How do pupils write poems?

Just started? It can be like this:

You can find some poems written by your peers and read them aloud before imitating them; After getting familiar with it, you can also find some simple fairy tales to write poems; As Jin Chiyu (another interviewee) said, just write your own heart, because there is no end to poetry.

So much advice. I'm only in the sixth grade, and I only know how to write poetry. . . . .

model essay

Write about mom, dad, classmates, grass, trees and bees. .............................................................................................................................................................

A hymn to mother.

Stepping on the breath of spring

This beautiful day

Fuck you and fuck me.

My heart is as warm as the sea.

I really want to sing a carol for you.

I am neither a singer nor a poet.

I won't write touching melodies into poems.

I lack flash inspiration and genius thinking.

I am ashamed that the deepest love can't be explained by a trickle.

But today,

I want to present a heart song for you.

May my song become a needle and thread.

Sew up the split wound for you.

May my songs turn into raindrops.

Moisten your thirst

May my songs turn into clouds.

Bring fragrance to your life.

May my songs turn into clouds.

Refracting the luster of the sun for you

Years climb on your forehead,

Time has crossed my shoulder,

That sweet and delicious meal,

A warm and soft sweater;

Tireless teaching;

Connect you with my life.

I finally know that there is one thing in this world,

More continuous than the water of the Yangtze River,

More thrilling than the Yellow River;

Tougher and evergreen than the green of pine and cypress;

That's your love,

Your deep love,

Selfless love,

My mother.

I don't understand everything you gave me.

But you polish my eyes.

So the world opened before my eyes.

On my strange life path

I can always see a pair of big hands to help me move forward.

Therefore, my life is no longer lonely.

My road is no longer strange.

Look at your beautiful big hands.

My eyes are blurred.

Listen to your sleeping breath.

You should have more rest like this.

Your fatigue makes me anxious.

Which one should be smoothed first?

Like a winding river flowing slowly.

The endless warmth inside embraced me.

It is your tired figure that urges me.

Close to you, close to you.

Crying in my heart won't let me listen

Your shoulder, your shoulder.

Carry mountains and rivers, carry the sun and the moon

Forever, no regrets.

Fiery love burns the soul.

Tengger singer singer-father and I

You created this family.

Then he created me.

You hold my hand.

From yesterday to now.

—— Cha's classmates are in their prime.

schoolmate

The night sky is so clear tonight.

Class reunion is like a clear river.

come and go in haste

Meeting each other is just a temporary stranger.

A word "treasure" is inexhaustible.

It's raining all over the country

Every bright smiling face

Enjoy all the way and share all the way.

Yesterday's past happiness and pain.

Strong emotions surge like waves.

You and me together

Enjoy a colorful life.

Wine brewed on campus

A mixture of excitement and excitement

After the baptism of the storm

This youth wine is better and stronger.

A meeting is a burning fire.

Dispersion is the bright star in the sky.

Just use this light of life

Reflect on each other

A pure and beautiful mind

It doesn't have to be long. . . . .

The following is the teacher's opinion.

On Poetry —— How to Write Modern Poetry

1\ Poetry is too stupid, too empty, or empty.

As far as the object of writing is concerned, poetry must grasp emotion, reason and matter. As far as art is concerned, it should not only have a sense of rhythm, image, texture and movement, but also strength, hardness, breadth and depth. Four senses and four degrees depend on the creator's spiritual thought and artistic accomplishment, but they are finally accomplished through language. According to my experience: use more content words, less function words, especially less or careful use of related words; Use more physical nouns than abstract nouns; The structure of sentences should be compact and powerful, and sentences should bite and support each other; Every word and sentence of a poem can't be poetic, or its poetry is silent, but it can't be considered useless. Many times, just find a key sentence and you can knock it alive. This is basically what the ancients said, "Call up the whole article". In this way, poetry can be solid and hard, and gain texture in seemingly clumsy.

"Modern Poetry" emphasizes the spirit of freedom and openness, and communicates "between the sensible and the intangible" with straightforward situational statements.

4 "Poetry is like a person" and "Poetry is like a person". We advocate that poets and poems are integrated in connotation and extension, that is, poets should use words such as affirmation, promotion, praise, criticism, flogging and negation in their poems, and also practice them with practical actions in the secular world, so that poetry can become the poet's code of action and the poet's secular virtue can become poetry.

5\ What is irony? From ancient Greece to Hegel, to romantic literature, to new criticism, structuralism and post-modern theory, there are different interpretations of it; It is not only a rhetorical method, but also an aesthetic and philosophical concept. Specific to poetry, the basic meaning of irony has the following two aspects:

(1) a metaphor, that is, "what you say is not what you mean." It causes the difference between surface semantics and deep semantics.

(2) The general principle of poetic style, that is, poetic language has never been or should not be a single transparent symbol system; The language of any poem, no matter what the author's "subjective" intention is, will escape because of the role of context.

What are the main writing techniques of poetry?

1, expression

Poetry mainly uses narration, description, discussion and lyric, among which description and lyric are the key points. Different description methods, such as dynamic and static combination, virtual and real combination; Yes (lyrical way? There are two main ways: direct lyric and indirect lyric. ) Express your feelings directly, express your feelings through the scenery, cherish your feelings in the scenery, and blend the scenes. Because scenery is full of feelings, all scenery words are emotional words.

2, structural form:

The structural form of poetry, the common concern from beginning to end, comes straight to the point, goes deep at different levels, generalizes first and then divides, scenery first and then feelings, and then shows one's ambition, transition, bedding and foreshadowing.

3. Rhetoric:

The main rhetorical devices are: \ "antithesis \" \ "metaphor \" \ "personification \" \ "metonymy \" \ "exaggeration \" \ "parallelism \" \ "repetition \" symbol \ "and so on.

4. Writing skills:

Writing skills include: Fu Bi's arousing, setting off, comparing, rendering, expressing ambition, making the finishing point, seeing the big picture from the small, trying to promote before suppressing, associating imagination and reversing word order.

5. Artistic style:

Including vigorous, broad-minded, bold, natural and unrestrained, diluted, depressed, sad and graceful.

6. How to write modern poems? What problems should we pay attention to?

To write modern poetry, we should love life, be familiar with life, and cultivate a keen sense of the details and phenomena of daily life; And use "image language" to express feelings and thoughts, and express various text structures and rhetorical devices in various forms, so as to achieve the aesthetic rhyme art of "tenderness and sincerity" and "profound meaning".

1. Concise, in short, is to express the complete meaning with the least and shortest sentences.

2. Image sentences are words that can be directly experienced by people's sensory perception (eyes, ears, mouth, nose, heart, touch, feeling, etc.). ), rather than abstract words or narrative sentences.

3. Make good use of nouns and verbs; Reduce the use of adjectives (especially very abstract adjectives)

4. The biggest difference between poetic sentences and general narratives is refinement and image, and refinement can only rely on experience and intention.

Eliot believes that creating images means "looking for the objective counterpart of ideas." There are many specific methods, such as: virtual and real conversion; The transformation between people and things; Transformation between things; Internal and external transformation; Size transformation; Far and near transformation; Less and less; Part and whole transformation; The transformation between history and reality; Reality and future transformation, etc. What needs to be emphasized is that both the poet image and the landscape image in poetry are to express emotion, mood and interest. Emotion is more important than image in poetry. Without lyricism, we need to construct images at will, which can only damage poetry.

By the way, this is the title of my poem. Read it out: alien, I want to shake your hand, the teeth of the sea and the eyes of the mother.

You should be able to quote some ~