Notes on Sun Li's Lotus Lake

Shui Sheng, they joined the army and left. The work goes on to describe: "After all, women are isolated from the outside world to some extent. Two days later, four young women gathered in their water homes to discuss visiting their husbands. " "Broken silk" is a common idiom, but it is very appropriate to use it here. It is full of local color and lotus lake flavor, which accurately shows these women's nostalgia for their husbands. Together, they talked about their husbands and wanted to see them. However, they live in the environment of revolutionary base areas and grow up under the education of the party. They are all positive, enterprising and have strong self-esteem. Besides, men have just left for two days, and they are embarrassed to make it clear. So, I tried to make excuses for myself. Some said: "I heard that they are still there. I don't drag my tail, but I forgot a dress. " Some said, "I didn't want to go, but my mother-in-law insisted that I visit him again-what's the point!" " "Although it is an excuse, everyone knows that it is tacit. These simple words are linked together and vividly written, which fully shows the complex and meticulous feelings of these young women at this time. Their reserve and shyness finally failed to match their nostalgia for their husbands, so they "secretly sat in the boat and rowed to the opposite Mazhuang". Writing novels in the language of prose poetry is another feature of Sun Li's creation. This makes his novels full of lyrical flavor. Here, we can quote the examples he wrote about labor and fighting to analyze. At the beginning of the novel, women on water are described as weaving mats. The author completely poetized this labor scene. Please read the first natural paragraph of the novel: when the moon rises, the yard is very cool and clean, and the reed eyebrows are moist during the day, just to make a seat. The woman sat in the middle of the yard, her fingers twisted with silky and slender reed eyebrows. Lu Mei is thin, jumping around in her arms. In the first three sentences, the author points out the time, space and object of labor. Like the language of poetry, it is concise, beautiful and beautiful. It not only writes about the environment, but also reflects the diligence and neatness of the owner of the environment. This is a working place, but it is very clean. All the preparations are done in the daytime: Lu Mei is wet now, just enough to make a seat. Next write about women's labor. How do women work? The author didn't say it directly, but wrote pictures of labor. In a few simple words, the scene of a woman knitting a summer sleeping mat is completely visualized: silky slender reed eyebrows tangled on her fingers and jumping in her arms. Twist and jump, how well these two verbs are used. He not only vividly describes the scene of labor, but also vividly describes the good craftsmanship and hard work of women. Especially the following paragraph: this woman made up a seat. Soon, it was woven into a big piece under her. She seems to be sitting on a piece of snow and white clouds. She sometimes looks at the lake, which is also a silvery white world. There is a thin transparent fog on the water. When the wind blows, it smells fresh lotus leaves and lotus fragrance. You see, what was still working suddenly became "sitting on a piece of snow" and "sitting on a piece of white clouds". Isn't this a complete poetic beautification of the labor scene? The description of the snow-white world of Baiyangdian in She Sometimes Looks at the Lake not only makes readers see a completely poetic picture, but also smells "fresh lotus leaves and lotus fragrance" and feels the inner activities of women. Why does she sometimes look into the lake? Because she has something on her mind: it's so late and her husband hasn't come back yet. She waited for her husband to come home while working. The soul of the characters is not expressed by the narrative way of ordinary novels, but described by the brushwork of prose poems, which is poetic and charming. Look at the scene describing the battle. First, look at the description of the Japanese ship coming from behind before the battle started: fortunately, these young women grew up in Baiyangdian and the ship rocked very fast. This ship is like a jumping barracuda leaving Shui Pi. They have been dealing with this ship since childhood and can sail as fast as weaving and sewing. This scene is very concise and vivid, and it is a very realistic picture. Describe the fast speed of their rocking boat: "It's like a jumping barracuda leaving Shui Pi." They sailed the boat "as fast as weaving and sewing" and used three metaphors, both of which were written quickly. The jumping barracuda describes the speed of the ship. Shuttle weaving and needle sewing describe the quick and skilled movements of characters. These metaphors are well used, which are in line with the situation at that time and the