Poetry: Xin Qiji, the author of Qingpingle Village, in the Song Dynasty, the eaves of Mao were low and the streams were covered with green grass. Drunk Wu local drunk, gentle voice, white-haired old man who is it? The eldest son is weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream, and the second son is busy knitting chicken cages.
My favorite is my youngest son, who is lying in the grass, peeling the lotus just picked. Rewrite the article: In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut.
Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight.
A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down.
White inside and pink inside, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.
There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time! The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute! What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated. I just stood there, unwilling to leave for a long time ... spread the message:
Rewriting method: 1, style change: the ideological content of the original is basically unchanged, and most of them only focus on changing the form of the original.
For example, ancient poems are rewritten into words, poems are rewritten into narratives, and narratives are rewritten into expository texts; This novel has been adapted into a play. 2. Change the style: change the classical Chinese into vernacular Chinese; Change the structure, change the sequence of flashbacks, and reorganize the material; 3. Change the person: the first person is changed to the third person, and the third person is changed to the first person.
4. Change the sentence pattern: enlarge the sentence. Abbreviations, etc.
References:
Baidu encyclopedia-rewrite.
2. How to rewrite ancient poems into 800-word narratives-Rewrite Mujiang Song.
As the sun sets, the afterglow of the setting sun spreads all over the earth.
The sun took off its dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It is so soft and beautiful!
The clear river is like a mirror, shining in the corner of the light. When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of sunlight vibrates, just like a girl dancing in the water.
The weeping willows by the river put their long hair into the water, like a beautiful princess, twisting her slender waist and putting a green skirt on the shore, compared with the sunshine in the water. Unfortunately, they didn't name the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette.
Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.
I stood on the rock and looked around. The mountains in the distance were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. The brightly lit villages with snuff are like swarms of fireflies, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! September 3rd, what a beautiful night! Birds are singing in front of the mountain, and the fruit in the field is fragrant; Dewdrops are like crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.
I love you this intoxicating Mujiang!
Teacher: Ancient poems describing scenery should focus on describing scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing a scene, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings. Emotion and scenery are inseparable, and it is an important means to create artistic conception to contain emotion in scenery, melt emotion in scenery and melt scenery in scenery. A good practice should avoid the scenery without emotion, let emotion become scenery, and scenery become emotional notes. Only when the two fit perfectly can the article be subtle and meaningful.
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Teacher: The students of landscape painting and ancient poetry all know its rewriting method, so how should narrative ancient poetry be rewritten? Now please look at the rewriting of To Wang Lun.
This is a narrative poem praising friendship. It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting is sad, and there are few laughter and laughter. However, the poet used a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere. Express deep affection and farewell wishes among friends. Please look at the original text and the revised examples.
(The projection shows poems with pictures and an example "A gift for Wang Lun")
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-Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun.
Li Bai is one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. I had a rough life experience and experienced the process from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty.
Li Taibai is called "Romantic Poet" because he is generous, easy to swim and good at wine. At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. Let the son recite Li Bai's "A Word to Meng Haoran" from childhood. Knowing that Li Bai was going out to play on state affairs, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How about the wine, sir? There are ten thousand hotels here. Wang Lun
When Li Bai received this letter, he was elated and thought: Playing and drinking are my favorite things. Why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day. When he arrived at Wang Lun's house, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun smiled and pulled Li Bai to see that there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have a peach tree here. Every time it blooms, it will smell the fragrance of Shili, so it is called Shili Peach Blossom".
Li Bai asked again, "What about the 10,000 hotels? Why don't we go for a few drinks! " But Wang Lun still took Li Bailing to a small restaurant called "Wanjia Hotel". Li Bai is very confused. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called "Wanjia Hotel".
Li Bai was not only not angry, but also applauded again and again. Wang Lun was also very happy, and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home. The Wangs warmly welcomed him. Li Bai and Wang Lun talked at his parents and became close friends.
Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have lived in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat my guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked. Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family regards me as a relative. How could I not like it? " ? I just want to travel around the world. "Wang Lun see can't say li bai, had to agree to let him go.
The next morning, Li Bai came to Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fists with his hands and said with tears, "Brother, your friendship with me will never be forgotten by Li!" Before the words were finished, singing accompanied by footsteps sounded on the shore. Li Bai took a look, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I believe Li will come to see you again! " One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, take care, too. Wish you all the best. See you later. " At this time, a boat has docked on the shore, waiting for the great poet Li Bai to board. Li Bai stepped into the boat and said his last words to Wang Lun with deep affection: "Brother Wang Lun, although the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as the friendship between you and me. Let's lift the boat of friendship and sail to the other side of each other's hearts. " Wang Lun finally lost control of his emotions and said with tears, "Take care! "
3. The method of rewriting ancient poems This is a poem of Su Shi's visit to the West Lake, which can be roughly rewritten as follows:
One sunny day, Su Dongpo and his friends were boating and drinking on the West Lake. Suddenly, dark clouds billowed, heavy rain suddenly came, and thick dark clouds surged. Clouds and rain are more urgent. Dark clouds have not covered the mountain by the lake, and showers have fallen from the sky. Glittering raindrops beat on the lake, splashing like sparkling pearls and jumping into the cabin. Forced by the heavy rain, the poet hurried to shelter from the rain.
