Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is approaching.
Everything looked like I had just woken up, and I opened my eyes with joy. The mountains moistened, the water rose and the sun blushed.
The grass crawled out of the soil, tender and green. In the garden and in the field, look, there are many such trees. Sit, lie down, roll twice, kick a few balls, run a few laps, grab a few laps. The wind is quiet and the grass is soft.
Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are all in full bloom, and you won't let me or I won't let you. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. Flowers are sweet; When I closed my eyes, the tree seemed to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears. Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around. Wildflowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named and unnamed, scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still flashing.
"Blowing your face is not cold, willow trees become a shade", yes, like a mother's hand touching you. The wind brought the smell of new ploughing, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air. Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Calling friends proudly showed off his crisp voice and sang melodious songs, which set each other off in harmony with the light wind and flowing water. The piccolo of the shepherd boy on the cow's back rang all day at this time.
Rain is the most common and lasts for three or two days. Don't be upset. You see, like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. The leaves are bright green, and the grass is green to the eyes. At night, the lights turned on, and a little dim light set off a quiet and peaceful night. In the countryside, on the path and by the stone bridge, some people are walking slowly with umbrellas, and some farmers are working in the fields, wearing wrinkled hats. Their houses are scattered and silent in the rain.
There are more kites in the sky and more children on the ground. Every family in urban and rural areas, old and young, came out one by one. Relax, be full of energy and do your own thing. "A year's plan lies in spring" has just begun, and there is plenty of time and hope.
Spring is like a newborn doll. It's new from head to toe and still growing.
Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward.
Creation background
The writing time of this article is about 1933. At this time, the author Zhu Ziqing had just returned from roaming in Europe, had a happy marriage with Ms. Chen Zhuyin, and then had children. At the same time, he served as the head of the literature department in China, Tsinghua University. His life is full of beautiful things.
works appreciation
theme
The theme of this article is yearning for the realm of freedom. Although Zhu Ziqing lived in the dirty and dark old China at that time, his spiritual world was clear and his spirit was still upward. Zhu Ziqing wrote his healthy and noble aesthetic taste, infinite love for beautiful things and unremitting pursuit of life ideals into the article. Melt into a poetic language. Therefore, the whole article is full of profound poetry and has produced enduring artistic charm.
"Spring"-In this poetic Ode to Spring, it is actually full of the writer's thoughts and feelings, life pursuit and even personality pursuit in a specific period, and it also shows the traditional cultural accumulation in the writer's bones and his yearning for the realm of freedom. After 1927, Zhu Ziqing has been searching for and creating an ideal world in the depths of his soul-the world of dreams, which is used to place his "rather restless" boxing heart, resist external interference, make himself "independent" in claustrophobic study, and achieve his academic achievements. Spring describes and eulogizes a lush spring, but it is a vivid portrayal of Zhu Ziqing's inner world. Zhu Ziqing's "spring scenery" is not the warm and humid spring scenery in his hometown of Jiangsu and Zhejiang, nor the magnificent and abundant spring scenery in the northern suburbs, nor the sketch faithfully copied by the painter, but the artistic picture brewed by the writer under the inspiration and inspiration of nature. There are too many mind codes hidden in this picture.
Writing method
Rhetoric art
Zhu Ziqing's prose Spring is full of endless poems and paintings. He integrated the "emotion" of personality beauty with the "scenery" of natural beauty, and created an artistic realm of blending emotion with scenery and scenery. In this essay with only 30 sentences, Zhu. More than 20 kinds of figures of speech are used, and the frequency is amazing. The work runs through the whole article with "spring" and consists of three parts: looking forward to spring, painting spring and praising spring, which are in-depth and interlocking. The author uses figures of speech as the "pigment" of spring and vividly depicts the colorful picture of early spring.
1, looking forward to the spring return.
"Looking forward to it, looking forward to it, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is coming soon." At the beginning of the work, the author used a repetitive figure of speech. The repeated use of the verb "hope" suddenly, forcefully and eagerly reflects people's urgent mood of looking forward to the arrival of spring. Then, an anthropomorphic figure of speech is used to convey the message of spring. Spring is popular, sensible and lovely. People are more familiar with the footsteps of spring. It's coming, it's near, and it's what people are eagerly looking forward to after the March 9 winter. Here it is. The author describes people's longing for spring and great joy in welcoming it.