identity of women. At this time, I only heard "water screaming on both sides, screaming, screaming!" " The voice written with such onomatopoeic words is really vivid and vivid, and it also reflects the calmness, courage and ability of these young women. They rocked the boat into Lotus Lake. Several descriptions of Lotus Lake are as follows: "The big lotus leaf wrapped in infinite layers spreads out against the sun, just like an iron wall. The pink lotus arrow stands tall and is a sentry to monitor Baiyangdian! " This can be read as prose poetry. There are only two sentences here, one about the lotus leaf and the other about the lotus flower, which are not only vivid, but also entrust the author with strong feelings. Here is the lotus leaf, an iron wall, a sentry to monitor the enemy and a battlefield to bury the enemy. Using these two sentences as the end of this part implies that the last part will be a battle to destroy the enemy. So these two sentences, from the structure of the article, are also very meaningful and useful. Look at the battle scene described below. The author does not write battles in the way of ordinary novels, but describes them in the style of prose poems. Our common novel writing always describes the war between the enemy and us objectively and concretely. This is not the case here, but through the personal feelings and experiences of these women. The author's pen rolled into Lotus Lake with their boat and began to record the vision and hearing of the characters at that time: what they saw was Lotus Lake. "Several wild ducks swooped up and flew away screaming over the water." What I heard was "a row of guns ringing in their ears!" I hardly wrote a word to the enemy after the exchange of fire. The formal description of the work is what women think, hear and see: they think they are ambushed by the enemy and will die, so they turn over and jump into the water together. Gradually, it was obvious that the gunfire was only outward, and then they showed their heads again with the boatside. Not far away, they saw a man's face under the fat lotus leaf and his lower body growing in the water. Lotus has become a person? ..... this is entirely the feelings of the characters. It was a tense battle, but the author wrote, "Lotus has become a human?" Write about these women looking for their husbands everywhere. Isn't this all about the poetry of a war? It strongly expresses the nervous and happy feelings of these women. Describing through the feelings and experiences of the characters is often the way of writing poetry, which is conducive to rendering and strengthening the emotional color. Of course, there are some objective descriptions of the war, but only a few lines are obviously not the focus of the description. The point is to win the battle and save the trophy. Although this key point is an objective description, it is full of poetry and painting, full of banter and happy atmosphere of the characters, and can be read as prose poetry. Most of Sun Li's novels describe the life and struggle of people in central Hebei, especially Baiyangdian. He pays attention to working women, which is the greatest feature of his creation and also forms his unique artistic style. In this novel, seven young people were originally written to join the army and their first victory after joining the army. According to the general writing, it seems that these young people who joined the army are the main ones. But the works focus on their women. The handling of the theme in the work is very noteworthy. We should not only understand from personal artistic hobbies and habits, but also look deeper. In the old society, working women were imprisoned at the bottom of society and they longed for liberation. The degree of their liberation is often a standard for us to measure social liberation. Therefore, it is of great significance to focus on describing women's lives and thoughts and how they stand up step by step to participate in social struggles, reflecting the great changes brought about by the people's lives in the liberated areas and the revolutionary war to the people's spirit. Therefore, we believe that this style and feature in Sun Li's creation has profound historical and social reasons. "Lotus Lake" is only 5,000 words, but from here we can clearly see how the working women in the base areas stood up step by step to participate in social struggles, and we can clearly hear their footsteps. At first, we saw that these women still had the characteristics of ordinary housewives. Due to social and historical reasons, they are all guarding their narrow families and hope that their husbands will not leave. However, based on the party's education in the base areas and the education of everyone in the revolutionary war, they have positive demands. They understand that it is glorious for their husbands to stand in the forefront of the national liberation war, and they should support them and should not