Continue to write and rewrite the composition

1. spread the composition from grade six to grade one. The happiness of 700 butterflies is to have a pair of colorful wings; The happiness of flowers is to give off a fragrant smell; The happiness of the sea is to collect sunshine ... My happiness is to live happily with my family.

Happiness is as ubiquitous as air. Dad brought me happiness.

Dad snores loudly at night, and I'm a little annoyed. However, I can't help feeling guilty when I think that my father goes out early and comes back late every day and tries to make money just to make my mother and I live better.

From my father's snoring, I heard the sound of happiness. My mother brought me happiness.

I failed in the exam, and my mother didn't scold me, but patiently analyzed the reasons for the wrong questions and taught me to remember the mistakes. Never doing it again in the future is the greatest progress. Every night, my mother and I study together. Sometimes, she can't help yawning in order to dictate words to me.

Looking at my mother's haggard face, I saw happiness. Grandma always brings me a small cake when she picks me up, for fear that I will be hungry after school.

I eat the cake bit by bit. I tasted happiness from a small cake.

Happiness is a euphemistic song; Happiness is an intriguing painting; Happiness is a warm and soft poem; Happiness is a bridge to communicate family ties ... Happiness is a special kind of love, which makes me learn to be happy and grateful.

2. How to write an enlarged composition and touch the spring?

A child named Quiet is blind.

One day, quiet parents took her out for a spring outing.

After arriving at the destination, she got off the bus quietly. She walked slowly to a small river and gently put her hand in. Quiet parents are about to shout out, because there is a small fish resting in the clear river under quiet hands.

At this moment, something incredible happened. I closed my fingers quietly and gently, even the lovely little fish! The fish with eyes open was caught by the magical spirit of a blind girl. The fish wriggled at the quiet fingertips, and the quiet face was full of surprises. This is another brand-new experience. Ning Jing's mind has come to a place she has never experienced before.

Quiet parents stood quietly, watching the silence. They seemed to see a quiet and colorful new world at home and abroad, and for an instant, they were deeply moved.

In the depths of spring, I feel the experience brought by fish quietly and carefully. For a long time, she opened her fingers, the fish swam slowly, and she bowed her head. At this moment, the quiet heart must cross a beautiful arc. Fish has drawn a beautiful curve in her eight-year-old life, telling the concept of swimming.

Quiet parents don't disturb the quiet, everyone has the right to live, and anyone can create a colorful world of their own. In this spring season, quietly tell this truth to her parents.

3. How to rewrite the article 1? Continuation is to continue writing a paragraph into an article, or to continue the content of a complete article, that is, to supplement the original content and continue the development of the plot along the original ideas.

Note: 1. Read and analyze the written part carefully before continuing. Try to figure out the formula of}: carefully, and understand the center and writing ideas of chapter _ 2. Imagine or associate with Taiwan Province's theory to continue to write a complete article. To prevent you from abandoning the written part provided and imagining it out of thin air. For example, there is a continuation question in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province: read the following materials. According to the topic and the relevant details mentioned above, the continuation of a narrative and continuation part should not exceed 250 words. This town has changed. At the corner leading to the town, there is an old wooden house. There lived a blind woman, Aunt Zhang, who helped people make a living since she was a child.

One day, with her savings and crutches, she trudged from the bumpy path in front of her house, touched the small wooden bridge, and went to the town to find the owner of the electrical store and asked him to install some street lamps. Boss Chen was surprised and asked, "You can't see it. What are you doing with a street lamp? " Aunt replied: "There were few passers-by before, and I didn't have any spare money at that time. Now there are more and more passers-by, and I have saved some money. In order to facilitate others to walk, please install some street lamps! " Boss Chen was very moved and decided to reduce the price and install street lamps for Aunt Zhang.

The news that the blind man Zhang Man Dayan installed street lamps spread all over the town the next day. Everyone was moved, so ... for example, the first topic of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Liaoning Province in 2002 was continuation: read the following materials and write as required. Long, long ago, in a far, far place, there was a big maze in which four guys lived: one was a little mouse named "Sniff", with an open personality. One is a little mouse named "Hurry", which is quick in character and bold in action; One is a dwarf named Hem, who is stubborn, content with the status quo and likes to complain. One is called "Yang Qing", who was timid at first. Four little guys live a carefree and happy life, guarding a delicious cheese mountain stored by someone who doesn't know.

But one morning, they suddenly found that the cheese was gone. Why? What shall we do? The story starts here ... Requirements: 1. Say, "The cheese is gone!" For the beginning, keep writing.

2. Imagination and association should be rich, narrative description should be specific, and plot development should conform to their respective personality characteristics. 3. On the premise of narrative description as the main form of expression, there are no restrictions on styles (such as short stories, stories, fables, fairy tales, plays, etc.). ).

4. Clear and neat handwriting, no less than 600 words. Second, rewriting is a form of writing that changes the genre or part of the content of the provided materials according to specific requirements.

Its essence is to re-conceive, cut, lay out and re-create the expression form on the premise and basis of raw materials. Pay attention to: 1 when rewriting. There are many kinds of rewriting, which should be rewritten according to the specific requirements of the topic.

