Selected Comments on Contemporary Poets' Works

Evaluation 1

Most of the authors in the book are young and happy. From this point of view, China's poetry is no longer an era full of white hair, but an era full of youth has arrived.

After reading the anthology, I can't help but think of a poem: "A word is natural and eternal, and luxury is true."

I like this collection of poems because of its poetic beauty, artistic conception and melody. It feels relaxed and pleasant to read, catchy, giving people a harmonious and beautiful enjoyment, an extraordinary tranquility.

Fu Zhi, the king of Qing Dynasty, once said, "Scholars are complacent with their feelings". Therefore, I just want to talk about my feelings from the perspective of reading and appreciation.

First, the poem is permeated with an ethereal and lofty outlook on life and the unity of things and me.

Most authors like mountains and rivers, and they are all degenerate. On the basis of deep silence, lush vegetation and heavy love, he wrote many thrilling poems. From the poem, I have an insight into the poet's true heart, his complete liberation from all bondage, his happiness of being integrated with nature, and his interest in mountains and forests.

For example, Mang Huang, the editor-in-chief of this book and a famous young poet, wrote A Journey to the Yellow Crane Tower:

"Just out of the central plains, and the Yellow Crane Tower. The Yangtze River carries the Hanshui River and rolls in the sky. " It reveals a spirit of freedom and heroism. From it, I realized why he chose the name "Landscape Enlightenment".

In the vast universe, besides the sky, the earth, the sun, the moon and the stars, mountains and rivers can be described as great realms. How clear and carefree it is to realize the Tao from mountains and rivers! The poet's vision and mind. It can also be said that everything in the world is included. Wandering in the mountains and rivers, the poet is very natural and unrestrained, fully enjoying the peace and comfort endowed by nature. Only by wandering freely and crossing time and space can he walk out of a clear and distant road of poetry.

Another example is the wild flowers in Mang Huang:

There are many species in Jiangnan.

Green is among the rocks, and the smoke village is unfamiliar.

Wan Li floats with the wind, leaving a thousand peaks in every rain.

No desire to compete for the roster, the earth is accompanied by crane farmers.

Aren't these poems the author's own inner interpretation? We can read the poet's indifference to worldly fame and love for nature. Even fleeting things can be captured and snapped into sentences with the poet's keen eyes and unique perspective, which makes people feel floating out of the dust.

Second, there is a kind of detachment and non-stickiness.

Reading Su Xinhe's "The Map of Clouds and Clouds in 's Daofu Mountain": The smoke is like a hidden fairy, and the strange peak is in the sky. Everyone knows that Fan Tu is small and the mountains are in the palm of his hand.

Give people a realm of life that transcends dust and integrates things with me. As Wang Guowei said in the Qing Dynasty's "Words on Earth": "Love words are the heaviest. If there is a realm, it will be a family. "

Third, it has a strong flavor of the times.

Whether expressing ambition or emotion, recalling the past or writing about scenery, it is full of passion, and there seems to be a hot heart beating between the lines & no; .

For example, Meng Fancang's Peasant Autumn Night:

"Busy to the setting sun, take time to get together after dinner.

The moon is now when we open your window, across the garden and fields, and the stars are in Summer.

Cool brother has three glasses of wine and his wife has two bowls of fragrant tea.

Weng Wei exchanges new information, and the evening breeze sends laughter flowers. "

Fourth, there is a higher realm of life.

For example, Zhu Wen's "Dream in Tsinghua" and "Ode to Yang Shanzhou, a hero in Yunling" are powerful poems, which are really like a wisp of breeze, a clear spring and a flame, as if to see a young college student with boiling blood standing in front of us, and as if to see an ardent heart flashing in front of us. From it, we can learn that the poet is simple, clear, simple and kind, with infinite love for the motherland and heroes, and infinite affection for the people and the campus.

Fifth, natural carving, clear water out of hibiscus, folded sentences like pearls.

