9 ways to review the topic and conception of college entrance examination essays
Refining the central method
This is the most common and reliable method of reviewing the topic and conception of the composition. When writing a material composition, if you can accurately extract the center of the material and use it as the main theme of the article, the article will be both relevant and in-depth. Therefore, when writing material compositions, you should try to use this method to create your idea.
Once, when Gaidar was traveling, a primary school student recognized him and rushed to carry his suitcase. When the primary school student saw that the suitcase was very worn, he said, "Sir is the famous Gaidar, why is he using a suitcase casually? It's too uncoordinated." "Is it incongruous? If the suitcase is famous, but But I was casual, wouldn't that be worse?" Gaidar said with a smile. The primary school student looked at Gaidar and smiled.
Analyzing this material, we can extract the central meaning: This material expresses the conversation between the famous Gaidar and a primary school student about the worn suitcase, expressing that you can take care of your possessions, but you can be a human being. But you can’t just follow the truth casually. Based on this, students can extract the following two views: (1) A person should not be casual; (2) A person should be a person with real talents and learning, not just a false name.
The main idea comprehension method
This is the most commonly used and most reliable method of reviewing topic ideas for material composition. If you can accurately understand the center of the material and use it as the main theme of the article, then the article you write will be both relevant and in-depth.
Example
"Wall Street Journal" reported: On the eve of the Gulf War, when the reporter of the newspaper went to interview the U.S. Marine Corps stationed in Saudi Arabia, he was surprised to find that in a tent in the desert, the On the warship, American officers and soldiers are scrambling to study China's "The Art of War". General Gray, commander of the Marine Corps, ordered that "Sun Tzu's Art of War" is a must-read for Marine Corps officers and soldiers.
Analyzing and looking at the materials, it is not difficult to find that the reason why American officers and soldiers studied China's "Sun Tzu's Art of War" is to guide their tactics. The purpose of the materials is very clear. Based on this, we can refine "other mountains" "A stone can attack jade" and so on. Of course, this is explicit; from an implicit perspective, foreigners attach so much importance to learning about our country’s cultural heritage, so as Chinese, we should “pay more attention to the inheritance of our motherland’s cultural heritage”, and this is in a sense It has more profound meaning.
Key grasping method
Keyword sentences are often "literary" and contain the main theme of the material. Therefore, it can be used as a breakthrough point to grasp materials and choose conceptual angles. In the materials of material composition, key sentences are often critical sentences of the proposer or the characters in the material.
Example: When Brazilian football star Pele first showed up in football, a reporter asked him: "Which ball did you kick?" He replied: "Next!" , has become the world's football king and scored more than a thousand goals, the reporter asked: "Which ball did you kick?" He still answered: "Next!"
Analysis of this " The three words "Next" not only reflect the never-satisfied enterprising spirit, but also contain the philosophy of endless art and continuous innovation, shining with the light of personality, wisdom and spirit. Once you grasp this key word, you will grasp the soul essence of the material.
Things are interconnected. For example, many things exist in the form of causal relationships. When writing material compositions, if you can deduce the essential reasons for the listed phenomena or results from the phenomena or results listed in the materials when reviewing the topic, you can often find the original idea.
Example: An adhesive company developed a powerful universal glue. Before launching it on the market, it ingeniously used the glue to stick a large gold coin of considerable value to the company's marble pillars, and said who can Whoever removes it without damaging the doorpost will get the gold coin. For a time, there was a crowd of people in front of the door, and many people tried their skills. As a result, their strength was exhausted, but the gold coins remained unchanged. The crowd burst into applause, people of all stripes praised him, and the news spread like wildfire. As soon as a new product is launched on the market, manufacturers will reap huge benefits.
The reason why a new product in analytical materials "gained huge benefits" as soon as it was put on the market is, firstly, because of the eye-catching excellent quality of the powerful universal glue that can "stay firm" after being bonded; secondly, It is because the company has adopted an unusual marketing and publicity strategy, so we can logically draw the conclusions that "facts speak louder than words" and "the fragrance of wine needs to be drunk skillfully". In contrast, the latter is more contemporary.
Method of revealing meaning
For some allegorical materials, such as fables, fairy tales, comics, etc., it is necessary to carry out "from objects to people" and "from objects to people" through the appearance of the materials. "Association of things", that is, from the objects in the material to people, and then to the philosophy of life, social phenomena, etc. similar to the content of the material, to explore its true connotation and establish the argument.
Example
A donkey was carrying salt across a river. It slipped and fell into the water. The salt melted and it became much lighter when it stood up. This thing made her happy. Another day, it carried a sponge and walked to the river. It accidentally slipped and fell into the water. The sponge absorbed the water, and the donkey couldn't stand up, and finally drowned.
[Analysis] This fable tells us that everything should be based on reality. When the situation changes, our thoughts and working methods should also change accordingly. If we stick to the rules or blindly apply them, we will definitely lead to failure. When writing, you should grasp the meaning of the donkey carrying salt and sponge and use it as the argument of the article.
