The song on the other side
Why don't you draw a beautiful note and change it into a string together?
Flying at the top of the cloud, at the top of the cloud, I think this is repetitive.
The dew after the rain soaked a weak heart and set the tone for the whole poem. But how can dew "bubble"?
The warm night gently kicked off.
Vague thoughts
As the soft moonlight falls
The feeling in my heart
Accompanied by a faint breeze, this paragraph is still good, which really gives people a faint feeling.
The sentimental coast recalls the warm raindrops.
Faint thoughts are swaying in forgetting Sichuan, but I don't know what the other side here means, referring to myself.
The lingering stars dance in the night sky.
The lily on the other side is only fragrant for beautiful people. This sentence is a bit out of line. Do you want to use competitive methods?
A touch of love, a touch of affection
Knock out the coffee in your hand.
Filar silk care is indifference to fate.
There is generally nothing to say about this paragraph that makes my heart ache.
Gloomy sadness and astringent green duckweed.
Blur delicate words.
Foggy clouds, sad nights.
Make the ripples weak. . . . . . This passage really leaves a feeling of endless aftertaste.
Generally speaking, the tone of thoughts and emotions is unified and vague, which makes people remember deeply. In some places, the words are not elegant enough, but the feelings are sincere. This is a successful work, the only shortcoming is that it needs polishing.