For example, Mang Huang said, "Birds are happy with the clouds, and the blue waves are flowing every day." -

"Write 3,000 poems and invite the bright moon to accompany my heart." -

"Cloud and water are still far away, and friends are still old." -

For example, Xiang Tianqi's Acacia. Think more ":

"When it is difficult to leave, the red candle is short and the purple smoke is long."

Huang's "It's easy to stand and talk";

"I don't seek the truth of the world. Xie Qing harvested my old friend in autumn."

Wang Lili's Partridge Sky. New Year's Speech: "Qing Xuan's unique pillow makes it difficult to write a dream." Yang Yang's "The Feeling of Being a Guest": "Let's get drunk and have some sake, and wait and see."

Meng's cold;

"Ruthless in Lengyue, a line of heaven and earth, a few degrees in the Spring and Autumn Period. Immersed in the moonlight, frozen on the other side of the river, just think that the middle of the river is white. The phoenix tree leaves hit the branches and the drizzle passed through the house. "

Zhang Jinying's memory of Jiangnan;

"Autumn wind, melancholy. Looking at the horizon, there is nowhere to be found, saying that there is no trace of poverty. Since then, I have closed my heart. "

Xiang Tianqi's Acacia. Think more ":"

Autumn sounds fall to the north, and the wine in the small building is cold. On second thought, the lone goose licked the east window.

When it is difficult to leave, the red candle is short and the purple smoke is long. Tianya Qiu Meng is still in Xiangjiang River. "

Chewing these poems repeatedly, we can see that they are unconventional in language or conception, giving people a unique and strong sense of novelty and strangeness. At the same time, its word-formation method not only inherits the predecessors, but also creates a new way. In a word, through these vivid languages, we can have a deeper insight into the poet's association and ingenious conception, so as to transcend the literal meaning of words and create a novel emotional atmosphere and mysterious space-time structure with the help of imaginative connections. Make poetry release more abundant internal energy, thus enhancing the aesthetic feeling of poetry beyond time and space. This shows that the author dares to explore the scientific spirit on the road of poetics, just as the former sages said: all day long, tired.

From his poems, it is not difficult to see the poet's profound cultivation of China's traditional poems, as well as his ability to master and innovate poetic rhyme. At the same time, he can realize that poets can stick to the purity of their hearts, seek true knowledge and make unremitting efforts to seek literature to return to their homes no matter when, where and under what circumstances. It is remarkable and awe-inspiring.

Evaluation 2

First, words have substance and a lot of sustenance.

The ancients said: Poetry expresses ambition and praises love. Choose the works selected in the collection, the works moaning without illness, and savor every poem carefully, all of which have sustenance.

For example, Mang Huang's Water Tone: Wind: "I am a carefree guest, smiling at the sky under the moon. Who were you ashamed of? Dance and fly. No matter how difficult the journey is, Wuyue composes music at will and flies everywhere. Enjoy being drunk in the world, not afraid of the night. Leading the four seasons, drizzling clouds are crazy. Be gentle and watch me dress skillfully. Time also pushes the waves and soothes the world, but it is better than nine days. Even if you are not an official, you must sweep away the autumn frost. " The recitation of things expresses the hardships I have experienced on the road of life, and at the same time, I have a hunch about the twists and turns of the future road of life.

Dai Gucheng's imagination of the Year of the Tiger: "The jade tiger sings like a new world, and the Taurus is wide. Swallows dance in front of the hall, and Yuanyang measures the water temperature in the lake. Exquisite calligraphy, concentrate on painting Yangchun. People's security is particularly important, and Guotai needs the rich and the poor. " After eulogizing the peace of the prosperous times, he expressed his hope for the current excellent situation.

Lei's Emotion: "In my spare time, I sit on Lu 'an and listen to cicadas and look at some original boats in the lake. Slow dance Ling Bo Shuyu sleeve, gently shake feathers and play Jiao Luan. The hot sun roasted the farmer's back, and the old sweat soaked Miss Sang. The same is passed on to future generations, and some people try to be idle. " Pay attention to things, worry and think about the uneven social distribution and wealth.

