The 800-word essay titled "Shining Days" for the third grade of junior high school is as follows:
Shining Days
The last rehearsal before the performance, I slowly Walk towards the dimly lit stage. The drum in my heart was beating, and I was a little nervous. Holding the microphone is heavy.
In order to be able to perform on stage in the last art festival of junior high school, I practiced over and over again. After watching the MV so many times, eating so many Golden Throat products, and sweating so much, I finally passed the preliminary selection and could stand on the stage. Today, I must succeed and live up to my efforts.
When I stood still in the center of the stage, the lights suddenly flashed, but I was blinded. This was completely different from what I imagined. In an instant, the stage seemed to have entered another time and space, and the audience was enveloped in darkness. I could only see dust floating in the air under the light. I suddenly became as small and light as a grain of dust, my mind went blank, and the drum in my heart beat louder.
When I sang the song "Under the Flying Clouds", "People walking in the sea of ????people, how are you doing? The hot dream in your heart..." I felt that I was at a loss what to do. It’s not like practicing repeatedly in the audience. I thought I would succeed if I worked hard, but after all, daily practice is different from the real stage, and this brilliance does not belong to me.
At the end of the concert, the stage lights dimmed. I bowed hastily and walked off the stage, waiting dejectedly to be laughed at. Unexpectedly, the art teacher gently patted my arm: "Your voice is very special. It has an ethereal beauty when it comes out through the speakers in the theater." After hearing this, I couldn't believe it.
The classmates in the dance team next to me also applauded me gently, "So you sing so beautifully, and the stage lights surround you, and you feel like you are shining on the stage!" "Really?" "Really, it would be better if you were more confident!" The teacher's eyes were shining and he looked at me with a smile.
"Under the flying clouds, speak in my ears, telling me not to worry about the pain and fear..." This song suddenly floated in my ears. The stage lights came on again. Standing on the side of the stage, I looked towards the stage, watching the light on the stage expand and expand, spreading to every dark corner, driving away the pain and fear. "Be confident!" I thought silently in my mind.
Officially on stage, I once again walked to the center of the stage, and all the light gathered on me. There was still a huge wave of darkness under the stage, but my heart became brighter under the light. "The wind makes the clouds grow flowers, and the flowers all over the sky bloom silently under the dark clouds..." I sang and danced, spreading my own unique light. Looking at the waving arms in the audience, singing my song confidently, yes, this is my passionate dream, blooming with confidence.
At the end of the song, the shining lights were fixed in the center of the stage and deep in my heart. I spread my arms like a pair of wings, approaching the light like the sun. Holding my head high, I believe that at this moment, I am the shining person!
For me, this day is an extremely shining day, not only because I realized that hot dream, but also because the shining light illuminated my confidence. Just like what the lyrics say, the flower under the dark clouds bloomed brightly into a sea of ??flowers...
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