Detail-cutting method
Grasp the enlightening details in the material.
Example
Zheng Banqiao’s calligraphy uses official script and regular script. It is neither official script nor regular script. It is neither ancient nor modern. It is commonly known as "Banqiao style". The individual fonts in his works may seem crooked, but the overall feeling is well-proportioned and unique. Some people say, "This kind of work cannot be without one or two."
[Analysis] Judging from the local details, the general idea is as follows:
Zheng Banqiao's calligraphy, "use official script to refer to regular script, neither official script nor regular script, neither ancient nor modern", enlightenment People should be "good at learning from each other" and learn to integrate; "The individual fonts of the work may seem crooked, but the overall feeling is well-proportioned and unique," which reminds us to pay attention to the harmony between the individual and the whole, the part and the whole, that is, "harmony is "Beauty"; and "This kind of work cannot be without one or two", which reveals the truth that only by "showing individuality" and having distinctive individual characteristics can anything reflect its value and remain invincible.
Multi-directional divergence method
Some composition materials are relatively scattered. For such materials, you can adopt a multi-directional divergent thinking method when reviewing the topic and develop multiple perspectives around the material.
Example
Then he resigned and returned. Qin Qingfu stopped and left in the suburbs. The sad song of Fujie vibrates the forest trees and stops the moving clouds. Xue Tan thanked him and asked for rebellion, but he never dared to return.
The inspiration of "humility" can also be summarized from the fact that he realized that he was far from learning the teacher's skills and "thanked and asked for rebellion", and concluded that "you should correct your mistakes when you know them". From the perspective of teacher Qin Qing, we can see that he did not get angry when facing his students' self-righteousness, but "cannot stop, mourning in the suburbs", and "the sad song of the festival, the sound shakes the trees, and the sound stops the moving clouds". In the ordinary actions, I was inspired: "Education must pay attention to methods." However, Xue Tan's approach of "not daring to return home for the rest of his life" is questionable. If students really learn all the skills from their teachers, then why should they "dare not return home for the rest of their lives"? We can confidently study under another teacher and learn from others' strengths. Of course, after refining multiple viewpoints, you should choose the best ones.
Leave the second place and seek the main method
Some composition materials often involve many people and things. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, it is necessary to clarify which are the main characters or events in the material and which are the secondary characters or events, discard the secondary characters or events, and examine the topic from the perspective of the main characters or events.
Example
After the bus came to a stop, a woman at the station grabbed the child who was standing waiting for the bus and got on the bus in order to seize the time. A young passenger in the car took the initiative to stand up and give up his seat. The woman holding the child thanked the other party, put the child down, and said with a smile: "The little guy has just learned to walk, so let him stand on his own." At this moment, seeing the two of them being humble to each other, no one sat down, and the fashionable person on the side sat down with a sharp eye. Next, he greeted loudly: "Nanny, my mother helped Nong grab a seat."
[Analysis]
***There are three "characters" in the material. Whether it is advocating "helping others" from the perspective of young people who give up their seats, or advocating "be civilized and courteous" from the perspective of fashionistas who grab seats, it seems to be okay. However, judging from the focus and direction of the entire material, the last two secondary characters should be abandoned, and the focus should be on the protagonist, the woman holding the child, and the goal should be to "make the child independent as soon as possible."
The method of seeking common ground while reserving differences
This method is particularly suitable for compositions composed of combined materials. If the connotations of the combined materials provided are consistent, the same and essential content can be extracted to refine an argument; if the connotations of the provided materials are inconsistent or even far apart, then the different aspects should be discarded. , looking for intersection and overlapping points.
Example
Danes will carry a ruler with them when they go fishing. When they catch a fish, they often use the ruler to measure it and return any small fish that are not large enough to the river. They said: "Wouldn't it be better to let the small fish grow up?" More than two thousand years ago, our country's Mencius once said: "If you can't count the grains of rice into the pond, the fish and turtles will not be enough to eat."
[Analysis] The two materials, one Chinese and one foreign, one ancient and one modern, tell us the same truth: in today's society that is eager for quick success and extremely impetuous, we must "have foresight."
Complementary perfection method
For combined materials, if the views put forward by several materials are positive in nature and there is no conflict, the views of several materials can be combined when constructing the idea.
Example
① Florentine poet Dante’s famous saying: “Go your own way and let others tell you!” ② Polish proverb: “He who often asks for directions will never lose his way. .
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[Analysis]
Material ① “Go your own way” emphasizes the need for firm belief;
Material ② “People who often ask for directions will not "Lost in the Direction" is about being open-minded and asking for advice when walking, and listening to the guidance of others. Which of the two is right or wrong? The two are highly complementary. If you combine the two, it will be both comprehensive and reasonable. Therefore, We can refine this point of view: Only by having the firm belief of "walking your own way" and the humility of "always asking for directions" can you walk your own path in life.