Jiang Linman's Young Mermaid Mochow: "Last night, the rain was urgent, the spring thunder was late, and the wind was crazy. The soul leads to more worries in Yuzhou, and there is no way for mountains and rivers to be suspicious, and there is another village. He who sees through fame and fortune is as thin as paper and can't understand my ambition. Even if there is a river in spring, men will laugh at it. " Paying tribute to things expresses the author's indifference to fame and fortune.

Pan Longwen's Mid-Autumn Festival: "Every Mid-Autumn Festival, there must be poems. Today's dinner is dedicated to new words. Three years of marriage is more loving, and half a pair of children are still moist. Work is smooth, and life is smooth when the moon is full. I am happy for the prosperity of the world, and I hope all families will share it. " Ode to the Mid-Autumn Festival is about family harmony and reunion, and it is expected that thousands of families in Qian Qian will do the same.

Li Zhiyong's bamboo ode;

resign oneself to one's fate

Can't resist the aura.

Out-of-body experience of flute

The soul of the moon is shining with tears.

God of the earth gave it to me.

Tall and thin gentleman image

With mottled blood and tears

As a penholder for discovering the Spring and Autumn Period

Look at one basket after another

A weak and tenacious reader

Against the tide of history

They use me to wash it.

Unyielding thoughts

Use it to swing.

Integrity program in my name!

Singing bamboo expresses the ambition of life and the tenacity of pursuing goals.

Zhang Chuan's Untitled: "Galloping in rivers and lakes for decades, mountains and heavy waters have no way to answer doubts, and a bright future has turned into another village. Flowers bloom and fall in spring and autumn, and the stars move to the sun and the moon.

It is difficult to dance without a good sword, but there is always no good friend to help you with three punches. If you get pregnant again, you'll be old. You've already changed your hair. "Write the ups and downs of the experience, lamenting the ever-changing time, thus revealing the inner helplessness and the shortness of life.

Second, vivid image and novel language.

For example, Mang Huang's "Step Rhyme" and "Xin Mao Kai New Year Chorus": "Spring Festival couplets change the old symbols, and the river map in Wan Li is dry. Whoever gets the scripture, SiLao will write a short message. Three points under the ground can lift the tripod, and the sky is nine times as high as scary. Haisheng Yueming Island hangs outside, east of Hideteru. "

The author's admiration for the four great poets gave birth to vivid and wonderful sentences, thus expressing the author's admiration for the talent and prestige of the four great poets.

Dai Gucheng's "Drunk Sleeping in Jiangyang": "The waves in the long river are rough and moist, and the small kettle is full of coquettish. Wenze Mountain in Dongpo is beautiful, and Taibai's poems are rich. The old cellar is mellow and kind, and the beautiful branches are sweet and hardworking. Friends and friends get together today and get drunk in Jiangyang wine. " The author is good at managing images. Because the image is vivid, the language of the poem is naturally new, which depicts the intoxication and comfort of the author swimming in the poem and gathering with poetry friends.

Lei's "A Midsummer Night Shower": "Lightning shakes the sky and the rain is thicker. In the evening, the rosy clouds are getting lighter, and the cicadas are drunk. " There are many colorful images of thunder and lightning, sky, Pinus sylvestris var. mongolica, sunset glow, Xia Hong, warbler, cicada and fisherman. As a result, four vivid poems came into being, and a vivid midsummer shower scene appeared before our eyes.

Jiang Linman's Dream, Working in the Countryside: "Looking back on middle school life, I remember working in the countryside best. Picking new tea before tomorrow, sweating like a pig. Singing, laughing, going to the countryside in the first month. " Because of the vivid images of life, countryside, Ming Dynasty, fresh tea, dog days, sweat and rain, the language in the poem is new.

Pan Longwen's self-deprecating poem: "Teenagers don't know the world, so they can sell melons with lofty ideals. Everything is like a wall, and watching the sky is like a frog at the bottom of a well. I am ashamed to say that I am a hero in all directions, and I am a full man. Looking back at the sunset, Qingshan is still waiting for the sunset. " The images of teenagers, Tianya, melons, grass, frogs, heroes and men are all vivid, so the language of the poem is also very fresh, which deepens our understanding and experience of the author's poem.

