The melody of winter is different from that of spring, summer and autumn. The melody in winter is long and slow, as if telling a story. Spring Festival adds a lively color to winter, which is probably the reason why many people miss winter. Originally, the weather was unbearable and the world was as silent as a dying candle, but at this moment, people suddenly became active. It turns out that everyone is in a hurry for the New Year. Such a big holiday in winter is enough to make her far ahead of other seasons. Snow, wind and rain make winter unique.
In this place where I live, snow doesn't come often, but at least it will come next year. I was always hesitant at first, and I couldn't tell whether it was snow or rain. My gift is ice particles the size of sesame seeds. There was a noise when the ice particles landed, and we finally understood that it was snow. Because can Xue only stays here for a few days, so the snow will come overnight without hesitation and will bloom beautifully. It seems that God is sprinkling dandruff, but they are not the same. Snow is pure, as white as goose feathers. The earth melts the snow tirelessly, but in the end it can't compete with her. Another night passed, and Wan became a world wrapped in silver makeup. The snow was covered with footprints in an oblique way, as if a few strokes of light ink had been painted on a piece of white paper. Instead of destroying this purity, it adds a bit of vitality, which is the finishing touch.
The wind in winter is not as violent as snow, but it has biting power. When the leaves shake, it indicates that the wind is coming. These winds can only blow the leaves, but for me, it is a knife-like pain. Rain is really a rare visitor in winter. It always "falls silently", often accompanied by snow, and there is no momentum. If it's a gray day and it's raining lightly, it can also make people move their feelings and imagine, but even the sky doesn't give rain face, and it's always sunny. The rain can only shrink back and go. Gentleness is a bit thick, the snow is not big, but it makes people feel cold; The wind is not crazy, but it feels like a knife; Rain doesn't come, but it always gives people a wet feeling. At a loss, I suddenly understood the charm of winter, but I couldn't say it, only knowing that it was really worth cherishing and remembering.
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A good composition, first of all, is sincere emotion, followed by the ability to control the language. Nowadays, students usually study too hard and have little time and mood to observe the life around them. Therefore, students' compositions often have nothing to write, and fake, big and empty compositions abound. This article is not ostentatious, grandiose, eloquent, and can grasp the delicate feeling of winter in the heart when writing about the scenery, and express it in vivid language, such as: "The weather has made people feel cold." Wait a minute. Moreover, the language is unpretentious and crude. It reads like a kneeling interview, which is kind and natural. For example, "I always hesitated at first, and I couldn't tell whether it was snow or rain. The gift I gave was ice particles the size of sesame seeds." For another example, "Because I can only stay here for a few days, I rushed over overnight, and the snow no longer hesitated, and it was brilliant."