Let's not talk about the content of this poem. First of all, the rhyme is not good. The "heart" is a flat tone, which makes the beginning of the poem very low. If you press it down in turn, it will only get lighter and lighter, just like your word "light", but it is difficult to find rhyme under the level tone. So I suggest you change the rhyme.
Secondly, the rhyme of the five elements is very strict. One sentence, two sentences and four sentences must rhyme.
Again, the five wonders require four sentences to be correct. What is confrontation? These are just two sets of opposing sentences. The waning moon is relatively blooming, nouns are relative nouns, and dancing is relative. "Verbs are the opposite of verbs. Everything else is basically not confrontation. If you understand this in the first sentence, I think you are a slip of the pen, but it should be "lonely heart" versus "rambling"
Let's talk about the origin of the five wonders first. The five verses should be evolved from the first four sentences of the five laws, namely the first couplet and parallel couplet of the five laws. This is the most demanding of the five laws. In the general seven laws, the first two couplets are the beginning and inheritance of the central idea.
Of course, I think the last two sentences of your poem are good. Especially the last sentence "What do you expect?" . So if you want to change the first two sentences, use the word "evening" as rhyme.
Finally, talk about the arrangement of the content. I infer from the title that you want to write a sad poem that lovers can't meet. Judging from the arrangement of poems, you can use beautiful scenery to set off your deeper and deeper sadness.
To sum up, I suggest you change the first two sentences. You might as well change them to "bright moon, light and shadow, solitary clothes, dancing flowers." The general meaning of this sentence is: the bright moonlight shines on the poet, and the fallen flowers outside the window dance on the crystal clear ground. "What a beautiful scenery, it's like a day with you, but the moon is sunny and round." At such a helpless moment, because I can't meet you, I can only caress heptachlor and tell her how much I miss her. When can we see the bright moon again and repeat the good old days?
So change it to
miss
The moon shadows the lonely clothes,
Dancing among the flowers.
My heart sends my thoughts,
What can you expect?
Come on! Believe in your potential!