My junior high school life
Say goodbye to primary school and enter junior high school. I heard that junior high school is very tired, and some people jump off buildings because of pressure! So, I'm a little scared.
At first, I always felt that life was boring and I was depressed every day. I don't know what I'm doing all day, and I can't get up all day.
Later, after the teacher's education, I gradually got used to it.
In junior high school, teachers were very strict, and they would criticize them if they were not careful. Homework is also difficult. I didn't get C and D in my homework, but I did in junior high school. It's not that I won't, it's just that it's difficult. Ye Yong, my deskmate, also said, "Once in a hundred years! Take a D for the first time! " Sometimes it's hard to get an A! Everything else is ok, all of them can score above 80, and both math and English are above 90, which means that the Chinese exam is not good and the start is unfavorable. I got 75 points for the first time! Students are not necessarily good, they are all below 80 points. Is it difficult to learn Chinese?
Now, I think junior high school life is not so boring. At least I'm busy. It's not boring to have something to do all day. I'm not afraid anymore, and I still have spirit! Moreover, being so busy, I have gained a lot, and my math scores are better than those in primary school! I don't believe it myself. I actually got the first place in my class! A high score of 98 points. Thanks to my dad, he is a math teacher in grade three, but I can't. He will teach me. Once, I didn't study well, deserted in class and didn't master it. Dad saw it at a glance and taught me 10! In this busyness, my habits have also changed. I didn't preview and review my previous studies, which led to average grades. Now, I preview the next day's lessons every night, so it's much easier to attend class. After class, I can master it by reviewing more. So, I got the first place in my class, which I never expected. Therefore, I will study like this in the future, and only in this way can I be admitted to Gao Chong!
My ideal now is to pay attention to height, and I will fight for this ideal. The competition in junior high school is fierce, and I won't give up. I will make positive progress and strive for good grades.
Life is a beautiful scenery line, and middle school life is a scenery that will never fade.
Everyone has his own junior high school life, and everyone's junior high school life is a unique and wonderful film, which is a "masterpiece" that no big-name director can direct. Do you want to know my junior high school life? Okay, listen-play.
"Today is Sunday!"
We "crazy girls" exploded together. "We will go boating at Green Manor this Sunday. How's it going? It's my treat! "
"Great!"
"good!"
"all right! Agree! "
With a burst of noise, we embarked on the road to the green manor.
The deeper the water here, the clearer it is. The setting sun shines on the floating water, turning into small golden lanterns, and on the quiet water, turning into pieces of beautiful jade. Presumably, these can also be called "floating gold, static shadows and heavy walls". Everyone stopped making noise, as if afraid to break this beautiful and quiet atmosphere.
Although we are usually carefree, but-
difficult
Finish the exam.
"This is terrible!" I said to my friend, "I only got a few points in this exam, and I have to go home to meet the storm!" " "
I changed my old high spirits and moved home step by step in frustration. After reporting my grades to my parents, I hid in my room despondently, and the atmosphere dared not make a sound. There are "dark clouds" on my father's face, and my mother is smashing pots and pans in the kitchen. Alas! Who told me that I can only play? Hurry and study hard! so
study
It was late at night, and the cold wind kept blowing outside the window. "alas! It's so cold, I'm freezing to death. " I complained. Dad has urged me to rest several times. But can I have a rest? I want to overcome these problems and strive for good grades! The stars in the sky are shining, as if asking; Why don't you go to bed so late? Alas! Do you understand my feelings? I wiped the sweat off my face and buried myself in my studies. If I work, I will get something. This is not-
happy
The exam is over again. I took my report card and my face was covered with' cloudy to sunny'. My mother hummed a tune and went to the kitchen to cook, while my father happily vomited a cigarette ring and read the newspaper.
Ha ha! I see; After research, but not too much. As the saying goes, relaxation is moderate, and the way of civil and military affairs. This is my junior high school life: learning, suffering and pleasure, everything is so unforgettable!
Junior high school life, my life is a scenery that will never fade!
