Seeking the Conciseness of Modern Children's Poetry

( 1)

pomegranate

Pomegranate blossoms.

Aunt Xia tied it.

A bright bow

Pomegranate fruit is ripe

It's Qiu's mother shaking it.

Harvest Kurenai Rin

(2)

Bud bud

Spring is coming.

The weather is very warm.

Come out quickly.

Bud bud

Don't just show your head.

How beautiful it is outside the bark.

Come out quickly.

The sun will give you

Put on green clothes

Spring breeze will give you.

Sweet dew

(3)

lights on fishing boats

The night is quiet.

river water

He's a good boy.

Listen to Mother Moon.

go to bed

The fisherman lit the fishing fire.

river water

It's like opening your eyes

talk/speak in one's sleep

(4)

bamboo shoots

calmly

Arch out of the ground

I want to inquire about it

In spring

The secret of tree green

The news of flowers blooming