In the vast net sea, a woman dressed in ancient costume, such as water, came to me from the "three words and two beats" She was singing softly with a poem in her hand. I seem to feel the ancient chanting and pipa sound under the bright moon from her ...
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Knowing golden phoenix is purely accidental. After I finished writing the two poems "Song of Phoenix" and "Baidu Beauty", she came to my space inadvertently. And I also quietly walked into her space.
Walking into her space is as profound as walking into a literary palace. A love movement, a beautiful classical poem creation, actually makes me unable to read it quickly! Every time I read it, I feel refreshed or amazed; Or feast my eyes and cheer me up; Or make me cry ...
However, I find it hard to believe that this is a classic text written by a woman in her thirties, but that's the truth! At that time, although I really wanted to know this beautiful "Phoenix", I never really wanted to chat with her to know it. Golden phoenix is a woman who interprets life with words! But the real understanding of golden phoenix began with a classical poem she wrote.
It was one of her narrative poems about snow-capped mountains, Flying Fox, that opened my eyes. She wrote it in plain words, but it took me a lot of effort to read it, and I have to recite it repeatedly to understand the good intentions of golden phoenix's creation!
After reading it, I wrote her a review: "The poem is really well written, which is both narrative and poetic, as well as literary readability. Unfortunately, writing techniques like this are no longer popular, let alone advocated! Because it is not easy to write any articles now, I don't even read the poems written by professional poets, let alone publish them to you. You see, there are only a few narrative poems since ancient times!
Poetry should be easy to understand, catchy, balanced and symmetrical, and 2468 sentences should be carefully scrutinized. Especially it is not easy to train. What exactly is poetry? It evolved from Yuefu's music lyrics. A poem with a musical beat is a lyric, and a lyric with a musical beat is a poem. Therefore, poetry and music are interlinked! Don't underestimate three or five poems. If you write a quatrain, it can be circulated for thousands of years! In addition, now writing a film and television drama, the director wants to write it, and the screenwriter writes it and shoots it. The publisher must first ask who directed it, who is the number one male and female, and second-rate and third-rate actors can't get seats at all. That's why they don't publish it for you. "
This kind of comment, a smart person can see at a glance, is an indirect criticism, not a criticism! But she quickly gave me a reply: Mr. Wu Mao, I can't write modern poetry well.
Later, I opened her space and reread another classical poem, Love Phoenix and Find Phoenix. At the beginning, she made an incisive inscription: "Love me, love my scar". After reading it several times, I realized that golden phoenix wrote poems with painstaking efforts and tears! Her rich expression of love, her desire and pursuit of love seem to have reached an ideal state of self-improvement and holiness.
Please see how she started: you picked up my lost dancing shoes, told me I had been looking for them for a long time, and finally found a beautiful princess, a string of meteors passed by, and you held my hand, and the real jealousy and beauty became a permanent torn skirt, which was blown away by the wind bit by bit, and the bleeding heart told me cruelly that the prince would only fall in love with the princess in costume, and Cinderella only existed in fairy tales.
This passage is full of blood and tears, and everyone's heart is shaking after reading it. Tears flying, hide your face and cry! I think: the ideal "red dancing shoes" of the beautiful "Phoenix" is there! Only by wearing "red dancing shoes" can she dance a beautiful and vigorous figure and charm, and only by her can she dance a colorful life!
Then, I read her classical narrative poem "Like a Dream". After reading this time, I completely changed my view on her creative style! And made the following comments on her poems: "It's not that the red chamber is better than the red chamber, and the newlyweds have wide sleeves. Whoever doesn't understand the meaning of poetry in ink needs Wei Gu to explain why. " You are so funny! How can you write such an interesting poem! This is not reading poetry, this is clearly reading a funny love novel or story. Generally speaking, it is not easy to create a complete story in the form of poetry. It seems that your traditional Chinese phoenix really needs to be disassembled to understand you! Taking this word apart to understand you is your truest self! "
Tell the truth. This poem is written naturally, simple and elegant. There are several places that can be described as ingenious. A few places also wrote a pretty and exquisite charm, which made me laugh.
