Copy a poem and write your feelings.

1. Write an essay about this poem.

Write an article about the poem 1 Write a composition about the feelings of this poem.

The rewriting of notes left for an absent ecluse is full of mountains and forests. The mountains are misty, just like a fairyland.

Jia Dao, a well-dressed poet, is walking towards a family at the foot of the mountain. Next to the house, a boy grabbed the branches under the pine tree and chased the dog to play! Jia Dao stepped forward and thought, This should be the hermit's residence.

"Excuse me, sir ..." The young man asked curiously. Jia Dao explained, "I walked thousands of miles to find your husband.

I wonder if the boy knows where Mr. Wang is going. ""Oh, that's too bad! My master went up the mountain to collect medicine half an hour ago. "

"Alas ..." Jia Dao disappointed. At this moment, the boy spoke again: "My master is on this mountain …" "Is this true? Then can you tell me where he is? " Jia Dao interrupted the young man.

"But ... it's foggy now, and I don't know where he is ..." He was full of expectation and completely disappointed. When he returned to his hometown, he wrote a lyric poem helplessly: When I asked your students under a pine tree, "My teacher," he replied, "went to pick herbs."

However, through these clouds, how can I know which corner of the mountain it is facing? . Teacher's comment: The young author transformed, reorganized and re-expressed the language of the text, successfully rewritten this ancient poem into a narrative, and wrote down the scene described in a note.

This article describes the scenery in the mountains and the dialogue between the characters well. The author can also try to rewrite it from the perspective of the first person.

One clear day in Wan Li, I came to visit my old friend in the mountains with a happy mood. In the mountains, colorful wild flowers are scattered under lush trees, surrounded by a group of green grass.

There are all kinds of bugs crawling on the flowers and plants. They make very strange noises. Bees and butterflies are dancing on the flowers ... I am fascinated by the scenery in front of me, as if I were in a fairyland on earth.

Ah, the scenery here is really beautiful! I enjoy the beautiful scenery here while walking. Unconsciously, I came to a towering pine tree and saw a child playing with a dog.

I walked up to him and asked softly, "Do you know anyone, little friend?" I am his good friend. "The child stopped playing, stood up, looked at me from top to bottom and smiled mischievously:" Of course, he is my master. He just went to get the medicine. "

"So you are his apprentice. I really don't know Mount Tai, so where is he? " I asked respectfully. The child said, "well, I'm not sure about this." I only know that Master is in this mountain. "

I looked up and looked down at the place where the child pointed: Wow, this mountain is full of forests and clouds. How can I find an old friend? "alas!" I can't help feeling a little disappointed. But then I thought: my old friend likes to live in seclusion in the mountains, see the mountains and rivers and collect medicines. I shouldn't disturb his life.

If only I could get rid of the secular world like him and live in seclusion in the mountains! I looked at the sky and said to myself, "Good friend, I will come to see you again and catch up with you in the future. At that time, I will stay here for a few more days and experience the life of wild cranes in the clouds! " On this day, Jia Dao went to Xishan to find a friend named * * *.

Tired of human intrigue, I live in seclusion in the mountains and cultivate my self-cultivation, isolated from the world. Jia Dao and * * * have been bosom friends since childhood. In recent years, Jia Dao has become the host of Qingyun Temple, and there are few letters. * * * has disappeared. Jia Dao has been giving lectures outside these days, and overheard people talking about * * *, so he went to Xishan happily to find him. The scenery at the foot of the western hills is very beautiful. From here, you can see the clouds on the top of the mountain, flashing. If you look carefully, the clouds will become lovely little white sheep, birds and lively fish.

Jia Dao looked at all this and said to himself, "No wonder * * lives here! This is really beautiful. " As he spoke, he hurried on.

He crossed the green bamboo forest, the clear stream and the grotesque rocks, and came to a misty pine forest. Jia Dao was tired, too, so he sat on a big stone to have a rest. At this moment, a dazzling butterfly flew over. Its wings were blue and purple, so beautiful.

Butterflies fly around in the misty pine forest, adding a lot of mystery to it. Jia Dao also had enough rest and went on his way. As he walked, he thought, What a beautiful fairyland! * * * I really enjoy living here.

After a while, Jia Dao came to the top of the mountain and saw a house not far away. He thought: This must be * * *' s home, so he walked forward. I saw a child playing with a dog with a branch. He thought, maybe this is the neighbor of * * *.

He stepped forward and asked, "Hello, little friend, do you know that there lives a man named * * *?" When the child saw someone asking him, he drove the dog back to the kennel and said, "Hello, sir, my name is Zihui, and * * * is my master. What can I do for you? " Jia Dao was overjoyed and quickly replied, "I am his friend. I want to talk to him. Can you take me to see him? " The child said regretfully, "Sorry, my master went to collect medicine." Hearing this, Jia Dao was in a good mood and suddenly fell to the bottom.

But he thought: ask him where he got the medicine, maybe he can be found. So, he asked again, "Where did your master go to collect medicine?" The child replied, "It's in this mountain."

