Selected comments from master's thesis tutors
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Selected Master’s Thesis Tutor’s Comments 1
Li Xiaofeng’s bachelor’s degree thesis “The Inseparable Character and Role—On Marlon Brando’s Performing Arts” is a reflection on American performance Artist Marlon Brando's performance art creations are comprehensively analyzed and studied. Most of the graduation thesis in the acting major is the study of a certain performance element or the summary of one's own creation. This thesis belongs to the category of master research and is undoubtedly a new challenge for undergraduate graduates.
The thesis adopts a historical style of writing, with Marlon Brando’s life and creation as the meridian, and his personality and method acting skills as the latitude. The warp and latitude are intertwined to outline the story of Marlon Brando. The world of performance. This paper studies the historical inheritance of the American Method acting theory and believes that Brando's acting style is a combination of the Method and the actor's own personality. It is precisely because of the combination of the two that Brando's unique personal charm and expressive power were formed, leaving a series of unforgettable images in world movies. It is precisely because of his strong personality that he has left many regrets in his personal creations and personal life.
The paper has a clear point of view and a clear hierarchy. It uses a large amount of information, and it is sorted and woven. The author's analysis of the similarities and differences between Brando's three creative periods is also quite insightful and convincing.
If there are any shortcomings in the paper, it is that the discourse status of historical theory is a bit strong, and the scientific analysis and reconstruction of performance theory is not enough. The research on Marlon Brando basically remains at the level of analysis in this article. If it can explain more about its role in contemporary film performance creation, the level of the paper will be even higher.
This is an excellent paper. It is of positive significance for expanding the scope of material selection for professional performance papers. Selected comments from master's thesis tutors 2
1. During his studies, Zhao Jiayi worked hard, read extensively, had a solid professional foundation, and had theoretical analysis ability. This paper focuses on the poetry creation of Lin Huiyin, a female poet of the Crescent School who has received less attention, and focuses on analyzing the influence of British romantic poetry on Lin's poetry. It has theoretical and practical significance. The paper deeply explores the occurrence and manifestation of this influence from three aspects: life experience, aesthetic system, and art system. The point of view is clear and the argument is powerful. The interpretation of the paper is meticulous, the writing is delicate and friendly, and it is gentle and readable. The shortcoming is that the relationship between Lin Huiyin's changes in mood and creation under the impact of the times can be further expanded. Overall, I think this is a master's thesis that meets the requirements, and I agree to recommend this student to apply for thesis defense.
2. The student has strong ability to consult literature and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively apply knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, comprehensively analyze examination system problems, and has strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge.
3. The thesis topic selection is in line with professional training goals and can achieve comprehensive training goals. The topics are relatively difficult and the workload is heavy. The selected topic has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guidance significance).
4. The length of the article fully complies with the regulations of the college, the content is complete, the hierarchical structure is scientifically arranged, the main points are prominent, the logical relationship is clear, and there is a certain degree of personal opinion.
5. The length of the article fully complies with the regulations of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is generally arranged, the main points are logical to a certain extent, but it lacks personal insights.
6. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the standard requirements; it refers to a relatively rich literature and is highly timely; no plagiarism has been found.
7. The student’s ability to consult literature is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the writing process, he can basically comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system, comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively apply knowledge is average.
8. The author’s work has good practical application value. The thesis is carefully written, rigorously structured and fluent, which reflects that the author has the ability to engage in scientific research. He agrees to defend his master’s thesis.
9. The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion cannot closely focus on the topic.
10. The student has a strong ability to consult literature and information, can collect information about the examination system comprehensively, can comprehensively apply knowledge of the examination system during the writing process, comprehensively analyze examination system problems, and has a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. .
11. This topic is novel in topic selection, closely combined with clinical practice, and reasonably designed. It is a research hotspot in this discipline, and the research work has certain theoretical significance and practical value. The content of the paper is basically consistent with the title, with a complete structure, standardized format, clear hierarchy, well-organized, smooth and fluent language, and rich content.
The collection of literature materials is rich and detailed, basically covering the main literature related to this subject, and it has a certain inductive effect on the development trend of this subject. The data are sufficient, the discussion process is rigorous, the ideas are clear, the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve problems, the analysis methods are appropriately selected, and the results are credible. The paper is written seriously, the reasoning is logical, and the conclusions and suggestions are of practical significance. It is a master's thesis with high academic value.