I don't know how she thought like my explanation of golden phoenix at that time, and I don't know if she knew the reason why I said the word "cloud" when I opened it.
From this poem by golden phoenix, we can easily see that she has never forgotten her love. With her own words or poems, she deeply recalls the bits and pieces that passed away in the lonely night sky, which has no end so far. Who hasn't had such emotional loss? But she is so persistent in love, so persistent, persistent to the point of being almost stubborn, which I didn't expect.
She is so eager for love that people are envious and even willing to pay but unwilling to get anything. When I found that love had drifted away from her, she explained all her love with classical poems!
Golden phoenix's love is far-reaching, and it has no end. In the lonely night, in the quiet morning, in the quiet time in the office, in the daydream space in front of the screen, in the bustling crowd. Her love flies with her thoughts. Her love has long been accustomed to sitting in front of the computer and tapping the keyboard to talk to the ancients and complain to the ancient literati.
Later, I saw her latest work "I am a flower in my mother's heart", which made him take a new step in the field of literary creation; And the previous creative style has also changed. After reading it, I gave her the following comments:
"At the end of work, golden phoenix's new book" I am a little flower in my mother's heart "suddenly jumped into my screen. First of all, my first feeling is surprise and surprise! If I were another netizen, I wouldn't feel this way! Because the surprise is: I didn't expect to create such a good work after work, with high speed, high quality and exquisite production.
First of all, let's take a look at how this excellent work begins: "When I was a child, my mother's arms were my daughter's most beautiful home, humming warm nursery rhymes and talking to me. When I grow up, my mother is the thread of my daughter's kite. No matter how far she flies, she also cares about the changes in temperature ... "
In just a few words, my daughter praised the image of a kind and docile mother, which brought the reader into the warm embrace of a mother at once. This feeling is happy, warm and intoxicating! Reading poetry is like watching the real scene and the picture. I vaguely feel that the author is not typing with a keyboard, but sobbing with his "heart" and dipping in scarlet!
Then, the author wrote from an early age: "When I was a child, my mother was my toddler's hands, encouraging me to grow up, but not letting me get down. When I grow up, my mother is a smile in my heart, and the cold night party makes my heart warm like a flower. " When I was a child, my mother gave me a farewell look at school. My schoolbag is full of my mother's hopes ... "After reading this, I saw the author's mother's hands are awesome! These hands are warm and vicissitudes. What I see more is a pair of hopeful hands! The hope that the schoolbag is full of hope can come true. It is a mother's amiable and respectable not to let her daughter get any harm from childhood!
After reading the whole article, I didn't expect that I was shocked by the expressive language flow! This shock is inspiring, inspiring people to work hard and make progress. I think: My mother's request for this little flower is perfect. This fragile little flower, though warm, lovely, likable and spoiled, can't live without her mother's milk. A daughter's hope is a mother's hope. A daughter's gift is a mother's gift. Daughter's future is mother's future. ...
Thanks to mother! Let's bless all the good mothers in the world together! Send your children sincere greetings to your mother! Give mom a heartfelt comfort! forever and always ...
This poem is beautiful and passionate! The music on the score is good lyrics!
Congratulations to golden phoenix! Yes, it is difficult to write a good work without impressing yourself first, without passion and without "feeling"! You did it now, and you did it well! "
That's why I stayed after work and wrote her a comment.
Later, I watched her other classic masterpiece Gone with the Wind, which can be said to have reached an unprecedented creative peak or extreme! Reading and reading, I can't help being impressed by her profound knowledge of classical literature! I won't go into details here.
This is golden phoenix, a woman who interprets life and love in words! A woman who plays life music with words as notes!
People who read her articles are amazed. I can't believe that these words were written by a talented woman in her early 30 s! It is no exaggeration to say that she is brilliant and ice-smart! Her words are meaningful and sincere. Walking into her writing castle, you will be moved by a blue-hearted and persistent person. Sometimes her writing is so unpretentious and intriguing; Sometimes her words are exquisite, gorgeous, bright, warm and sweet; Sometimes her words seem to be weather-beaten, but the artistic conception is far-reaching; Sometimes she feels sorry for herself and sighs; Sometimes she will frown and look at each other! Between the lines of her poems, there are sometimes cries of sadness and expectation, but it often breaks people's hearts and tears!