Li Zhiyong's discrimination machine;

"Eaves evoke the moon.

The stone steps took Meiying away.

I am picking flowers in front of the Buddha.

But you smile in the world of mortals.

Hesitate at Xiao Xuan's window.

Peep into your mirror.

Waterfall bun

Wet me in the breeze

Slightly bulging clothes

Your lotus steps curl

Crush the hidden moon in that place

Your smile is Ying Ying.

Shake off my pillow and remove the frost.

Dojo leading to the heart

Who blew the whistle on drunken Yu Di?

Buddha in the eyes

I'm drunk. I'm like you. "

Windows, cornices, stone steps, plum blossom, Buddha, Xiao Xuan, scenery, bun, clothes, hidden moon, defrosting, Dojo, Yu Di and other vivid images. Form vivid sentences. Thereby enhancing the appeal of poetry.

Third, poetry has realm and many epigrams.

Wang Guowei, a scholar in the Qing Dynasty, wrote in Ci on Earth: "Ci takes the realm as the top. If there is a realm, it will be self-contained and have its own famous sentences. "

In Mang Huang's poem, "The Milky Way has fallen three times, and the ancient roads have merged" (Tiantangzhai). "The gulls return at dusk and cross the moon" (occasionally in summer). "Three points under the ground can lift the tripod, and the sky is high and nine scary and can cross the weeds" (step rhyme "Xin Mao Kai New Year Chorus"). The author is broad-minded, broad-minded, poetic and imaginative, so the fine sentences are multiplied.

On behalf of Gucheng, "Taigong catches fish from Wei River, Zhuge Maolu waves a feather fan" (Heaven rewards diligence), and "The turbid waters of the two rivers play a clear rhyme, and thousands of clouds flow in Xia Zi" (Autumn rhyme). French allusions are freely used, vivid and handy.

Lei's "The withered lotus has broken the lotus dream, and the cicada is impetuous. Why guess again?" (Qiu Wang) "Fossils are buried in Gu Shan, and now a beautiful girl is born in the canyon" (Travel Notes of Qingjiang River). The combination of reality and reality is vivid, so the sentence of Jingjing arises spontaneously.

Pan Longwen's "Once a magpie drinks a cup of tea, it takes ten years to get sick". "Jianghan nebula is dark at the beginning, and the wind and rain in Dongting are rustling" (I was pregnant at the beginning of the twentieth century). "The moon and the breeze blow the green fields, and the mountains and rivers meet beautiful scenery." "Only when Tsinghua paints ancient poems can he learn Chinese and foreign spirits".

Flowing clouds, whimsy, and witty remarks.

Li Zhiyong's "Entrusting the crystal soul to the pale moonlight" (tears of the morning) and "Let this lush poem stand on tiptoe hand in hand to see another spring" (snow) are personified incisively and vividly, with a lofty style.

In Zhang Chuan, "A few maple leaves are sad, and a hair cone is lonely" (autumn night), "The maple leaves in Guanshan burn for ages, and the desert Shahe is flooded with several rets" (Chongyang climbs high). Deep and steep, clear and delicate.

There are many sentences of scenery in the work, so it is impossible to list them all. The ancients said that poetry is not good enough. With my own experience of the works, I can only catch the wind and catch the shadows, and it is difficult to "flow freely" at once (Su Shi's Thank You Teacher).

To sum up, several authors, literary and romantic, have their own merits. Mang Huang's poems are far-reaching and ethereal, but since ancient times, his poems are gentle and sincere, Lei's poems are rich and colorful, Jiang Linman's poems are refined and tasteful, Pan Longwen's poems are romantic, his poems are vigorous and powerful, and his poems are naturally sparse and crazy. So it is difficult for me to interpret perfection in such a short time. Only by letting readers use their artistic imagination according to the images provided by the author in the book and their own life experience can they enjoy beauty. I believe this book will lead readers into a green spiritual home. Let every reader enjoy the infinite scenery.