2. Excellent composition and imitation in junior high school In our life, we often ignore the gardenia beside the window lattice and imagine in vain that the flowers in the garden next door must be more fragrant, just as we obviously live on a star, but we always think that the stars in the night sky are as bright as gems.
In the long life, don't we always think that our own life is always full of bumps and thorns, while others' lives are always full of flowers? ! However, no one can refuse the pain, and there is no life that does not bear the scars of hard pain. There may be deep pain hidden in other people's smiles, but in the silent night, you have never heard him sobbing and crying.
Have you ever envied Dongpo's life? Yes, he likes to travel in Chibi, indulge in the mountains and write down passionate words that will shine for thousands of years. But, did you see the scar in his heart? As a person, he shoulders the expectation of protecting his wife and children, but he has been relegated one after another.
Did you see his grievance, his frustration, his pain and his helplessness? Yes, you ignore the pain in Su Shi's life and only see his aura and the respect and praise of the world, so you envy his life and hate the pallor of your own. When will you appreciate yourself and smell the fragrance of gardenia beside the window lattice? Have you ever envied Tao Yuanming's life? Yes, he retired to the countryside, sipping the light wine in the country and watching the cold chrysanthemums in the wind. How chic and comfortable he is! However, do you feel his inner helplessness? He also has the ambition to help others, but he can't show it. In that dark age, he could not tolerate the majestic character of Wei and Jin Dynasties, so he chose to be born in endless helplessness.
His helplessness, his anxiety, his pain, do you understand? No, you haven't. You only care about smelling cold chrysanthemum in front of Mr. Wu or Liu's house. You only care about being intoxicated with the mountains and rivers of Nanshan, so you envy their lives and complain about their anxiety and fatigue. When will you learn to face up to the joy of life and smell the fragrance of gardenia beside the window lattice? Don't always think that your life is full of hardships, while others' lives are full of sunshine. Everyone will experience hardships in life, and you will find happiness in an unhappy life.
Face up to your life and appreciate your destiny. Even if your life is full of troubles, you should be calm. In the long river of history, there is no ship that is not injured.
I hope to wake up tomorrow morning and smell the fragrance of gardenia on the windowsill with a smile on my face. Face and gardenia complement each other, which may constitute the most beautiful scenery in the world. Chinese characters have always been ideographic hieroglyphs since they were created in Cangjie.
The ancients created words, which not only combined the agility and beauty of words, but also combined the joys and sorrows of words. A word is a picture, then a word is a world with strong visual sense.
For example, in Far Away, through this complicated horizontal and vertical direction, I seem to see a bitter upward trend, drifting away from the classical aesthetic feeling, flickering. It is no exaggeration to say that the classical beauty of China is just a pavilion built on distance.
We can imagine this distance as "a gentleman lives at the head of the Yangtze River and a concubine lives at the tail of the Yangtze River", or it is a family concept farther than geographical distance, or it is a life-and-death parting of "there is nowhere to talk about in a lonely grave", or it is a lament between a loyal minister and a king who doesn't know it. Some people say that "poetry is the crystallization of pain", while literature erupts from strong emotions, and distance is the gateway between reality and beauty.
However, the rapid development of information in today's society has greatly shortened the distance that should be separated from the sky. Mobile phones and the Internet can quickly transmit information at any time, and trains and planes send people who love each other to each other immediately. All kinds of experiences on the Internet have turned the love and reading that should have been seriously devoted into "fast food" and "instant noodles", eclipsed, so that the neighborhood that should have gathered in the heart and rushed to the chest was not watered by wine or poetry, but collapsed on its own and never returned.
No distance, no strong emotion, no sharp edge, all people are pebbles, and they lose their classical beauty in smoother mutual promotion, leaving only modern sadness. If you don't give it away, how can you have the sigh of a dissatisfied housewife sewing cold clothes for her lover in July? Without the distinction between monarch and minister, how can there be the passionate righteousness and exemplary loyalty of "remonstrating to death and fighting to death"? Without my father's watch under the moonlit arm and the pain of my friends sheltering from the cold outside the Great Wall, how can there be a parting from Three Things in Yangguan, a tear in Shili Pavilion, and a sentence "Mochow has no confidant before her, and no one knows a gentleman in the world"? Mr. Yu Qiu said that "the distance between mountains is a kind of despair, and the distance between water is a kind of sadness". Modernity has stripped off "mountains" and "water" and played down "remoteness" and "sadness". In the field of literature and beauty, we can only be a little sad. I hope the distance is still there, the human feelings are still there, and the beauty is still there.