2. Spring passion painting
"Everything looks like I just woke up and I opened my eyes with joy", using the metaphor of "personification". In the author's pen, the spring breeze blows gently, the earth warms up and everything recovers, just like a person who just woke up, "happily opened his eyes" in early spring, what a faint breath; Early spring, what a hazy sight. "The mountains are moist, the water is rising and the sun is blushing." Among them, The Sun is Shame on Red personifies the sun with the figure of speech of personification, which not only captures the characteristics of spring, but also shows the warmth and charm of spring. The whole sentence constitutes a parallelism sentence, and the paraphrases of "personification" and "parallelism" outline a bold picture of mountains, water and the sun from the big picture, and briefly outline the general outline of early spring. Pave the way for the following deep-seated and multi-angle description of spring scenery. It is particularly worth mentioning that the mountain described by Zhu Ziqing with "Langrun" makes the mountain shine and is particularly free and easy.
The figure of speech of "grass is tender and green" uses the rhetoric of "overlapping words" and "personification". The words "sneak" and "drill" vividly show the tenacious vitality of grass. As the saying goes, "One year will wither", "Wildfire will not completely devour them, and they will be tall again in the spring breeze." This also symbolizes the reproduction of human society from generation to generation and the evolution towards a better and more advanced society forever. "In the garden, in the field, look, all over the place" is a rhetorical device of "repetition". Green grass "a large area", full of fields, green world can be seen everywhere, so that readers can feel how attractive spring grass is, with a strong sense of hierarchy. "Sitting, lying down, playing two rolls, kicking a few balls, running a few laps, playing hide-and-seek and catching a few laps" is a rhetorical device of "parallelism". In this warm season of the earth. People bid farewell to the frozen world of powder makeup and jade, and came to the green lawn to "sit and lie" and bathe in the spring sunshine, which is very comfortable. Carry out various outdoor activities with the warm breeze. Exercise, enhance physical fitness. Keep people in high spirits.
"Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are all in full bloom." The combination of these figures of speech vividly depicts the opening of peaches, apricots and pears. "Red as fire, pink as chardonnay, white as snow", three figures of speech are used together. These three figurative sentences constitute a parallelism sentence. From the perspective of color, the author describes peach blossom, apricot blossom and pear blossom in a colorful and vivid way. It is true that flowers compete with each other. These flowers are full of the fragrance of life, and also make the color of the whole spring scene richer and more moist.
"The flowers are sweet, the eyes are closed, and the trees seem to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears." Figures of speech are synaesthesia and parallelism. "Flower" is vision, and the author transplanted it into the taste and said it was "sweet". Looking at the spring flowers and thinking of autumn fruits full of trees-"peaches, Xinger and pears", people are really addicted to the fruit harvest. This kind of imagination not only broadens the horizon of description, but also renders the loveliness of spring flowers from another angle. "Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers. The figure of speech of "personification" used by butterflies of different sizes flying around. A word "noisy". It is very appropriate to personalize bees. This description shows not only sound. It symbolizes a noisy and boiling scene, and it also symbolizes a scene of spring and vitality. " Wildflowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named, unnamed, scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still blinking "is a combination of" metaphor "and the application of" metaphor "and" personification ". The wild flowers in the grass are "like eyes, like stars, still blinking", which is very vivid. It is these small wild flowers, together with other flowers, that form a big family of spring flowers, making the land in spring look beautiful and enchanting.
"It's nice to blow your face cold, like a mother's hand touching you" is the application of "quotation" and "metaphor". The sentence first quotes the poem of Zhi Nan, a monk in the Southern Song Dynasty, which is used to describe the warmth and softness of the spring breeze, which is very caring and sensible.
Touching You Like a Mother's Hand in Spring Breeze uses the figure of speech of "metaphor", which makes people feel very cordial and vivid, easily evokes people's childhood memories and feels the warmth and greatness of maternal love. "Birds are happy when they nest in flowers and leaves. Call friends to show off her crisp voice and sing a melody that blends with the light wind and flowing water. " This sentence uses personification figures of speech. Birds come to "show off" their sounds, and their melody "echoes the breeze and running water". The author uses cheerful performances such as bird singing to set off people's happy mood, reflecting that spring brings joy to people, birds and all living things on earth.
"You see, it's like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof." Figures of speech such as metaphor, parallelism and personification are used. The author compares the continuous spring rain to cow hair, flower needle and filament, and these three metaphors are used together to form a parallelism. Then use a word "weaving" to personify the spring rain, which is also described as extremely wet. "The leaves are bright green and the grass is green enough to stare at your eyes" is a broad (not strict) "duality". Through this rhetorical device, the author deepens the "green" of leaves and the "green" of grass in the spring scene, making the whole picture more colorful. The trees, grasses and other plants depicted in the painting all show vitality.
