establishing the rhythm and form of new poetry.