In the embrace of the night, I look up at the starry sky, write the crystal of the stars into my heart, and then feel the beauty quietly. ..... as if my collection is a kind of beauty from a distance.
The sea breeze brushed my cheek, and I heard a whisper in my ear: Look at the crystal from a distance, but look at the defects from a distance. Clear heart, clear tears, clear river ... I describe Qu Zi as crystal clear, seeing him facing Mulan from a distance, and seeing him embracing the evening state from a distance.
What is crystal clear? Looking from a distance, his childlike innocence, the clear heart of "come to me first". What about his shortcomings? I prefer to compare his defects to a close-up of a soul as complicated and tortured as ordinary people. Seeing his flaws, Shangguan's adult's rivalry, and the fatuity of the king of Chu all made him heartache. However, how many people can see his flaws? Crystal is childlike innocence, and defect is the fruit of suffering. However, crystal is also a kind of faith, and defect is a kind of hardship after faith.
I can still hear the whistle, the collapse of a dream catcher, and I seem to see his crystal heart that went with the wheel for his own beliefs. He Haizi, a pursuer, a poet of faith and a shining star.
However, what about his defects? Is it his perseverance to death? Walking quietly into Haizi, I can see that his heart is full of lonely and bitter souls. In fact, his emotional defects are the same as yours and mine. At the moment, I want to stand under the sunflower. I want to stare at the starry sky quietly. I'm not afraid of gunfire.
3. How to talk about personal arrangement, identification and adoption in parody of junior high school poetry.
The imitation of poetry includes the imitation of sentences.
The initial training should begin with imitation.
The first step: perceive the content of the paragraph as a whole, carefully ponder according to the meaning and context, expand the association, sort out the relevant information stored in the brain, and determine the imitation content. Step 2: analyze the sentence characteristics, expression, rhetoric and feeling of the paragraph locally. Step 3: Organize the language and express the sentences accurately and coherently. Step 4: Check whether the number of words is equal or roughly equal. The number of words in imitated sentences and imitated sentences should be as equal as possible, but they should also be roughly equal, and the disparity should not be too big, so that the structures of imitated sentences and imitated sentences can be harmonious and symmetrical.
Solution in a word: look (ask) and analyze (sentence meaning, sentence pattern, rhetoric, sentence meaning) to build (skeleton) to install (flesh and blood) to read (check for loopholes)
Counseling problems in personal finishing composition
1. How can I make my composition more vivid?
A: Narration should be vivid and vivid, making people feel immersive; When writing people, they are like Bishop, so that people can see their shapes. The lines between the lines contain the author's feelings and can touch the readers' hearts. In fact, it puts forward two standards for students: one is to accurately describe objective things and be "like"; The other is to have emotions and meanings. In addition to the superficial meaning, it can also reflect another meaning.
2. From what angle should we look at the scenery?
A: It is very important to choose a good observation site, which determines the scenery you observe. After selecting the observation points, you should have a little combination when observing the specific scenery. The main points should be refined and unified by chest.
When you observe, you find something that others have not found. Your observation is very attractive. "This piece of heaven and earth seems to be mine; I also want to surpass myself and go to another world. " You can't worry about writing articles.
As mentioned above, you can create a good article from any angle.
3. How to write a composition after review?
A: We only need to write a narrative in this semester's exam. Therefore, I have never talked about the writing style of post-criticism. In fact, there is no fixed method to write the feeling of review. Generally speaking, it can be written from four aspects: beginning, narration, couplet and ending. Stand up, start, ask questions. Syria, talk about what you see related to the problem. Discuss, discuss, explain your ideas and connect with reality.
4. How can I write the center of the composition clearly?
A: Determine the topic appropriately. The most important thing is to think clearly about things or people before writing. Pay attention to the last excavation to highlight the center.
