Patriotic Composition Part 1
Gradually, it climbed up the branches and was reflected in the window lattice. On a whim, he went up to the pavilion alone and enjoyed the quiet night. Under the moonlight, there is a vast land. After the baptism of the moonlight, it looks extremely crystal clear. The breeze blows, carrying a faint smell of earth, which seems to be there but not there, refreshing. At this moment, I am thinking a lot, thinking about the land where we rest, soaked in the blood and sweat of our ancestors, thinking about the strong patriotism and the soul of the nation that defends the country and regards death as home...
Throughout the dynasties, many people with lofty ideals had a strong sense of caring for the people. They took national affairs as their own responsibility, fought for the country one after another, remained unyielding in the face of difficulties, defended the motherland, and cared about people's livelihood. It was this spirit that enabled the Chinese nation to endure through disasters. They are God's "favorites". Although they have passed away from the world, their names will go down in history and be respected by future generations.
Faced with the rise and fall of the nation, what I think of is the setting sun and the desert. I think of "Once I go to Zitai Lianshuo Desert, leaving only the green tombs facing the dusk." I have no complaints. He thought of Wang Zhaojun, who gave up Chang'an, which was surrounded by rivers and oasis, and was willing to go to the yellow sand desert in exchange for peace. I will never forget, and history will never forget, her eyes facing the setting sun, looking through the autumn water, and her patriotic heart beating with the history of the nation. Facing the honor and disgrace of the country, I thought of the patriotic soldier Yue Fei, the warriors on the battlefield, and the impassioned spirit of "cleaning up the old mountains and rivers". The slogan "Military Disaster"; I thought of his righteousness... It was unbearable to look back on the past, and an invisible dagger struck from behind and pierced the chest, leaving behind the reputation of "loyalty to the country".
They are patriotic. They love the mountains and rivers of the motherland, care about the fate of the motherland, fight bravely in times of crisis, and sacrifice their lives for the country. They are gone, but their patriotic souls are still there, and there are thousands more. Thousands of them are coming towards us, taking steps forward with an "iron" spirit. Counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present. We must adapt to the requirements of the development of the times, enhance our patriotism, dare to forge ahead, and strive for self-improvement. Although we are still teenagers, we firmly believe that if young people are rich, the country will be rich, and if young people are strong, the country will be strong. Today we study diligently to revitalize China, and tomorrow we contribute our own efforts to create a glorious future for our motherland. As long as national defense is there, there will be no room for prosperity. Faced with the increasing improvement of national defense construction, I see the progress of history and the rise of China! A prosperous country is in the near future! We are willing to work from our own hearts and build our own needs. Everyone has a wish in their heart, and the realization of this good wish requires continuous efforts. Similarly, the prosperity of the nation and the country also need to be exchanged for hard work and sweat, and they, national heroes such as Zhaojun and Yue Fei, have set good examples for future generations. Their fame will last forever... I have been haunted by my dreams so many times. To the sentries guarding the border, they stick to their posts for the prosperity of the motherland and the prosperity of the people. I am proud to be Chinese!
The night is still so quiet and beautiful, and my heart is already surging. That sincere patriotism.
Teacher’s comment: This article is an essay describing the patriotic spirit. The overall language of the article is fluent, sonorous, impassioned, and contagious. It connects the cases of Wang Zhaojun and Yue Fei to what "we" should do, Finally, it expresses the author's love for the country. The article has clear ideas and reasonable structure. It is an excellent composition.