hinder them because of personal feelings and life reasons. They supported their husbands' participation in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression. Later, due to an accidental opportunity, they saw the war, experienced the storm and saw the world. They know that fighting is not difficult. In their own words, "as long as you don't panic, no one will lie there and shoot!" " "If it sinks, I will swim to find something. Definitely better than their water style, not afraid of deeper! " In other words, after a war, they have increased their knowledge and know that women can do what men can do. After a war, it aroused women's self-esteem and their ideological consciousness that they could fight like men. When Shui Sheng criticized them as "a group of backward elements", a woman put it well: "When we first joined the army, we were looked down upon. Two years later, we were considered worthless. Who is much behind! " So they formed a team. This autumn, they learned to shoot. The enemy came to "encirclement and suppression" and "they fought with their children and went in and out of the reed sea." In this way, the novel truly reflects how women in the base areas gradually broke the small family circle due to the education of war, got rid of the idea that men are superior to women left over from feudal society, and stepped into the ranks of social struggle and national struggle. They fought for the working women in China with practical actions and brought honor to the people of China. Do you think that the victory of China's revolutionary war will be far behind if even the lowest, most oppressed and least conscious women have risen? Of course it won't be too far. Therefore, this work, which focuses on reflecting the struggle life of the people in the base area from the female aspect, is also of great educational significance. (Selected from Reading and Appreciation of Modern Literature, Part II, Beijing Publishing House, 198 1 edition)

When the moon rises, the yard is cool and clean, and the broken reed eyebrows during the day are very wet, which can be used as seats. The woman sat in the middle of the yard, her fingers twisted with silky and slender reed eyebrows. Lu Mei is thin, jumping around in her arms. How many reeds are there in Baiyangdian Lake? I wonder how many reeds are produced every year? I don't know. I only know that every year when reeds fly and leaves turn yellow, the reeds in the whole lake are harvested and piled up, and in the square around Baiyangdian, they become the Great Wall of Reed. Women are tidying up their seats in the yard. How many seats have you knitted? In June, when the lake was full, countless ships carried silver-white mats for export. Soon, cities and villages all over the country have dense and exquisite mats. Everyone rushed to buy: "Good mat, Baiyangdian mat!" The woman knitted a seat. Soon under her body, it was woven into a big piece. She seems to be sitting on a piece of snow and white clouds. She sometimes looks at the lake, which is also a silvery white world. There is a thin transparent fog on the water. When the wind blows, it smells fresh lotus leaves and lotus fragrance. But the door hasn't been closed and my husband hasn't come back yet. My husband came back very late. The young man is only in his mid-twenties, wearing a big straw hat and a white jacket. His black trousers rolled up to his knees and he was barefoot. His name is Shui Sheng, the leader of the guerrillas in Zhuang Xiaowei and the leader of the party. Lead the guerrillas to a meeting in this district today. The woman looked up and asked with a smile, "Why did you come back so late today?" Stand up and serve a meal. Shui Sheng sat on the steps and said, "Don't take it after dinner." The woman is sitting on the mat again. She looked at her husband's face. She saw that his face was a little red and panting. She asked, "How many miles are they?" Shuisheng said, "It's still in that area. Dad? " The woman said, "Sleep." Li Xiaohua?' "And his grandfather went to collect shrimp baskets for half a day and went to bed early. Why don't they come back? " Shui Sheng smiled. The woman saw him laughing abnormally. "What's the matter, you?" Shui Sheng whispered, "I will go to the big army tomorrow." The woman's fingers shook, as if Wei Meizi had cut her hand. She put a finger in her mouth and sucked it. Shui Sheng said, "Today, the county party committee called us for a meeting. If the enemy sets up a stronghold in the same mouth again, Heduan village will become a line, and the situation of struggle in the lake will change. It was decided at the meeting to set up a regional group. I was the first to raise my hand to sign up. " The woman lowered her head and said, "You are always positive." Shui Sheng said, "I am a guerrilla captain and a village cadre. Naturally, I have to stop, and several of them have signed up. They are afraid to come back for fear that their families will