5. How to write a vivid enough landscape composition?
A: Different landscapes have different characteristics. Even the same landscape has the same characteristics, but there are many differences. Only when we have a clear understanding of the scenery described can we vividly express it with pen and ink. If you can't grasp the characteristics of the scenery, you can't leave a clear and deep impression on the readers by describing or piling up words in general and over-carving.
In addition, we should pay attention to the full use of rhetorical devices.
4. Excellent composition and imitation in junior high school Whenever I see a ruler, my heart seems to turn into a lead block and I have a heavy fall ... I am a stubborn little girl, and what I hate most is that my friends don't regard me as the first, which is also the reason why I quarrel with my friends.
That's the final exam for grade five. At that time, I was solving a drawing problem. I emptied my pencil box, but I still don't have a ruler. I have no choice but to borrow it from my friends. I whispered to my friend, "Hello! Lend me the ruler ... "Before the words were finished, she had lent the ruler to another classmate. I suddenly flew into a rage and thought: Hum, let's make a clean break! After class, I called her over and said to her with a straight face, "Hey, do you know that I asked you to borrow a ruler during the exam?" "I know."
She said with a smile. I immediately went up to him and said loudly, "Then why don't you lend me your ruler?" "At that time, someone had asked me to borrow a ruler first."
I don't care, "humph!" I left without looking back. What happened to her later, I don't know, and I didn't pay attention.
Since then, I have never regarded her as a friend. I know a way to make up for it: I wrote to her and apologized to her, saying that I was confused at that time.
However, when I mentioned this to her, she looked at me in surprise as if listening to a story and said, "Is this happening?" What is there to forgive if you forget completely and have no resentment? My heart has to be heavy ... now that we have separated, when I bought a ruler with my new friends, I can't help but recall the past and feel a little more resentment in my heart.
5. How to guide middle school students to imitate Chinese composition?
"Imitation" is interpreted by the dictionary as "learning to do something ready-made". Generally speaking, the acquisition of skills is always inseparable from imitation, and so is the writing of middle school students. In order to turn the writing knowledge learned in and out of class into ability, we must learn from the articles we read by imitation, and get the essentials of writing from them, so as to improve our expressive ability. Imitation is a common training method in middle school composition teaching. If we can teach students some imitation methods in time, we will get twice the result with half the effort.
Mr. Ye Shengtao said, "Reading is absorption, writing is pouring out" and "Reading is the basis of writing". ("Two Basic Concepts of Chinese Teaching") It can be seen that the first step of parody is to choose a model essay for in-depth experience. Model essays come from texts selected from textbooks and extracurricular reading materials designated by teachers or selected by students. These are excellent achievements written by predecessors or others, with high taste, standardization, demonstration and acceptability, and are suitable for students to imitate. Mr. Liu said: "It is of great benefit to adopt the method from the beginning to the middle, so that students can climb the mountain, overlook the sea and broaden their horizons." (Writing Teaching Theory)
First, the choice of model essay
The choice of model essay is guided by the teaching purpose of each imitation training and has a clear direction. You can't blindly touch birds and read books at will, which wastes time. For example, in the narrative writing teaching of senior one, Chekhov's "The Man on the Cover" is chosen as a model essay when using the writing method of reflecting the reality from the side and the front, so that students can carefully analyze how the article describes the main character Rykov and learn from it, and then apply this multi-angle writing method to their own compositions.
Second, imitate the writing method
When students get some inspiration from the model essay, understand one or several expression points, and are eager to try in their own composition, they reach the second link of parody, that is, learn to express creatively and independently, and write articles with certain depth and novelty.
