"(Li Yi's" On the Night Crying on the Wall of the Hometown ") Do: All. With the word "do", I wrote down the universality of homesickness and the long years I stood looking forward to.
The dynamic lining is as quiet as "moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream". (Autumn Night in the Deep Mountains by Wang Wei) As the poet saw in the previous sentence, the bright autumn moon seems to be filtered among pine forests, casting colorful light and shadow, making the realm more peaceful. The poet heard the last sentence: the mountain spring is crystal clear, gurgling on the rocks, and it seems that you can still hear its tinkling sound of running water. Use clear spring to contrast the tranquility of "empty mountain".
Turn static into dynamic, such as "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan, when will the bright moon shine on me?" (Wang Anshi boating in Guazhou) The "green" shape allows the momentum, strength and function of the spring breeze, with an open realm and bright colors, giving people a sense of beauty full of spring and vitality.
Write dynamically, as quiet as "sand on the beach, birds on the pond, clouds breaking through the moon." (Zhang Xian's Fairy) The moon is relatively static, but it is also written as "the moon" because of the fluttering of clouds. Write the word "broken", indicating the movement of the moon breaking through the clouds. "Flower" is also relatively static, but with the word "Nong", it is written as swaying posture. The word "Nong" is intended to point out that the moon protruding from the cracks in the clouds sprinkled moonlight on delicate flowers, as if covering them with a soft white gauze, and the evening breeze gently stirred the shy and delicate flowers. In the shadow of moonlight, the flowers have a shy and soft beautiful image under their hem. The words "broken" and "lane" personify clouds, moons and flowers and are full of vitality.
The reality is empty, such as "Han Xiao is light outside the poplar smoke, and the branches of red apricots are full of spring." (Song Qi's Magnolia) Spring can only be understood, but it can't be described. Spring has come, and red apricots are blooming all over the branches. The poet wrote the word "Noisy" on this spring scene, and vividly wrote it with personification. "Noisy" is not only a painting scene, but also a love story. It not only depicts the gorgeous scenery of apricot blossom, but also depicts the vivid expression of apricot branches swaying and flowers fluttering in the spring breeze.
Sadness with music is like "petals fall like tears, and lonely birds sing their sadness." (Du Fu's Spring Hope) Flowers and birds are beautiful scenery, while flowers and birds are entertainment. However, when the poet saw them, he was frightened by tears. This puts sadness and music together, making sadness even sadder.
That sentence is obvious, such as "warm wind makes tourists drunk and makes Hangzhou a continent." On the surface, these two sentences mean that tourists who enjoy the West Lake are intoxicated by the fragrant wind and enjoy themselves. In fact, the word "drunk" shows the shameful faces of those who forget their motherland. These people not only lost their ambition, but even lost their backbone. This poem embodies the author's feelings and anger.
There are many ways to refine words, the purpose of which is to choose the most appropriate words to express meaning. When we appreciate them, we must carefully ponder and understand the poet's art of "refining words" according to poems.