drag their tails. Choose my representative and come back to talk to my family. They all think you are more open-minded. " The woman didn't speak. After a while, she said, "You go, I won't stop you. What should I do at home? " Shui Sheng pointed to her father's small room and told her to keep her voice down. Said: "At home, others will naturally take care of it. But we are small in Zhuangzi, and there are seven people joining the army this time. There are few young people in the village, so we can't rely entirely on others. You should do more things at home. Dad is old, and Xiaohua is still not sensible. " The woman's nose was a little sour, but she didn't cry. Just say, "I hope you understand the difficulties at home." Shui Sheng wanted to comfort her. Because there are too many things to consider and prepare, he only said two words: "You should bear a thousand pounds of burden first, and I will come back to thank you when you beat the devil away." After that, he went to someone else's house. He said he would talk to his father when he came back. Shui Sheng didn't come back until the cock crowed. The woman is still sitting in the yard waiting for him. She said, "You have something to tell me!" ""There's nothing more to say. I'm leaving. You must constantly improve, literacy and production. " "hmm." "Don't fall behind others in anything!" "Well, what else?" "Don't call the enemy to capture the traitor alive. If you catch it, you must fight hard with him. " The most important thing is that the woman promised him with tears in her eyes. The next day, the woman packed him a small package with a new coat, a new towel and a pair of new shoes. Those families also have these things, which can be taken to aquatic products. His family watched him go out. Father took Xiaohua by the hand and said to him, "Shui Sheng, you have done a glorious thing. I won't stop you. You can go safely. "I will take care of you, adults and children, and don't think about anything." All the men, women and children in the village also sent him out. Shui Sheng smiled at everyone and got on the boat. Women are somewhat withdrawn. Two days later, four young women gathered in house boat to discuss: "I heard that they are still there. I don't drag my tail, but I forgot a dress. " I have something important to say to him. The woman on the water said, "Listen to him, the Japanese will set up a stronghold in the same mouth ..." "Where it happened, let's go and come back soon." "I didn't want to go, but my mother-in-law insisted that I go and see him again. What's the point! " So these women secretly sat in the boat and rowed to the opposite Mazhuang. When they arrived in Mazhuang, they dared not look in the street and came to a relative's house at the head of the village. Relatives said: You came at a bad time. They were here last night and left at midnight. Nobody knows where to go. You don't have to worry about them. I heard that Shui Sheng became a platoon leader as soon as he arrived, and everyone was ecstatic ... Several women left with red faces, rocking the boat on the shore. It's almost noon now, there are no clouds in Wan Li, and there is still some cool wind on the water. The wind blows from the south, from the reed tips on the rice seedlings. There is no boat on the water, and the water is like endless diving silver. Several women were a little disappointed and sad, and they all called him a cruel thief in their hearts. But young people always think of happy things, and women are particularly easy to forget those unhappy things. Soon, they were joking again. "Look, just go." "Being able to panic (meaning happy) is more panic than anything else, than marrying a new girl during the New Year-I have never seen him so panic!" "It's not a problem to tie a horse stake." "No, I have no reins!" "When he arrives in the army, he is sure to forget his family." "That's true. We lived in some youth teams at home and sang with our necks upturned all day. We have never been so happy in our lives. When they have nothing to do, I will think foolishly: it's time to bow my head. Guess what they did? Draw many circles on my screen wall with white powder, squat in the yard one by one, aim at that with a gun, and sing again! " They paddled the boat gently, and the water on both sides of the boat was wow, wow, wow. I fished a water chestnut out of the water. Water chestnut is still very tender and small, milky white. Thrown into the water. The water chestnut tree floats on the water and grows up again. "Do you know where they are now?" "Who cares? Maybe he ran to the horizon! " They all looked up into the distance. "alas! There's a boat coming over there. " "alas! Japanese devil, look at that dress! " "Shake it!" The ship rocked forward desperately. They may have some regrets in their hearts and shouldn't come so rashly; Maybe you have some resentment against people who have gone far away. But think at once, don't think about anything, shake