Golden childhood composition, I just want to comment, I have written the composition, hurry hurry hurry!

Very good, this article has unique thinking and reality. In fact, such a composition is very easy to write. Think about the theme first, then search for good words on the internet, then organize yourself and write your own fun in the composition, so that the composition will be lively and interesting. However, the maximum number of words in this composition is only the fourth grade level, and there are too few good words and sentences. It's best to add some feelings about this happiness. The content is too ordinary, so it's better to go deeper. Write the process of playing clearly and add your own actions.