12. The thesis topic selection is in line with professional training objectives and can achieve comprehensive training objectives. The topics are of certain difficulty and the workload is average. The selected topic has academic research (reference) value (practical guidance significance).
13. The language expression is average and the format fully meets the standard requirements; certain literature and materials are referenced, and its timeliness is average; no obvious plagiarism is found.
14. It can be seen from the content of the paper that the author has rich information and discusses the existing problems in the current land expropriation compensation system and its operation. Then, a more feasible solution was put forward based on learning from relevant foreign legal systems. xxx has certain new ideas.
15. The thesis topic selection is in line with professional training goals and can achieve comprehensive training goals. The topics are difficult and the workload is large. The selected topic has academic research (reference) value (practical guidance significance).
16. The title of the article is basically consistent, the argument is more prominent, and the discussion can better serve the argument.
17. The paper shows that the student has read a lot of references, is familiar with the research field, and has certain literature review capabilitiesxxx. The language of the paper is fluent, the structure is rigorous and reasonable, the viewpoints are correct, and the relevant analysis and argumentation have certain reference value, xxx. The thesis shows that the student has a good grasp of relevant professional knowledge and has a certain ability to analyze and solve problems. xxx, the thesis has reached the level required for a bachelor's degree, and he agrees to the thesis defense.
18. The student has poor ability to consult literature and information, cannot comprehensively collect information about the examination system, comprehensively applies knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, and has poor ability to comprehensively analyze examination system problems.
19. During the completion of the master's thesis project, the student used scientific thinking methods and rigorous scientific research ideas to conduct experimental design, mastered experimental skills in textile engineering, biomaterials, biochemistry, etc., and was able to Proficient in using origin and other data processing software for statistical analysis. After systematic training such as literature review, project proposal, project implementation, data collection, and thesis, the student has acquired the ability to independently engage in the above-mentioned scientific research work.
20. I believe that this master’s thesis has met the requirements for applying for a master’s degree. I specifically allow him to defend his master’s thesis and recommend him to apply for a master’s degree.
21. The language expression is poor and the format meets the standard requirements; there is less information and its timeliness is poor; some content is similar to other people’s results.
22. This paper reflects the author’s solid theoretical foundation, systematic professional knowledge and good scientific research ability in this subject. Having met the requirements for a master's degree thesis, it is recommended to arrange a defense.
23. The title of the article is completely consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
24. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the standard requirements; it refers to a wealth of literature and materials, and is highly timely; there is no plagiarism.
25. The title of the article is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
26. This paper studies recipes and exception handling in batch control, and designs an improved master's thesis tutor's comments on the basis of analyzing the classic clustering algorithm and subspace algorithm 3
The student loves the motherland, works hard, is diligent, has an innovative spirit, and has the courage to explore new things and things; is relatively practical in scientific research and thesis work, and has a strong sense of responsibility; studies hard and has excellent grades; has a high level of foreign language, Have good reading, collaboration and oral expression skills; in addition, the student is well-rounded and has high quality in scientific research, study and literary and artistic club work.
During the completion of the master's thesis project, the student used scientific thinking methods and rigorous scientific research ideas to conduct experimental design, mastered experimental skills in textile engineering, biomaterials, biochemistry, etc., and was able to skillfully Use origin and other data processing software for statistical analysis. After systematic training such as literature review, project proposal, project implementation, data collection, and thesis, the student has acquired the ability to independently engage in the above-mentioned scientific research work.
I believe that this master’s thesis has met the requirements for applying for a master’s degree. I specifically allow him to defend his master’s thesis and recommend him to apply for a master’s degree. Selected Master's Thesis Instructor's Comments 4
The thesis studies recipes and exception handling in batch control, and designs an improved subspace algorithm based on the analysis of the classic clustering algorithm and subspace algorithm. This This algorithm can achieve good results in clustering recipe data.
Exception handling is inevitable in any control process. The paper proposes a method based on an internal model state machine, using JGrafchart to model the saccharification process in the beer production process.
Then an exception handling system was built, which was able to run the saccharification recipe and perform exception diagnosis and exception handling. Finally, the valve did not respond during the filling process, and three reasons were analyzed. The simulation results show that the designed exception handling system can effectively diagnose and handle abnormal behaviors in the mass production process.
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