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my Chinese teacher

Look, this middle-aged teacher wearing a black gabardine tunic suit, black wide-brimmed glasses and a smile is our respected Chinese teacher, Miss Chen. Teacher Chen is knowledgeable and has rich teaching experience. He is always so relaxed, lively, lively and interesting in class. We especially like listening to his composition class. His lectures are always so funny, humorous and fascinating that we are all interested. We unconsciously fell in love with composition and gradually understood the "mystery" of writing.

Ding, the bell rang, and this section is a composition class. Teacher Chen strode into the classroom. Today, he is very excited. He went to the podium, smiled and said, "Students, I am very happy today. Do you know why I am happy? " We all smiled and shook our heads. Teacher Chen went on to say, "I went to the bazaar this morning and bought two old hens for one yuan." Do you think you can be unhappy? " ?

The students burst into laughter, and Zhang Jin laughed so hard that he couldn't even keep his waist straight. I think: Teacher Chen must be joking again. But teacher Chen said solemnly, "Really, I never lie. If you don't believe me, I will read it to you. " After that, he picked up a composition book and read it aloud. It turned out that a classmate wrote in his composition that he and his father went to the bazaar to buy chickens, and his father only paid one yuan for two big fat hens. The students suddenly realized that Mr. Chen was criticizing some students for making up their compositions regardless of the facts. Teacher Chen said: "No matter how vivid your description is and how rich your words are, an untrue article is meaningless and not a good composition." I think I often make this mistake. For example, when I used to write an autumn outing, I always wrote "Spring is beautiful, and a hundred flowers are blooming ..." After that, students always have to ponder carefully and understand deeply. What if they don't understand Naishi? ? Hi, does your thumb hurt? Br> Another composition class. Today, Mr. Chen, who has always been affable, suddenly dragged Jun Chen out of the door. We were all too scared to breathe. I didn't expect Mr. Chen to close the door and turn around and say with a smile, "Students, don't be nervous. Now I want to test your eyesight. " Are you familiar with Jun Chen? ""familiar! " The students answered in unison. Teacher Chen then asked everyone, "What color and style clothes do you think Jun Chen is wearing today? Are you wearing leather shoes, cloth shoes or running shoes? " Everyone was shocked by this question and no one said a word. After a while, Mr. Chen called Jun Chen into the classroom before we looked at him: he was wearing a sky-blue zipper shirt. Under the sea blue trousers, I wore a pair of liberation shoes. Teacher Chen smiled and said to us, "This is called careful observation. "Then I told a few short stories that I carefully observed, and then arranged for us to observe the campus garden. This time we looked more carefully. Every kind of flowers and plants have been deeply observed, from their colors to shapes, living habits and laws, and some people even consulted relevant reference books. Everyone wrote a better composition this time. Through this incident, we know that only careful observation can make a good composition.

This is how Mr. Chen guides our study and composition. You said, we have such an excellent Chinese teacher, can we not be happy? How can I not have a strong interest in writing?

Teacher's comments

In My Chinese Teacher, the author describes two composition classes in detail. Through these two typical events, Mr. Chen's vivid teaching style is reflected, which is picturesque. When we write about people and reflect their characteristics, we should choose a clever angle. By describing Mr. Chen's behavior and language in the classroom, the author successfully shaped the image of a teacher from the perspective of students.

Little musician

My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates!

Once, Zhao and I went to play, and Meng Yao was practicing playing the erhu. She said, "Why don't you come and listen to me play the erhu?" We agreed, sitting on the sofa, listening and watching. I saw that her left hand plucked the strings, her right hand drew the bow, and her feet kept beating on the ground, which made her look so devoted and emotional. She said: "I must win the championship when I attend the art festival." Zhang Mengyao played again and again, and we were deeply attracted.

On the day of the festival, I ran backstage to deliver ice cream to Zhang Mengyao. She said, "You eat, I don't have time." I have to eat by myself. I ate and said to Meng Yao, "Meng Yao, I wish you success!" "She said quickly," thank you. "It's Meng Yao's turn. She walked onto the stage, bowed to the audience, then sat in a chair and played a piece of music-"Bright Walk". Her performance was beautiful. The audience listened carefully, and I was fascinated, as if I had returned to the days of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression and fought bloody battles with the anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians. While I was immersed in the music, a loud "I" ended the whole music. Suddenly, there was warm applause from the audience, and teachers and classmates congratulated her on her excellent performance.

A few days later, the teacher announced that Zhang Mengyao had won the first prize in the instrumental competition of the festival. Hearing this exciting relief, Meng Yao burst into tears with excitement. She knows that this is the result of her years of hard training, and years of sweat have not been in vain, and finally won glory for the school. To this end, she felt extremely proud and proud. Ah, Zhang Mengyao, I admire you. You are our pride!

Li Jianying hero test pilot

In this 16 second, maybe you are drinking coke, maybe you are chewing a hamburger. But this hero must make one choice after another in this short 16 second, about people and life. Perhaps every hero regards his life as insignificant, so he is not afraid to sacrifice for the people, others and the country.

Then tell me that the key choice at that time may involve his family, because he gave up his family and his life in order to be with more people. )

Young soldiers who died trying to save drowning people in Meng Xiangbin.

How deep the water can be and how long life can be. Many people ask whether it is worth exchanging the life of a soldier for the life of a suicidal woman. In fact, what we should ask is whether life is worth giving up. Many, many people will be sad for your departure, many, many people will be full of admiration for your sacrifice, and perhaps more and more people will choose to stay because of this and understand the value of life. The soldier's daughter has been calling her father home by the river. I’m going home. Don't cry, mom. Everyone will be sad about it. Maybe in the little girl's heart, dad just fell asleep, sleeping in the cold lake. The red leather shoes that my father originally wanted to buy for the little girl have become red shoes bought by more kind people, who are just thinking about this great soldier.