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This article is a perfect composition for the 2002 Meishan senior high school entrance examination.
Composition questions:
What is the most precious thing in the world? Hugo, a great French writer, said well that it is kindness. A kind-hearted person. Always sow sunshine and rain to heal people's spiritual wounds; Contact with kind people, enlighten wisdom, noble soul and broaden your mind. Please write an article on "Kindness".
Note: this topic is broad, as long as it is related to "kindness", it meets the requirements; You can write your own experience, your own experience, make up stories, express your feelings, comment and so on. According to their own understanding and perception of "kindness"; Except poetry, the style is optional, not less than 650 words, and the real school name and real name are not allowed in the composition.
? Time: A cold winter morning.
Location: On a vast wasteland.
Characters: kindness, money, status, power, time old man.
Background: Kindness was thrown into a vast wasteland where the cold wind roared. There is no one there, only kindness walks on the endless wasteland. (voiceover: Kindness is longing to go home and return to people's hearts. )
Suddenly, a Mercedes-Benz car passed by Liang in the distance. In terms of money, kindness seems to see the hope of going home. )
Kindness: stop the car! Please stop the car! (Raise your hand hopefully. )
Qian: Who are you? Why did you block my car halfway? He sticks his head out as he talks. )
Kindness: I am kind! I don't know who threw it here. Can you take me home?
Money: (frightened to disgrace) What? Kindness! No, no. I built a golden mountain just because I didn't have you. If I have you, my golden mountain will not collapse! You go find someone else. (said a burst of smoke and ran away. )
Kindness sighed and had to continue walking alone in the endless wasteland.
(In the distance, there is a BMW pride car galloping towards kindness. In terms of status, kindness seems to see the hope of going home again. )
Kindness: stop the car! Please stop the car! Make a hullabaloo about and wave hard. )
Status: Who are you? Why are you blocking my car here? He stops and opens the door. )
Kindness: I am kind. I don't know who threw me into this wasteland. Can you take me home?
Status: (Very surprised) What? Kindness! No way! No way! I am where I am today because I don't have you. If I have you, how can I keep my position? You go find someone else. (He just slipped away like a gust of wind. )
Kindness sighed and had to continue to walk alone in the vast wasteland, and tears of injustice could not help but flow out of her eyes. (voiceover: Can sad kindness go home? )
(In the distance, there is a red-flag car coming from kindness. )
Kindness: stop the car! Please stop the car! Kindness held the last glimmer of hope and waved her heavy hands again. )
Power: Who are you? Why are you so embarrassed? (Roll down the window slowly. )
Kindness: I am kind. I've been abandoned. Can you take me home? (The tone is almost begging. )
Power: (furious) What? Kindness! No way! No way! I have this supreme power because I don't have you. If I have you, how can I keep you? You might as well stay here. I disappeared as soon as I finished speaking. )
Kindness heaved a sigh of relief and sat on the ground with tears in her eyes, shivering with cold. Suddenly, an old man appeared beside Liang Shan and put a coat on Liang Shan. )
Old Time: Put it on, son. Please come home with me.
Kindness: (surprised) Who are you?
Time old man: I'm time old man. I'll take you home and let you return to people's hearts.
Kindness: Why help me? The first three people are afraid of me. Aren't you afraid of me?
Old times: Because only I know that you are the most precious. On the way home together, the old days pointed to three cars on the side of the road and laughed. )
Time Old Man: You see, without you, Jinshan will collapse no matter how high it is, and its status will fall no matter how high it is, and its strength will not last long. Because of you, I can stay in this world forever. Only you are eternal in the world! (end of the play)
General comments
Throughout the full text, the following points are worth learning and learning from middle school students:
First, aim high. The script achieves the unity of personification of abstract things and abstraction of concrete things. Although the money, status and power in the script are abstract, the author is concrete as soon as he contacts the reality of life. In particular, money, status and power abandon kindness, timely words and deeds of the elderly, and clever use of voiceover profoundly express that people need kindness, and kindness is the most precious theme in the world. This is much deeper and more ambitious than those articles with empty slogans.
Second, the form is novel. The article is written in the form of a script, and the layout and expression meet the requirements of the script. Sometimes,
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The explanation of time, place, characters and background, the stage description of the performance, the complete story, the dialogue between characters with personality and the sudden contradictions and conflicts are really ingenious, which shows the author's profound literary foundation.
Third, the conception and expression are exquisite. With his rich imagination, the author tells the story of kindness returning to the world after being abandoned, and skillfully designs four specific scenes, in which the plot and language are full of changes. For example, when facing money for the first time, goodness is "beginning and ending"; After being rejected twice, kindness is "waving heavy hands" when facing power. Especially at the end, the old man's words and voiceover design can be described as the finishing touch and memorable. Previous page [1]? [2]?