The author uses the writing method of drawing an outline first and then describing it in detail. The focus is on the changes of mountains, water and sun. The author first outlines "everything" with a thick brush and outlines the outline of spring; Then, through the three things of "mountain", "water" and "sun", the characteristics of moist spring mountain, dense spring water and warm spring day are written with "Langrun", "Sheng" and "Red" respectively.
The three "get up" sentences take care of "just wake up" and "open your eyes", and use rhetorical devices such as personification and parallelism to show the scene of spring returning to the earth, everything reviving and full of vitality.
Language skills in spring;
In terms of language, the language of "Playing with Water Lights, Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, Qinhuai River" is beautiful, but it has traces of carving and is not natural enough.
The language in spring is simple, vivid and colloquial. Such as writing grass, "in the garden, in the field, you see, a large area is full"; Write flowers, "You won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers to chase."
These languages are extracted from life, lively, short and pithy, and expressive. In order to describe spring better, the author also uses various rhetorical methods such as metaphor and personification to make spring visual and personalized. The last part of the article quoted above is the best example.
Mr. Zhu Ziqing's lyric prose is a variant of poetry, which has the artistic characteristics of poetry. When I read the article "Spring", I was full of poetry. Mr. Wang wrote "Ode to Spring" with light and fluent poetic language and side-by-side contrast.