Hearing this, Jia Dao had another glimmer of hope and asked, "Can you take me?" The child said regretfully, "Oh dear! Unfortunately, it's too foggy in the western hills to know the way. I really can't help you. " Jia Dao was desperate after hearing this and left. He sighed and hurried back, but then thought: although he didn't see any friends, he enjoyed the scenery of the western hills! Although I ran away in vain this time, I also saw a good scenery! He went back and wrote a poem by feeling: when I asked your student under a pine tree, he replied, "My teacher went to pick herbs."

However, through these clouds, how can I know which corner of the mountain it is facing? .

2. Kneel for a poem

Arriving at the border (Wang Wei)

Riding a bike to visit the border and passing through Juyan County.

Pengpeng also floated out of Korea, and the geese heading north also flew into the sky.

The vast desert is lonely, and the Yellow River sets the yen.

Xiao Guan was escorted by Ran Yan when riding a horse.

"Lonely smoke in the desert, the long river sets the yen" is a famous sentence written by Wang Guowei, who is close to you, describing the strange and magnificent scenery outside the frontier fortress after entering it. The picture is wide and the artistic conception is magnificent. The frontier desert is boundless, so the word "big" of "desert" is used. The frontier fortress is desolate and wonders. The smoke lit by the beacon tower is particularly eye-catching, so it is called "solitary smoke". A word "solitary" describes the monotony of the landscape, and a word "straight" behind it also shows its strength and perseverance. There are no mountains and trees in the desert, and the Yellow River flowing through it cannot express the poet's feelings unless a word "long" is used. Sunset, originally easy to give people a sentimental impression, uses the word "round" here, but it gives people a feeling of warmth and boundless. The word "circle" and "straight" not only accurately describes the desert scene, but also shows the author's deep affection. The poet skillfully blends his loneliness into the description of the vast natural scenery. The forty-eighth chapter of A Dream of Red Mansions said: "The desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen." . How straight do you want to smoke? The sun is naturally round. The word' straight' seems unreasonable, and the word' round' seems too vulgar. When I closed the book and remembered, I seemed to have seen this scene. You have to look for two more words of these two, but you can't find two words. The advantage of "this is" poetry is indescribable, but it is vivid when you want to leave; "It seems unreasonable, and it is reasonable to want to go." This passage also reveals the superb artistic realm of these two poems.

A famous saying or a poem expresses my feelings.

Love: Love pushes me to you like the tide.

I love my teacher, and I love truth more.

It is not that I don't love Caesar, but that I love Rome more.

Missing: thousands of miles apart, each in a mile a day, the road is long, meet safely. ..... Sijun is old and old.

Parting: A person who leaves the West Tianyang Pass for no reason.

Carnival: Sing my songs loudly and drink my wine.

Nobody understands: I don't understand the darkness of day and night.

Trouble: if you ask how much leisure is, a wisp of smoke, the wind in the city, and the plum yellow rain.

Ask how much sorrow you can have, just like a river flowing eastward.

Loneliness: cold and clear, sad and sad.

The phoenix tree is raining and dripping at dusk.

4. The feeling of writing poetry

China is a country of poetry. Poetry has a long history, famous artists come forth in large numbers, and numerous works by famous artists are spectacular in Chinese civilization. Poetry expresses the author's feelings with its concise language and beautiful words.

Opening the floodgate of memory, I found my favorite poem. That is the work of Du Mu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty.

Hiking. The four lines in the poem read: "The stone path in the cold mountain is far away, and there are people in the depths of the white clouds. Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February. "

This poem describes the beautiful scenery that the poet saw when he walked in the mountains in late autumn. The poet skillfully captured several scenery he saw on his way up the mountain: from a distance, it was a winding mountain road paved with rocks. When he reached the top of the mountain, he looked at the place surrounded by white clouds in the mountain, and several families appeared faintly. The maple leaves around him were like fire, which was even more beautiful, far better than the flowers in early spring and February. Here, there are white clouds, red leaves and bright colors; Mountain roads, maple forests and people's homes are harmonious and warm; Some poets stopped to watch the night view of Fenglin because of their love, which made the picture more affectionate. Writing autumn scenery, the whole poem has no sad and desolate atmosphere. Especially the last sentence, comparing maple leaves with flowers is very novel. The flowers in February are beautiful and charming, but when the spring breeze blows and the spring rain suddenly rises, they fall into the mud and go with the running water. But the maple leaves turned red in the struggle with autumn wind, autumn rain and autumn frost, showing great vitality. This is why the poet especially likes the maple grove. It is also the charm of this poem that has been passed down through the ages and is widely known.

Walking in the garden of ancient poems, we can enjoy all kinds of ancient poems. Farewell, spring, summer, autumn and winter, romantic scenery and scenic spots in ancient poems are all the legacy left by ancient poets to our descendants and the treasures of the Chinese nation.

5. Write a composition about the feelings of a poem.