"Desire" is an ordinary topic, which can be adjusted by local experts in the proposition group, and new ideas will emerge. This is manifested in two aspects. First, the materials are unique. Generally speaking, the materials of topic composition are all led out in neat and beautiful sentence patterns. Practice has proved that this kind of quotation can easily open students' minds, but it is difficult to connect with vivid real life. In view of this defect, the proposer broke the traditional way of preparing the topic and used a local news in Yiyang as a quotation, which marked the topic with the imprint of the times and regions. The second is to limit the style. As far as the senior high school entrance examination is concerned, it is extremely rare to restrict other styles except poetry. What is the proposer's intention? This is obviously influenced by the requirement of restricting the style of Hunan college entrance examination composition, which gives good guidance to the majority of candidates as soon as possible, and also puts forward the requirement for the majority of educators to standardize the style teaching as soon as possible. This question seems common, but it is not easy to write its characteristics. For the majority of candidates, we should pay attention to two issues:
First, we should examine the questions accurately and seek them extensively.
First of all, it must be clear that this is not a material composition. If the examinee simply unfolds the materials into a composition without thinking, or blindly introduces the materials into the composition, the writing will go into a misunderstanding. It should be understood that this material, like quotations in other essays, is only quotations that open our writing ideas. As the material says, our wish can be to face our parents or our classmates. It is not enough to think of these, but also to let our thinking wings fly through the question "What do you think after reading the above materials?" If you can pay attention to nature, express your desire to care for and care for nature; Focus on history and tell your unusual complex with historical figures; You can focus on the teacher and convey your spiritual desire to change the status quo of your life; You can even focus on birds and fish to express your true thoughts of pursuing happiness and longing for freedom. Different angles, the article has a brilliant foundation.
Second, the theme should be beautiful and innovative.
Everyone has many dreams and many wishes, but not all these wishes can be the theme of writing. You know, some of these wishes come from material enjoyment and some from spiritual pursuit; Some people are selfish, others are noble. Different choices reflect candidates' different ideological materials and spiritual realm. Therefore, choosing a positive and healthy theme is the requirement of the proposer for every candidate. How can I make my article different? The teacher gave you three suggestions. First, the angle should be small, the desire can be small, but the content must be innovative. Such as writing "I really want to hold your hand", writing about my concern for my elderly grandparents, hoping to bring them happiness and happiness with my warm little hands. For junior high school students, we should try our best to avoid falling into the false sky. Second, the plot should be clever, you know, only after suffering or setbacks, the inner desire will become strong. If you are shocked by the pollution of the environment, you will have a good wish to keep the green mountains and green waters; It is because of setbacks that I realized the greatness of my parents, so I had the idea of saying "thank you" to my parents. In short, the more tortuous the plot, the more attractive the content. The third is sincere feelings. Description is a very important writing method of this kind of article, which mainly reflects the inner pursuit. It is necessary to mobilize various description methods such as action, language, portrait and scenery to write vividly. Pay attention to these points, the article will be different.
Exhibition of outstanding works 1
Where's my applause?
I have no pretty face, no enviable figure, no dazzling dance steps and no touching voice. Instead, I only have that ordinary, even a little ugly face, a short man of 1.6 meters. In people's eyes, I have almost no advantages and no capital to be proud of.
I am unknown, and I haven't been applauded by anyone. I seem to have disappeared in this group, and no one seems to notice my existence. How I long for your approval, how I want to hear your applause, but no, not at all. I still remember that New Year's Day party, when the host reported my student number, almost everyone did not remember the existence of such a classmate-yes, I was selected for a talent show.
In fact, I have been looking forward to this moment for a long time and have been preparing for it for a long time. I look forward to giving a perfect performance to this familiar and unfamiliar group. How I long for your applause! For this moment, I read Li Bai's "Since God has given talents, let them be employed!"! , spin one thousand silver, all come back! "In the morning, Wang Wei's" moonlight in the pine forest, crystal stone in the stream ". How I look forward to that eloquent effect. I still clearly remember that my heart seemed to jump out when I was holding a crumpled manuscript and preparing to recite it to everyone. I can hardly restrain my inner excitement, so that I can hardly see what is written on the beating manuscript paper. I finished reciting this poem with the most lyrical voice and gentle rhythm in my life.