it quickly, and the boat will follow you closely. The big ship is in hot pursuit. Fortunately, these young women grew up in Baiyangdian and rocked the boat fast. This ship is like a jumping barracuda leaving Shui Pi. They have been dealing with this boat since childhood, and they drive as fast as weaving and sewing clothes. If the enemy catches up, jump into the water and die! The big ship behind is coming fast. That is clearly a devil! These young women gritted their teeth and stopped their hearts. Their oars didn't panic. The water is running loudly on both sides, running, running! "Shake in the Lotus Lake! The water there is shallow and the big ship can't get through. " They rushed to a few acres of lotus lake with unknown size, and the thick layers of big lotus leaves spread out against the sun, just like an iron wall. The pink lotus arrow sticks out high. Is a sentry watching Baiyangdian. They rolled into the Lotus Lake, and finally, with a strong shake, the boat jumped into the Lotus Lake. Several wild ducks flew up, screaming and flying over the water. A row of gunshots rang in their ears! The whole Lotus Lake shook. They thought they were ambushed by the enemy and would die, so they turned over and jumped into the water together. Gradually, it was obvious that the gunfire was only outward, and then they showed their heads again with the boatside. Not far away, they saw a man's face under the generous lotus leaf, and his lower body grew in the water. Lotus has become a person? Isn't that our aquatic life? Looking around again, everyone soon found her husband's face, ah! It's them! And those soldiers hiding under the big lotus leaf are shooting at the enemy with rapt attention, without looking at them. Gunfire, three or five rows of guns, throwing grenades, rushed out of the lotus lake. The Grenade sank the enemy's big ship, and everything sank. There is only the smell of smoke and gunpowder on the water. The soldiers laughed loudly and salvaged the spoils. They began to sink to the bottom and fished out the big fish again. They scrambled to take out the enemy's guns, bullet belts, and then bags of soaked flour and rice. Aquatic beat the surface of the water to catch up with something rolling on the water wave, which was a biscuit packed in a delicate paper box. Women covered in water are sitting on their boats again. Shui Sheng picked up the carton, held it high with one hand and slapped the water with the other hand to avoid sinking. Yelling at Lotus Lake: "Come out!" It seems with great anger. They had to roll the boat out. Suddenly, a man came out from under their boat, and only the woman on the water recognized it as the captain of the district team. The man wiped a handful of water on his face and asked them, "What are you doing here?" The woman on the water said, "I sent them some more clothes!" " The monitor turned to Shui Sheng and said, "Are they all from your village?" "Not who they are, a group of backward elements! "After that, I threw the paper box on the woman's boat, swam around, sank to the bottom of the water, and swam far away. The monitor made a joke. He said, "You didn't come for nothing. If it weren't for you, our ambush wouldn't be so thorough. However, the task has been completed, and it's time to go back and dry the clothes. The situation is still tense! "The soldiers have put all the trophies that have been salvaged on their boats and are ready to go. A man picked a big lotus leaf and put it on his head to ward off the midday sun. Several young women threw them small packages that had fallen out of the water, and the soldiers' three boats ran southeast and flew away like arrows. Soon disappeared in the smoke waves on the water at noon. Several young women rowed the boat, one by one, like drowning chickens, rushing home. Along the way, they laughed again because they were so excited. A man sitting at the bow with his face back pouted and said, "Look at the way they cross, we love to take care of them when we see them!" " "Ah, it seems that we have lost someone to them." They laughed themselves. Today's incident is not glorious, but: "We don't have guns. If we had guns, we wouldn't run to Lotus Lake, but we would fight the devils in big stores! """I saw war today. What's so surprising about fighting? As long as you don't panic, no one will lie there and shoot! ""If it sinks, I'll swim to find something. Definitely better than their water style, not afraid of deeper! " "Aquatic sister-in-law, we have to form a team when we go back, or we can go out later!" "When you first became a soldier, you looked down on us. Two years later, you think we are worthless. Who is much behind! " This autumn, they learned to shoot. When catching fish with ice in winter, they boarded the ice boat one by one like meteors and looked back and forth. When the enemy besieged the 100-mu reed pond, they fought bloody battles with the soldiers and went in and out of the reed sea.

