Year: Yuan Author: Yuan Haowen
Stay away from the intestines. Thin and shallow makeup marks. Fly, fly, bilingual swallow. The news knows that Lang is nearby. It is raining in Mao Mao in front of the building. The curtain of begonia is light and cold. With the sound of spring in Du Yu, there are countless green hills on the trees.
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This is a prime minister's thought, with clear words and no need to analyze the content. Here, I will focus on the author's artistic techniques.
The first is the selection and application of observation points. The first two sentences explain the identity of the lyric hero and point out the theme of acacia. We can see the lonely heroine, bored and haggard. The following description takes the heroine as the observation point, which is called "subjective shot" in film terminology. The woman looked at the swallows and whispered softly. She couldn't help thinking: Will they know the whereabouts of Lang Jun? "The next film turned from indoor to outdoor. Through the curtain, I saw the light rain and thin silk thread interwoven into a kind of lost melancholy. Begonia flowers bloom alone in the rain, and the water drops are crystal clear as tears. In the distance came the cuckoo's cry. Looking around, there is no shadow of Lang, only a touch of green hills outside the city, shrouded in misty rain. This subjective observation point, like a hidden love line, connects one image to another. Readers will unconsciously move to the protagonist when they read it for the second time, and feel the lonely psychological atmosphere more directly and deeply.
Secondly, it is to express feelings on the spot. This word is almost all about scenery except the first sentence. However, due to the use of subjective lens and "I" to look at things, the scenery is full of the heroine's emotional color. Light rain in late spring and lonely courtyard are typical artistic conception of graceful words. A young woman, alone in the boudoir, can imagine her mood. A pair of swallows flew around, setting off her loneliness and desolation. Du Yu is the cuckoo, and it has always been the poet's most emotional creature, because there is a sad legend about its beauty, because it cries sadly, and because it always appears in the late spring when flowers wither. The author uses these aesthetic images with specific emotions to make the love of acacia beyond words.
The characteristic of this word lies in its delicate mind, which corresponds to the delicate feelings to be expressed. The heroine is emaciated and gaunt because of lovesickness. Lead flowers can't cover the dim color, so she said, "Fine makeup marks are shallow." Listening to the swallows whispering, trying to find out the whereabouts of Lang Jun, is enough to see the infatuation of women. At the end of the sentence, "there are countless green hills at the head of the tree" is obviously an upstairs view. The author's accurate grasp of space consciousness makes the reader immersive and enhances the sense of reality.
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