Walking into her writing hall, whether sad, true, naughty, handsome, or simple and elegant appearance, it is always difficult to locate her writing style, as if calm poems were integrated into everyone's heart and spleen. Love is very deep, which makes me a little sad and distressed in many cases! A little tired! Even a little confused.
Phoenix! Let bygones be bygones How much you lose, how much you gain. This is the law of immortality of matter!
There is a saying that he is by your side and he is yours. He's not with you. He was never yours! Don't dwell on the past, you are still young and have a long way to go! Wonderful days and wonderful programs are behind! Usually, wonderful TV programs are performed at the end, right? Don't think about some things in the past, let alone deliberately recall and pursue them. Put them in your heart. In the future, if you will remember them, it may be a memory of a beautiful past. If it has faded with the passage of time or times, so be it! Cherish the present and grasp the present, this is your bright future! At that time, when you look back, I believe you will be a different scene. What you see is that spring will be "only good here"!
Golden phoenix, keep your head up and make great strides! The road is not at your feet, but in your heart!
This is golden phoenix! A woman who exudes a literary atmosphere, a woman who is so ordinary and real, a woman who has a lot of visits and can't get into space every day, a woman who is smart, cute, witty, cheerful, lively and straightforward, and full of amorous feelings!
Netizens, if you really like golden phoenix, or even just like her writing or want to smell literature, please come to her space, QQ:1115735784. Only by walking into her space and touching her heart can you understand her and feel what is true, good, beautiful, love, love and truth. ...
Postscript: After reading many articles and poems of golden phoenix, I have long wanted to write something for her. Unfortunately, I can't write such an article. I only doodle and splash. I know that writing a review article is very brain-consuming, laborious and poorly written, and it will also bring harm and trouble to the host! However, a lingering netizen responsibility, I'm going to make a fool of myself! What's the difference between this article and writing notes? Power is a pastime and writing practice, with no other meaning. I know: congratulations and comments can't be fully expressed in words and words? I know I don't have the ability to express myself in words. Mastering writing is my biggest obstacle to expression, and I can only comment! Besides, I felt it without the master's consent! Haha's laughter ...
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People's emotional world is actually a historical relic in a history museum, ancient but precious and fresh!
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What is the longest road in the world? It's thought. What language in the world is the most sincere, and that is the heart. What language in the world is the purest and most flawless, and it is still the heart!
Open golden phoenix's QQ poetry anthology. When you read her poems, maybe you can understand her whole inner world. What you keep is a precious emotional space and several touching love echoes. Her poems are exquisite in water, simple in soil, hard in stone, moist in fire and moist in jade. She may use the poet's thinking or vision to examine her emotional soul and relive the past love events that passed away or came in person.
Looking back on dozens of poems, we can see that golden phoenix's spiritual spark in generate on the bumpy emotional road is also a portrayal of her pursuit of pure love. In her poems, there are exuberant youth and heroism, sadness and romance, the pounding of horses on the grassland, the pride of the collision of plum blossoms with snow, the wild dream of passionate love, the melancholy of two dreams of "You have me in your arms, I have you in my arms", and even the romantic chapter of "Even after running for seven days and seven nights, you have to walk your own way in a wild goose". ...
The scenery in the heart of golden phoenix is so splendid! Look closely at the world in her poems and her life for more than 30 years. In her daily life journey, how many feelings are to be revealed, how much information is to be conveyed to the public netizens, and how many netizens can guess and daydream about her life and love!