As the saying goes: "In summer, children's faces change three times a day." No, the atmosphere was so tense just now. Suddenly a gust of wind swept in and dispersed the dark clouds, and the shower stopped immediately. The poet stood on the railing of Wang Hu Building and looked at it. Downstairs, there is no rain at all, and it is calm. The sky reflects water, and the water reflects the sky. The sky is so clear and blue.
According to the composition rewritten by ancient poems, life is right and wrong, and my true love is right. Green mountains and green waters remain, deposited in the years, and the wind whimpers around me.
Birds in cages are always thinking about yesterday's Woods, and fish in ponds are always thinking about the past deep pools. That long and rich homesickness made me walk at a brisk pace, reclaiming land, farming, picking up hoes, with earthy simplicity, and Ye Er, whose simple thoughts filled the mountains. The thatched cottage in the village, with its back to the blue sky and its face to the earth, was soaked in the humid fog, and the flowing air was telling its heart. Willow and elm trees nestle behind the house, guarding the peace of the village. Peach and plum are not lonely, but harvest with the joy of autumn.
The door opened, like my smile. The mountains in the distance, flowing with springs, turned into fairyland and flashed in the smoke. That layer of life, like fog and smoke, has left me. I waved to them without leaving a smile, which was very painful.
I heard the dog barking and growling there, and the sound was natural. I know I'm back, picking my chrysanthemums.
Return to the Garden (3)
I planted beans at the foot of Nanshan, and the weeds in the field were covered with peas.
Get up early in the morning to get rid of weeds, and come back with hoes in the moonlight at night.
The wood outside the road is narrow and long, and the evening dew is stained with clothes.
It's not a pity to get wet, but I hope it won't be against my will.
5. How to rewrite ancient poetry into small prose and ancient poetry into prose needs to master certain methods.
First of all, understand poetry and grasp the main center. This is the basic requirement for rewriting ancient poems. Take "Liu Yong" for example. What do you need to know about this poem? How is it written? Why chant willow? Through research, we know that these poems describe the beauty of willow color, the beauty of willow branches' posture and the beauty of willow leaves' shape. Finally, it points out the origin of beauty: the power of spring. The author eulogizes the charm and greatness of spring by chanting willow. In this way, I understand poetry and deduct the center.
Secondly, be loyal to the original poem and expand it. Because poetry is short and pithy, you can't write all the details related to the content very clearly and comprehensively. On the basis of loyalty to the original poem, we must carry out appropriate and reasonable imagination in time and space to expand the poem. In the poem "Liu Yong", think about what can be enriched around "spring", such as swallows homing in the mud; Several bright butterflies are dancing among the flowers; You can also imagine what games lively and lovely children are playing and so on. In this way, the article is full and full.
Finally, the head and tail are complete and the structure is perfect. Ancient poetry has made a great leap in time, space and content, and the rewriting must make up the beginning and end reasonably according to the poetry, so as to make the structure of the article perfect.
"The fish came out in the drizzle, and the swallow leaned in the breeze." This cross is almost empty. It depicts the environment of the thatched cottage, but what is implied between the lines is the poet's leisurely mood and love for spring nature. I understood the meaning of the poem and grasped the central idea of the poet, that is, I can develop my poem on the basis of being loyal to the original poem.
6. How to rewrite ancient poetry into modern prose 1 helps us to understand the artistic conception of poetry.
Rewriting poetry can cultivate our imagination and improve our writing ability. Rewriting 1, understanding poem a, what time or season? B, who is doing it? C. what's the mood of the character? What's the theme? 2. Reorganize the materials according to the main materials around the theme.
3. Re-creation based on poetry. Rewriting can change the genre, such as rewriting poetry into narrative; You can change the person, such as changing the first person to the third person; You can change the structure, such as changing flashbacks to order.
If you want to rewrite it successfully, first, you should study the original poem carefully and understand its meaning and thoughts and feelings; Secondly, the theme of narration and description should be established according to the meaning of the original poem; Third, on the basis of reading the original poem, combined with the actual life, develop a reasonable imagination to make the still picture in the poem come alive and make the expression of the article more accurate and vivid. .
7. Rewrite an ancient poem into a short essay ~ Shepherd Boy (Rewrite an ancient poem)
Look! At first glance, the ground seems to be covered with a piece of green grass! When the wind blows gently, the sound of "rustling sand" spreads everywhere.
Listen! The shepherd boy is playing the flute again, and the cheerful tone teases the evening breeze and whispers slowly in his ear.
In the morning, when the sun was half exposed, the shepherd boy took a flute and went up the mountain to herd cattle. He sat on the cow's back, playing the flute and humming a tune. Running happily on the grass, unrestrained, without any troubles. Until I was tired of playing, I lay on the grass and looked at the white clouds and birds in the sky, with a smile floating around my mouth.
After dinner, the sun has set and the bright moon has climbed up. Holding a flute in his hand, the shepherd boy came to the haystack with cheerful steps, lay down without taking off his hemp fiber, listened to the unknown bugs singing beautiful songs in the grass, looked up at the bright moon in the night sky, and came up with pictures in his mind.
Listen to that cheerful tune blowing again, how beautiful it is! Hey! Why did you stop? Oh ... It turns out that the shepherd boy closed his eyes and fell asleep. Yes! He is really tired, so let him have a good sleep listening to the lullaby of bugs!
References:
Qingpingle village residence (rewriting of ancient poems).
In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut. Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight. A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down. White transparent powder,
Pink, like a shy girl with a veil. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.
There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time!
The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute!
What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated, just standing there, unwilling to leave for a long time …