1. About the author
Lu Li (19 14- 1999), formerly known as Xu Tudi, is a famous writer such as Lu Jia and Xu. His poems are full of philosophy and beautiful style, and he is an outstanding representative of "July Poetry School" in China. He was tortured by the so-called "Hu Feng counter-revolutionary case" for more than 20 years. After rehabilitation, he served as the vice chairman of Tianjin Federation of Literary and Art Circles, the chairman of Writers Association and the fourth director of Chinese Writers Association. Since 1932, his works have been published one after another, including Poems When I Wake Up, Songs of Childhood, Collection of Goose Feathers, Selected Poems of Li Lu and so on.
2. Problem solving: This is a modern poem. By describing the illusion of moonlight, the poet expresses the poet's inner yearning for dawn and ardent expectation for light (this poem was written in China and was still in the difficult stage of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's period).
3. Students recite the original poem repeatedly and mark their understanding of the poem in the book.
4. Poetry structure analysis: Section 1: Looking forward to the end of the new curriculum.
Section 2: Longing for the Dawn
Part III: Back to reality
Step 5 enjoy the first part
The first verse of this poem has only three lines and eighteen words. The first sentence is an objective narrative, and the word "moonlight flows into the threshold" and "flow" is dynamic, which makes a still picture lively and interesting. The second sentence "I thought it was sunshine" is an illusion. The sunshine here is a pun, which refers to the sunshine in reality and also expresses the poet's inner pursuit of light. The third sentence, "open door or at night", is a correction to the illusion, but it is also quite meaningful. Because the poet wrote this poem because China was still in the hard stage of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's period at that time, although he was in Yan 'an and the whole of China was still in darkness, this sentence was also the poet's true feeling. In the eighteen words in this paragraph, the poet has rich connotations. This is the artistic charm of concise language.
6. Section II Appreciation
The word "as if" in the second section is not a clear concept, but a feeling of "as if", but it is used in the right place here. It seems that the wind moved the bowstring of the moon, so he heard the sound of dawn. This is the poet's imagination. If it is realistic, it is incredible, because "as if" is a reasonable display of imagination. It can be seen that the accurate use of words is very important to enhance the artistic expression of poetry.
7. Section III Appreciation
In the last sentence of the poem, "the river bank presses the mountain shadow" and "the stars" flow through the wilderness. The word "flow" in poetry is a high combination of refinement and accuracy.
This poem is also rich and profound. Poetry creates a specific artistic conception through concise and accurate language, which makes readers feel the poet's rich and sensitive inner world and unspeakable ideological connotation.
8. Appreciate the poem "Quiet and Deep Artistic Conception".
(1) What sentences impressed you the most after reading this poem? Why?
(2) "Moonlight flows into the threshold/I thought it was sunshine/opening the door, or late at night." What do you think is a good word in the first poem about the illusion caused by moonlight? Tell me your understanding.
Clear: The first verse of this poem has only three lines and eighteen words. The first sentence is an objective narrative. The word "moonlight flows into the threshold" and "flow" is the poet's subjective feeling. The use of the word "flow" makes the picture full of motion and makes a picture of a still moon shining on the earth vivid and interesting. The second sentence of the poem "I thought it was sunshine" may be the poet's momentary illusion. Moonlight is literally the "sunshine" in reality, which actually expresses the author's ardent expectation for light. The third sentence of the poem, "Open the door, it's still late at night", is a correction to the illusion, but it is also quite meaningful (because the poet was still in the hard stage of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression when he wrote this poem), which is a real feeling of reality on another level.
(3) In the third section, I wrote a poem about the scenery I saw in the moonlight. Can you describe the artistic conception in accurate and beautiful language? Give it a try.
The river bank was bent by the shadow of the mountain.
A star flows through the wilderness.
I feel that everything is still asleep.
Only I was the first person to wake up.
Qing: The poet faced the earth alone and felt that he was the first person to wake up. The use of the word "feeling" here gives this poem a deeper meaning: the poet is the most sensitive person to the times and the one who is most eager to look forward to the dawn. The poet here doesn't mean himself, at least not just himself. At that time, it was still in a difficult stage in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression. The poet lived in the land of freedom and endured the baptism of battle, but the whole of China was still in darkness. In the last two poems, the author hopes to find that the night after dawn is still deep, which is calm and mature reason.