On the basis of carefully reading the original text and fully understanding the ideological content of the original text, rewrite it. 2. When rewriting, you can't copy the gourd ladle, but re-process and re-create the original. So you can't copy the original text, you should write it in your own language.

3. Rewriting should be faithful to the basic content and spirit of the original text, and cannot be fabricated at will. The following article is adapted from He's poem "Homecoming Book". Let's see how the author rewrites this poem.

I resigned from my hometown and set foot on my way home in spring. Standing alone in the bow, the green hills on both sides of the strait quickly retreated.

"caged birds love to return to the forest, and fish in the pool return to their source." How many sleepless nights, I stood at the window looking at the moon and missing my hometown; Nowadays, the ethereal shadow of my hometown is already discernible.

After a burst of joy, more melancholy came to my mind ... Looking back 50 years ago, I was ambitious, in the prime of my life, striving for success, traveling around, working hard and tireless. Although my career is successful now, my hair is sparse.

50 years of wind, frost, rain and snow, scenes like smoke and fog, gradually dispersed, I looked up and sighed, feeling dejected. Walk along the familiar field path.

The roadside is lush, bees are dancing around butterflies, and the long-lost smell of earth is coming. I seem to be back to my childhood, a frolicking child, and back to my boyhood when I wrote and pointed out the mountains and rivers. Today, after many searches and treks, I finally returned to my hometown after a long separation.

"Grandpa, where are you from? Whose house are you going to? " The childish voice interrupted my thoughts. A group of lovely village children all asked me with a smile.

I suddenly froze. Faced with doubts and curious questions, I was speechless for a moment.

The children didn't seem to understand what this meant, so they suddenly dispersed with a smile-I was old and decadent, but I was treated as a new guest by my hometown! I recall the people and events of that year and slowly recall the past. Fifty years later, things have changed.

Only the old ginkgo tree in front of the house grows new green, and the lake behind the house is still rippling with the spring breeze. I am deeply moved by this situation: the spring of nature is always there, where can I find the spring of life? There are many ancient poems worth remembering in our textbooks. We might as well pick up a pen and turn these profound ancient poems into beautiful prose.

For example, students can try to write the following topic: Rewrite The Charcoal Man into a short story. Requirements: (l) Make reasonable imagination processing based on the plot of the original poem; (2) The original poem cannot be translated into modern Chinese; (3) The word count is about 600 words.

In recent years, among the composition topics of senior high school entrance examination in various provinces and cities, the composition topics about continuation and rewriting are more common. I hope that students can attach importance to these writing forms in their usual study, practice writing often, practice and study in middle school, and constantly improve their ability to write narratives.

4. Start the composition "Spear and Shield" There was a man named Ma Mingbian in Chu State. He is an idle and ignorant young man. Because his family has been selling weapons for generations, he learned a few tricks from others and danced with spears and shields in the streets.

When he came to the street, he shouted, "I bought a shield. Look at my ancestral aegis. It is indestructible. The fire is not bad, the rain is not wet, the lightning is constant, and the spear is * * *. "

But I saw a man's face engraved on this shield, glaring like a steel bell and slanting eyebrows like iron bolts. When your mouth is full of teeth, your beard sticks up, which is quite imposing.

People gradually gathered around, and Ma Bian was very happy. His beard stuck to his bulging cheek and he was busy raising the big shield. He knocked it on the ground first, and then raised his shield. The left one hit, and the right one was out of breath. People applauded. Seeing that the effect was good, he grabbed the spear and threw out the shield, full of energy. He shouted, "Guys, look at my spear. It is as fast as lightning and stronger than a gust of wind. If you stick it down, you can break the ground, and if you stick it up, you can shake the palace. "

Say that finish, with a drink, brandish a spear and stab. This can't be done. It's easy to raise a shield, but the spear can't be chaotic.

He stabbed with his left hand and waved with his right hand, throwing two or three tricks he knew backwards. He was so tired that he was out of breath. He threw away his spear and squatted down to rest. No one knows. Seeing his varied dance, he felt very powerful and applauded. At this time, a child was squeezed out of the crowd.

However, seeing the child's small skeleton and the wit flashing in his crystal clear eyes, he stepped forward and asked solemnly, "What will happen if you stab your indestructible shield with your extremely sharp and unstoppable spear?" The horse listened and looked at his shield and spear. He was tongue-tied and flushed. When everyone saw this scene, they all laughed at once, but when Wang laughed so hard that his crutches fell off, Xiao Zhang even grinned from ear to ear and shouted, "Ma Bian, you are really a liar, boasting and deceiving, and contradicting yourself." The children on the sidelines jumped up and down because their coke was broken. I'm calling a friend.

Ma Bian knew it was boring when he saw that people were happy to cook. No one wanted a spear and a shield, so he had to sneak away with a spear in one hand and a shield in the other. Shortly after Ma Bian came home, his friends visited him. After listening to Ma Bian's experience, he said with a smile, "One should be consistent in words and deeds, not boastful and contradictory."

From then on, Ma Bian was honest and trustworthy, and the weapons he made were genuine and meticulous. He made a lot of money by catching up with the war.