Imitation writing has its own methods to follow, and it is a bridge between model writing and imitation writing, which should be chosen according to the needs of imitation. The first method of parody is to take meaning, that is, to write an article by imitating the content of the model essay. It includes three situations. One is written by a model essay, which is written by imitation. For example, taking Jia Zuzhang's Lychee in June in Zhou Nan as a model essay, it is required to take "Apricot" as the object of explanation, and explain it according to the main idea of the model essay in combination with materials. The second is to imitate the main spiritual content of the model essay. For example, Zhu Ziqing's "Spring" is used as a model essay to write "Footsteps of Spring", which depicts the touching scene of the earth returning to the earth in spring and praises the hope and strength brought by the vitality of spring. The third is to change the angle of the model essay and still choose the materials in the model essay to write. For example, taking the text "Blessing" as a model essay, the story of Xianglinsao is written in a positive way, depicting a female image persecuted by feudal ethics. The second method of imitation writing is imitation, that is, writing your own content by imitating the structure, expression and sentence characteristics of the model essay. It contains two situations. One is full imitation, which imitates the original form as a whole. For example, writing "What should we live for?" can completely imitate the structural layout of Russell's "Why do I live for?" First, directly answer the proposition, make a concrete exposition in the central part, and finally make a summary to show the principles of life I pursue. If it can be written simply and naturally, "new wine in old bottles" will be a better imitation. The second is a little imitation, only imitating one or two points of the model essay. The range of point imitation is very wide, including sentence patterns, paragraphs, beginning and end, association, observation, narration, description, explanation, lyric, discussion and so on. And all kinds of techniques can be imitated.
Third, imitation should be innovative.
The third link of parody is to make students understand that parody is not simply copying gourd, but mastering various writing methods of the article on the basis of imitation, and gradually innovating, and finally writing a good article with its own unique views. To achieve this goal, we need to pay attention to three points in imitation writing: first, we must determine the imitation point. Imitation point refers to the point to be imitated in the model essay, which can be expressed in one place or in several places. This is the connection and similarity between model essay and parody, and the key to parody is to determine imitation of Wen Dian. The determination of imitation points should be based on the characteristics of the model essay, the most obvious and prominent writing characteristics in the model essay, and the actual situation of students, which is only suitable for students to imitate. Second, parody should be natural and appropriate. It is necessary to conduct in-depth research on the selected model essay, understand the uniqueness of the model essay in writing, so as to imitate its essence and express its content in the form of others. Third, parody should be gradual. Practice a little imitation at first, and gradually carry out full imitation; Practice the imitation of sentence paragraphs at first, and gradually imitate the structure, writing and expression; It can be rigid at first and gradually achieve creative imitation. Achieved the goal from easy to difficult, from shallow to deep, from imitation to creation.
6. Ask for a parody composition (attached to the original text) for junior high school level reading. Some people define it as: mechanically looking at line after line, slowly turning over one article after another with your fingers, and biting out Zhihu's words in your mouth is as bland as chewing wax, basically a bookworm. Those angry words are a bold protest. No, reading is not like this. Reading is fun.
Reading is as brisk as running water. A trickle flows to the calm sea. It won't go up, and it won't set off big waves. Even if you throw stones angrily, it will only cause ripples and finally restore calm. It is teaching you to be calm and calm, and you should treat the enemy calmly. It is like a stream, which will only make you light physically and mentally.
Reading is like a big wave, shortness of breath, and determination is beyond doubt. With a scream, he fought bravely with the enemy, without hesitation, held his head high and stood up like a brave soldier. Therefore, reading is like a huge wave rising from the ground without warning. Only by bravely facing the huge waves and boldly fighting against them, there is only one belief. Bypassing the huge waves, the light is ahead.
In reading, I will be angry because businessmen are interested in the interests of the market; I will pity the exploited working people; I will feel what a broken world this is. I even fantasize that I am a wise savior. My heart will hurt. It's like breaking a bottle with mixed flavors. I don't know why it is contradictory. It seems to have everything, and it seems that there is nothing. I will dream of Kong Yiji in rags, those mocking spectators and hypocritical shopkeepers; I will dream of Plato's dialogues, I will dream of Ba Jin's torrent trilogy-Home, Spring and Autumn, and I will dream of the profound thinking on fate in Song of Youth.
Reading is a pleasure. In reading, there is the disappearance of the daughter of the sea like a bubble, and some people think deeply about life. Whether it is a bubble dream or a cruel reality, no matter how fate comes and goes, I can feel different enrichment, and that reality is within reach.
So, I study, and I am very happy.