Real life and modern society do not force everyone to have the talent of poet and literature. However, golden phoenix is golden phoenix, and she is really not a "bird"! Although she can't be said to be a leading figure in poetry and literature, at least she has a place in the field of poetry. I like reading her latest poems. She has taken a new step on the difficult road of literary creation and made a new breakthrough in her writing style. She wrote: "I ran away overnight in my dream \ All the houses collapsed \ The end of the world \ Let me run like hell \ I only have your direction in my mind \ Please God let me finally meet you \ When I wake up in tears \ You and I are still apart from Wan Li \ Even if I ran for seven days and seven nights \ I can't jump into your arms \ but the impulse remains \. Looking at the dream in a straight line, you have me in your arms, and there are two dreams in my arms. The picture is exactly the same. You stare there, and I look up here. Can your eyes reflect in front of you The stars blink your smiling face, the night is warm and dark, and the meteor crosses our same wishes. "
Golden phoenix's free form and unpretentious poems are very passionate! Shang Kun wrote that at the critical moment or the last moment of life and death, she ran desperately with only one wish, that is, she wanted to see her beloved again. Then I wrote my determination and courage to go my own way in the way of goose ... When I read such a tearful poem and a touch, I thought: life and harsh emotional experience gave her passionate poetic elements, and delicate and rich emotional experience gave her unique creative inspiration and extraordinary writing style.
Golden phoenix is very talented. She has the poet's romance and the poet's strong emotional color! Every poem, every time and every thought about life has her ideal dream and pursuit, which is a window to open her emotional space. Her poems are full of infatuation, amorous feelings and full of "coquettish" feeling. Love is beautiful. It is beautiful because everyone can't avoid the theme of life in his life. In the restless years of life, all the calls of life instinct are displayed, and life experience is also a sign of life value. Only in this way can what you write be "poetic" and have poetic elements.
However, golden phoenix is golden phoenix, and only she can write poems! Her poems are famous for their emotional catharsis and outpouring. Sometimes it is fresh and pretty, and sometimes it is sad and heartbreaking. In her latest poem, the call for love is even stronger, reaching the ultimate peak! "The story of Cone Heart is wandering in the air" "The memory of hypoxia is looming" "The neon of the city is showing off tired eyes" "Lying in his warm palm" There is no need to imagine "trading a night madness for my loneliness and wandering" "The loss after hugging" "Yesterday is the same as today" There is no exaggeration "My face is numb and fake" Laughing is too confused \ Illuminating my beauty \ Encouraging me to learn to be strong \. Sweet words will forget the sadness in my blood \ Your blessing will flow in my heart \ In the long lonely journey \ I will share my sadness with you \ ... The spark of temptation will ignite the dry ridge \ and interpret it. ..... in your place \ is a paradise of dreams \ I want to be a weaver girl who falls into the mortal world \ I don't look at you for nothing \ When I hold you in my arms \ I want to break my beautiful wings and love you forever! "
What a nice woman! In order to get that pure love, I would rather break the wings of an angel than cherish it! When you read this, can you say that she is insincere? Can you say that she is not affectionate? Can you not be moved and shocked by this fiery emotional confession?
If the last article was a declaration of love, this time it is a March of love!
This is a lyric love narrative poem written by golden phoenix recently. After reading it, I couldn't conceal my inner excitement and emotional collision, and immediately gave her the following comments: "I like reading golden phoenix's new poems, which makes me feel refreshed! What is refreshing? Listening to beautiful music and reading exciting words is dazzling! Golden phoenix's excellent poems are as pure as a glass of mineral water, crystal clear and without any dregs! Appreciate the language, artistic conception or emotional expression of this poem, and the scenery is full of such brilliant sunshine! I think the author's poetry comes from the reality of life and the persistent pursuit of love! It is the lack of emotion that gives golden phoenix unique creative inspiration and unique writing style. At the foot of Changbai Mountain, the Great Wall is like a pen in your chest. The land in the distance, the starry night, seems to be the paper you wrote; The water in the Liaohe River and the waves in the Yellow Sea are just like the ink in your pen. The ice and snow world of love is the level and rhythm of poets. Golden phoenix's feelings are so deep, lingering and sad, as if a gentle wave can knock people's hearts! If you describe the words and sentences in this poem as a golden bird or a mermaid swimming in the water, aren't they the characters and music you beat in the poem? "
When writing love poems, poets always express their artistic conception with implicit metaphors, sadness in wine and thoughts in the line. Golden phoenix's poems are no exception. But more is her heartfelt expression and confession, which is a bright spot. As if in her poetic imagination, love should be so bright and perfect. In the moonlight at night, before dawn in the morning, after the tearful sunset, walking in the street, in the bamboo forest in the rain, between the curtains in front of the window, and so on, there should be love corners in all fields of life, and there should be true feelings and performances. However, golden phoenix was wrong! People can't be wrong without compassion! Mistakes can't help but make people cry and regret in her poems! People's emotional world is a subtle thing, just like a blank sheet of paper. The words written on the front and the back may be different. It will change with the changes of environment and contemporary culture, and it will also be related to accidents and encounters in life, joys and sorrows, but I also believe that the ice and snow world of love should be full of poetry and painting! ? It should be that heart and heart are interlinked. You know, the sea in people's hearts is not as clear as the sea. The reason why you see the clear and pure sea is because you didn't sink to the bottom of the sea to observe the underwater world.
