Original text:
The homing birds, though tired, bring the sunset back.
Flap your wings and set the sunset on the river; Reed with white heads has also been made into beautiful moments.
The whole poem is full of the emotional appeal of the old poem, with only a few strokes, that is, it outlines a beautiful picture with sound and emotion, and at the same time it has the poet's own style, just like the last two sentences, which personifies the reed through "makeup" and "beauty", adding a little interest and vitality to the whole poem.
This poem adopts the popular poem style at that time from the overall framework. Small description, concise outline, prose sentence pattern and improvisation all show the style of Tagore and Japanese haiku.