Appreciation of the poem "Remembering Grandma"

? Miss grandma.-dad

Grandma sang Beijing opera when she was young.

Grandma's clothes

It's better than anything my mother cooked for me during the Spring Festival.

The new clothes are more beautiful.

Grandma's costume sleeves are old and long.

More than mom told me.

Fairy tales are longer.

I pestered grandma.

Put on costumes and sing Beijing Opera.

Singing and singing

I got into the sleeve of grandma's dress.

fell asleep

When I woke up, grandma was gone.

Definition of children's poems: From the perspective of reception aesthetics, children's poems written for children with childlike innocence, childlike interest and interest are called children's poems. The four elements of aesthetic norms in children's poetry creation are childlike interest, shallow language, imagination and poetry.

Appreciation: Missing Grandma is a children's poem.

The creation background of this poem is September 6, 2009, when the 59th and 60th students of Shanghai People's Shanghai Theatre Academy got together in Dehe Teahouse on Jianguo West Road, Shanghai. As a member, the poet also attended the party, and the old classmates reunited after a long separation and felt a lot. At the beginning of the party, we observed a half-minute silence for the late Xiao, Xie Hongyuan and other teachers. Then everyone went on stage to sing the fragments of Shanghai opera that the teacher taught when he was studying opera in the library. Seeing a female music teacher singing, Dai Da's mind appeared the shadow of Wen Bin, a little teacher, and the figure of Ding Waner. Ding Waner is Ding Shie's teacher. For Dada, she is the teacher of grandparents for generations. Hearing the music on the stage, the poet burst into tears. He wrote a few lines in his notebook, which is the prototype of missing grandma. Emotion, memory and inspiration are intertwined, and * * * jointly created this poem.

In the poem, "Shanghai Opera" became "Beijing Opera". Because the Academy invited teachers from Beijing Opera Troupe to teach boys how to practice acrobatics and girls how to shake their sleeves, the poet was particularly impressed, especially the way of shaking their sleeves, which is also an important reason why the hero in the poem locates women. In addition, the poet Dada spent nine years in the country with a poor seamstress when he was a child. They live alone, but like their mother's mother, which has a great influence on Dada. The soft local accent sang the figure of "mother" in the play and stayed in Dada's mind forever, which may also be related to the creation of this poem!

The poem "Remembering Grandma" basically conforms to the four elements of children's poetry aesthetic norms: childlike interest, shallow language, imagination and poetry. Childish interest is humorous and childish humor, which shows children's naughty nature and childlike innocence. I got into grandma's costume sleeve and fell asleep. This detail is very childlike, a little absurd, a little magical and a little life-like. The word "diamond" describes the naughtiness and naivety of "I", but it is incredible that "I" can fall asleep in the sleeve of grandma's costume. Then, think about it carefully, it is normal for children to love to play by nature. When they are tired of playing in their sleeves, they fall asleep. When I woke up, my grandmother was gone, and the bread here contained my surprise and loss. Although it is a narrative, there are ups and downs in the middle, which tells the pain of "I" leaving my grandmother. Long sleeves are my long-cherished yearning for my grandmother.

The first audience of children's poetry is the younger children, so the language of children's poetry must be easy to understand and plain, so the form is the content. The language of the poem "Missing Grandma" is unpretentious and easy to understand. The poet tells readers in a narrative way, and entrusts his infinite thoughts for his grandmother with simple words. Every line reveals a deep affection, filled with a childlike atmosphere.

The whole poem is narrated in the children's voice of "I", "Grandma sang Peking Opera when she was young", and the first line first explains her identity. Peking Opera is the quintessence of our country. It reminds people of the long-standing and profound China culture, from Chinese culture to Liyuan culture. Grandma, when she was young, sang "Beijing Opera", and skillfully painted the rich cultural background and the pride of the characters. The first line is a declarative sentence. The second to fourth lines capture the details of "ancient costume", which is more beautiful than "new clothes made by mom for the New Year", highlighting the beauty of ancient costume. The fifth to seventh lines also describe the details of "costume sleeves", and the length of costume sleeves highlights the length of costume sleeves compared with the length of fairy tales told by mom. In the poem, "My mother made me a new dress for the New Year" is written in real words, while "The fairy tale my mother told me" is written in vain. The two are more virtual and real, and the application is very appropriate. Writing in white highlights the richness of my imagination. These two contrasts show children's unique imagination and aesthetics completely from their eyes. Costumes and sleeves of costumes are a major feature of Beijing opera. The poet casually narrates in a child's tone, and draws a conclusion after comparison: the beauty of clothing is the length of clothing sleeves. The young "I" has made Peking Opera occupy a considerable position in my mind. These are all brought up by my grandmother.

The sleeves of costumes are called "water sleeves" in the jargon of Beijing opera costumes. In order to meet the shallow language requirements of children's poetry aesthetic standards, poets hide their "water sleeves" behind poems instead of long sleeves. It is this bold application that lays the groundwork for the following: "I" am in grandma's costume sleeve, and I can finally sleep peacefully. Imagine: I got into grandma's sleeve and fell asleep. From a child's point of view, can you understand? Obviously not, unless you are a genius. Water Sleeve removes the word "water", which reduces the reading obstacles of young readers and is more in line with the standard requirements of children's poetry.

It is said that ancient costumes look good, and the sleeves of ancient costumes are old and long. Both of them are partial structures, focusing on the aesthetic feeling of clothing and the length of clothing sleeves. It can be said that beautiful clothes are long-sleeved and good at dancing. "Laolaochang" has the flavor of Shanghai, which means it is very long. The overlapping use of the word "Lao" not only reminds people of the ancient costumes of Beijing opera, but also implies the long history of Beijing opera.

Lines 8 to 12 seem ordinary, but they are actually very intriguing. "I" pestered my grandmother to put on a costume and sing Beijing opera. Listening to the opera, "I" got into grandma's costume sleeve and fell asleep! There is nothing on the surface except the sleeping child who went to the opera. However, this also raises a serious question for contemporary people: where will our excellent traditional culture go? Take this poem as an example. Grandma, as the quintessence of China, devoted herself to Peking Opera all her life, and "I" just like to see the beauty of grandma in costume and the long sleeves of that costume. "I" asked my grandmother to put on a costume to sing, but "I" fell asleep. I don't like this opera. I should say to go to the opera. More precisely, "I" is just to satisfy my childhood curiosity. Children don't pay attention to the excellent culture and art that the older generation loves, but just take attracting attention as a pleasure. In fact, there are many excellent traditional cultures in China, which are facing the status quo of no successors, and the development trend is not optimistic.

Of course, this poem is a children's poem. If we analyze it according to our current thinking, there are some places that children can't understand. Then, some meanings in poetry are beyond the aesthetic norms of children's poetry, and they are not qualified children's poetry. Personally, I think, regardless of the rules and regulations and the extended meaning of people, if we only look at this poem from the perspective of a child, it can be understood as missing the late grandmother, and it can also be called a poem to educate children; If analyzed from a deeper perspective, it is understood as worrying about the embarrassing situation of excellent culture, then such a simple poem can contain such rich meanings and arouse people's thinking, which is also a good poem.