When I finished reading the last word, I expected thunderous applause. However, there was no sound at all. I didn't hear your applause. What I see is not your encouraging eyes, but your mocking and contemptuous eyes. I stayed there quietly, waiting for you to kick me off the stage. Really, no one has ever applauded me, and there is no tendency to applaud. In this gathering place, I really don't know where my applause is.
Give me a little applause! In fact, I also have many advantages: I write well and draw well, but no one noticed these, and no one called me when I published the blackboard newspaper. Everyone has his own advantages and disadvantages. I don't hate it when you see my shortcomings, but please look at my other side. Please give me a round of applause!
short review
We write articles not to show off our literary talent, nor to make up stories wholeheartedly. I write my heart by hand, and my heart tells my feelings, which has become a new standard for judging composition in the examination room. This article has no unique angle, no prominent language and no plot that makes people cry. But when we read the stories of the flower season full of joy and interest, who can laugh when we come into contact with these words? Yes, the heaviness between the lines will weigh on every reader's mind. True expression is the basis of the success of this paper.
Exhibition of Excellent Works II
There is a sweet dream in my heart
I'm not afraid to tell you, but my wish is a little special. People worship Shakespeare, Newton and Darwin ... but I just admire Confucius. I want to say proudly to you: "Tomorrow, I want to be a teacher, especially a composition teacher!" " "
In my imagination, I walked into the classroom wearing two sets of ancient costumes. The students looked at me in surprise and talked about it. I'll be silent for two minutes, let everyone express their opinions, and then get down to business: "It is said that Dong Shi is his neighbor. She imitated Xi's illness and thought she was beautiful, but she was laughed at by others, so she had the allusion of "learning from the East works". Today's essay topic is "My opinion on the effectiveness of Dong Shi". " As soon as the words were spoken, I found that my classmates' joy suddenly lost a lot. Then I said, "Why don't we make up a story first, and then put on the clothes prepared by the teacher to perform a paragraph?"
The audience burst into laughter. However, I can see that the laughter is still full of enthusiasm and the classroom atmosphere is beginning to come alive again. As the saying goes, chew it carefully and feed it to students spoonfuls, and they may not be interested; If I was the only one in the classroom shouting at the top of my lungs, they would definitely shout, "Stop monologuing!" " "I want to give my students a space to develop themselves, let them experience the setbacks in life, think about the philosophy of life and feel the beauty of life. Look, two students stepped onto the platform. They dressed in ancient costumes and performed just right!
I have too many ideas. In spring, I will take my students to the fields to see red flowers and green grass and feel the poetry of nature; In summer, I will guide everyone to talk about their good wishes on a starry night; In autumn, I will taste the loneliness and sadness of literati with you in the poem "Leaves fall like waterfalls, but I see the long river always rolling forward"; In winter, I will look for my parents' touching feelings in the beautiful back of Mr. Zhu Ziqing.
You may not believe that the composition in our class is very famous. That simple and honest child wrote an article so simple that you burst into tears; The poem written by that lyrical child is so beautiful that your thoughts fly; The storyteller who makes up stories is so clever that you are full of praise ... the world is so beautiful.
My friend, my wish may be a little special. But I think, as long as there is a dream in my heart, simple seeds can also produce the most beautiful flowers in the world. Look, I must be a different composition teacher tomorrow!
short review
A good article is neither a story nor a language. You know, those springs of life flowing around us are the source of our writing. Judging from the marking scene, this kind of masterpiece of true love, which reflects one's own life experience, is more and more welcomed by teachers, and the score is often very high. This paper falls into this category. Why does the author want to be a teacher and a composition teacher? Maybe she is afraid of silence in the composition class, maybe she can't bear to see students worry about a composition, or maybe she wants to wake up the teacher's monologue with her dreams in this era of reform. The real experience of life gives candidates the passion to write. The success of this article tells us that ordinary life can also dig out wonderful themes.