Love is the richest and most precious emotional experience in life. In the eyes of lovers, the moon is always warmer than the sun, and the flow of the river is as affectionate as eyes. Flowers and birds seem to be familiar with people's wishes, but in golden phoenix's poems, it is another scene: "I am used to waking up in the middle of the night \ stroking forgotten old songs \ asking for memories in that lingering rhythm \ I am looking for excitement again and again \ and my eyes are full of loneliness. I can't solve the puzzle of your departure. I've been looking for you all over the world and asked you if I'm no longer beautiful. But the wind won't send me a message. \ Nini's lingering intimacy, lingering feelings, and feelings that are as hard to give up as a lonely journey in the world make people see at a glance, and how shocking the duality of expressing implicit regret is! ?
The scenery remains the same, and the real environment is vivid. The tempering of the real society and the grim facts have brought vitality and inspiration to golden phoenix's poetry creation. The long March of love is as deep and unpredictable as the vast sky and sea. It is the circuitous feelings that have accumulated a lot of poetry creation materials for her. In her ears or between keyboards, there is always a longing for love carols and an expectation for finding love. Love the phoenix and seek the phoenix, go to your place and go your own way, fly without wings, where you are in heaven is probably the most depressing and dignified poem she has written so far! Almost without too much explanation and chewing, we can see the artistic conception of all her poetic elements. Happiness and longing, pursuit and expectation, pain and joy all meet in her poems, and all can find coordinates and directions. I can't help but admire or appreciate her poems and talents, and I am even more impressed by her precious will to love!
The quality of feelings can consider a person's personality and taste, while the bittersweet love can only experience a person's endurance and wisdom and courage! In the adversity of love, you can see the future optimistically. That is a man of great wisdom and courage. That's a friend in need! However, life is not a poem, nor is love a poem. It is a living and tangible thing. Passion and imagination coexist with sadness. The poet can only be: colorful words and beautiful sentences come into view, so why should others look at the boudoir? The contrast between fantasy and reality is such a deduction from generation to generation.
The morning always tempts the rising sun, the stars always tempts the dawn, and the winter always tempts the spring breeze. Golden phoenix: A woman who interprets life in words, she always confides in love poems in real life, whether it is to express her feelings of helping the poor and thinking about the present, or to express her love catharsis with tears. When she started writing, she made an extraordinary move. She was not seduced by the secular world or confused by values. Elegant and interested in poetry creation, like the sea tempting the Yangtze River, like the blue sky tempting the eagle, like the grassland tempting the steed; Then, we can see her beautiful poems! Her understanding of love is profound, implicit and passionate. The best way to express her love is to write poems, and only by writing poems can she pour out the beautiful love carols that her heart calls out! This is golden phoenix: a woman who interprets life with words!
Postscript: Due to space and time, I can't write this article very long. Coupled with the limited ability level, I didn't write this excellent material well. Golden phoenix's poems are many, but unfortunately, I don't have professional literary criticism, just scribble. Please forgive me. I haven't chatted with her, but I can't grasp the whole of her emotional life, so I can only talk about poetry with poetry! I think: No matter how others understand her, her poems will not disappear in QQ with the passage of time. The passage of time will not drown out her temperament image. If you know her, you will know her inner emotional world. Because poetry is not made up out of thin air.