"Going to the countryside, on the path, by the stone bridge, people are walking slowly with umbrellas; There are also farmers working in the fields, wearing cockroaches and hats. " Among them, "On the Road, by the Stone Bridge" and "Wearing a Hat" use the rhetoric of "duality" to describe the activities of all kinds of people in rural areas. Holding an umbrella, walking on the path and walking by the stone bridge, I feel very relaxed. I am slowly experiencing the drizzle in early spring. The farmers, on the other hand, were busy with the good harvest that year, and the spring was beautiful.
Their house is sparse and silent in the rain, which uses the figures of speech of "reduplication" and "personification". The "overlap" here embodies the beauty of sound and sense of language. Silent in the Rain personifies the house, portrays the house dormant for a winter more spiritually, and decorates the countryside in misty rain and early spring.
"Every family in the city and countryside, old and young, came out one by one, as if in a hurry." * * * used three "reduplicated words" rhetoric. The author enhances the complexity of language sense through the complexity of voice and the harmony of intonation through the harmony of voice.
"Relax, be full of energy and do your duty" uses two repetitive figures of speech and a dual figure of speech. The repetition of the words "Shu Huo" and "Hodge" makes the first two paragraphs parallel, consciously highlighting those who have been "dormant" for a winter, unwilling to live up to the wonderful spring scenery, striding into the spring, gathering 120,000 potentials with full enthusiasm and devoting themselves wholeheartedly to all work. "A year's plan lies in spring", which is just the beginning, and there are a lot of efforts and hopes "is the application of" quotation "and" pun ". Farmers seize the farming season and are busy ploughing and planting in spring in order to have food and clothing in the coming year. People in other industries also seize the great opportunity of spring and strive to realize the beautiful vision of life.
While getting close to, perceiving and depicting nature, Zhu Ziqing praised the thoughts and feelings of people who worked hard in beautiful spring.
3. Praise of Spring
"Spring is like a newborn doll, new from head to toe. It grows "comparing spring to a doll", which is both "metaphor" and "personification". Spring is not recognized, felt and touched like other things, but the author compares it to a newborn doll and gives it new life.
"Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile." These ten days have used both metaphor and personification to compare spring to a "little girl". Spring has grown up and become a "beautifully dressed" little girl. She is graceful, natural and graceful, and "walks with a smile", which is really popular. The development and progress of society will make more children grow up healthily, which is the beautiful wish of human society. "Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms, waist and legs, leading us forward" is a metaphor and personification. Compare spring to a "young man" with iron arms and waist. He has ideals, courage, achievements and responsibility. This "robust youth" in spring is "leading us forward." Here, the author indulges in praising spring. It reveals that spring has unstoppable creativity and infinite hope. Therefore, we should follow the footsteps of vigorous spring to create a better and happier new life.
Three figurative sentences constitute the figure of speech "parallelism". With three concrete metaphors, the author eulogizes spring step by step, making his works magnificent and enriching the whole spring scene. The author also wants to prove that spring is fresh, beautiful, cheerful and has strong vitality. The work ends with these three visualized sentences, which are concise, lively and expressive.
Throughout the whole article, Spring clearly shows the fresh pastoral style and cheerful artistic conception. It is a hymn, singing the beautiful melody of spring; It was a passionate poem, expressing hope and nostalgia for spring; This is a beautiful picture that shows the breath and charm of spring.
Famous comments
Modern essayist Zhu Ziqing's vernacular prose had a certain influence on prose writers after the May 4th Movement. Zhu Ziqing's prose can be said to be a variant of poetry, which has the artistic characteristics of poetry. Among them, "Spring" is full of poetry. It composes a hymn of spring with bright and euphemistic poetic language, skillful poetic expression and poetic artistic conception of scene blending.
-Yin Yuxiang
Brief introduction of the author
Zhu Ziqing (1898165438+1October 22nd-1948 August 12), formerly known as Zhu Zihua, was named Qiushi. Originally from Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, I was born in Donghai County, Jiangsu Province. Modern essayist, poet, scholar and democracy fighter [6]. Proses include Juncus, Spring, You and Me, Green, Back, Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, London Miscellanies, etc. There are also poetry collections Snow Dynasty, Poetry Traces, Literary Works, etc., such as Yan Shizhi's Compilation, On Elegance and Custom Appreciation, etc.