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Lotus Lake is Sun Li's masterpiece. In the fierce and cruel background of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, which is related to the survival of the nation, the novel chooses a small corner of Baiyangdian, showing the gentle, affectionate, loyal and brave character and spirit of rural women. In the smoke of war, the love between husband and wife, the love of home and country, pure humanity and lofty character are as beautiful and brilliant as the blooming lotus in Baiyangdian. Problem solving guide 1. This question is mainly to guide students to understand the plot clues and then understand the theme of the novel. To add subtitles, it is necessary to grasp the main content of each part to summarize. Reference answer: (1) Say goodbye to husband and wife; Visiting relatives in distress; Go into battle to kill the enemy; (2) sending her husband to join the army; Looking for a husband to meet an enemy; Help your husband destroy the enemy. (3) Send the husband to join the army and bid farewell; There is no danger in finding a husband in the face of the enemy; Help your husband to destroy the enemy and win a great victory: * * Establish a united front and strive for progress. Second, the language of this novel is very distinctive. Through specific language analysis, cultivate students' sensitivity to language. 1.( 1) Shui Sheng said, "... I was the first to sign up. "The woman looked down and said," You are always positive. " -"Head Down" shows the character of aquatic sister-in-law. She is a traditional and virtuous rural woman. She is very obedient to her husband. She said, "You are always positive." There is a trace of blame, but there is no objection to the husband signing up first. (2) The woman didn't speak. After a while, she said, "You go, I won't stop you. What do you do at home? " First of all, it shows that I am not against my husband joining the army, but "what should I do at home?" Show her love for her husband. (3) The woman's nose was a little sour, but she didn't cry. She just said, "I hope you understand the difficulties at home." -aquatic sister-in-law is reluctant to leave her husband, but she supports her husband's behavior. Shui Sheng showed that she knew her own "difficulties" (actually her husband's attachment), and that her "nose was a little sour" to reassure her husband that she was considerate of her own mind. Shui Sheng came back as soon as the rooster crowed. The woman is still sitting in the yard waiting for him. She said, "If you have anything to say, please tell me." -"Plain" shows that aquatic sister-in-law feels unbearable for her husband to leave her to join the army. "There is nothing to say. I'm leaving. You must constantly improve, literacy and production. " "hmm." "Don't fall behind others in anything." "well. What else? " -"Mm-hmm" and "Mm-hmm" show the gentleness and suppleness of aquatic sister-in-law. "Don't call the enemy to capture the traitor alive. If you catch it, you have to fight hard with them. " This is the most important sentence. The woman promised him in tears. -after listening to her husband's main "exhortation", Shui Sheng sister-in-law shed tears. Tears does not show Shui Sheng's sister-in-law's cowardice, but only shows her strong character. A tearful promise is her faithful promise to her husband. 2. See "Notes on Text Appreciation". Third, this topic mainly allows students to understand characters from the perspective of social progress, and pay attention to analyzing characters from the perspective of historical development. Xianglinsao, Cui Cui and Shuisao are all ordinary rural women in China, but their life paths are totally different. Xianglinsao lived in the late feudal era, and the wind of modern civilization could not blow into the closed and conservative Luzhen, so Xianglinsao could only be destroyed by the cold and dark social reality. Cui Cui lives in a closed rural area, and he can't break the lonely wall, and finally he can't grasp his own destiny. Aquatic sister-in-law lived during the national anti-Japanese war and made great social progress, especially in the base areas. Women's liberation has begun to take root in people's hearts, so aquatic sister-in-law can grow from virtuous and docile village women to anti-Japanese fighters.

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1. Lotus Lake (Lin Zhihao) fully embodies the artistic characteristics of Sun Li, a writer with his own artistic style in novel creation. Lotus Lake is his short masterpiece, which describes a pleasant story that happened in Baiyangdian area during War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's period. Seven rural youths joined the army. Because they left in a hurry, they didn't have time to say goodbye to their families except in the water. Their wives miss them very much and want to see them. But I didn't find it. On the way home, their ship ran into a transport ship of the Japanese invaders, and the enemy chased after them. Fortunately, their husband's team ambushed here and gave the enemy a head-on blow. These women also inadvertently met their husbands and made contributions to luring the enemy into the encirclement. This short story fully embodies the distinctive features of Sun Li's creation. Here I want to talk about three points. First of all, the author is good at writing the rich inner world of characters with concise pen and ink. Especially for women, it is especially profound and meticulous. Please look at the first part of the work, which is a description of Shui Sheng who signed up in the district and met his wife at home: the woman looked up and asked with a smile, "Why did you come back so late today?" Stand up and serve a meal. Shui Sheng sat on the steps and said, "Don't take it after dinner." The woman is sitting on the mat again. She looked at her husband's face. She saw that his face was a little red and he was panting. She asked, "How many people are there?" At that time, the struggle situation was very tense. My husband came back so late and his face was abnormal. The woman immediately noticed and worried about what had happened. When she saw that only her husband came back and the other six didn't, the first sentence asked, "How many of them?"