Close? Keys? Words: 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school
Words: 350 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is "A Light on the Window". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Windows with bright lights and warm pets used to be my boyhood dream. Frost and snow are everywhere, and sweet home is the safest fortress. Just shut out the cold and danger and have your father's shoulders to shoulder the disaster; With mother's subtle care, we can smooth the ripples of our worries. In this way, we will have a perfect world. Parents' care is an ever-burning lamp!
Teacher's comment: The poems are neat, compact and affectionate. With abstract or concrete images such as "lamp", "love", "home", "fortress", "father's shoulder" and "mother's care", the deep meaning of home is well interpreted!
At the same time, what is not enough is that the expression and significance of the article are not profound enough, and the feelings that you really want to express are not perfectly expressed, and the combination of "light", "home" and "parental care" is not particularly close. The words and expressions in the full text are all beautiful, such as "A bright light in the window, a warm pet", "The moon is dark and windy", "Frost and snow everywhere", "Fortress" and "Lightning" (Teacher Mao Liming, a special teacher in Xue Le, China) 2008-9-24 21:21:00.