1' s two pictures of "outside and inside" constitute a huge contrast-they are really "a thin layer of paper", reflecting the disparity between the rich and the poor and class differences, vividly embodying class consciousness, expressing the poet's sympathy for the lower classes, and exposing and worrying about unfair social reality. Reading this poem can't help but remind people of Du Gongbu's famous sentence "The wine and meat in Zhumen stink, and the bones freeze to death on the road". -I think: reflecting social problems, sympathizing with the weak and caring for the people and the country is one of the major missions of literature and poetry; As long as there are unfair, inhuman and unjust phenomena in society, such a theme will not be out of date, and such a poetic heart will be precious.
2 according to the new rhyme, every sentence rhymes; There is no specific rhythm, but the feeling of reading aloud is more natural and harmonious. Oral English into poetry has obviously broken the pattern of five or seven words in ancient poetry in terms of sentence patterns and sentence rhythms. At the beginning of the creation of new poetry, judging from the freedom and innovation embodied in this poem, it should be said that the pace is greater than that of Hu Shi and others at the same time, so some people say that this is an unparalleled contribution to the innovation of poetry.