Chou-yu Cheng
I walked through Jiangnan.
The appearance in the season is like the opening and falling of lotus flowers.
If the east wind does not come, catkins will not fly in March.
Your heart is like a little lonely city.
Like a bluestone street facing the night.
Without a sound, the spring curtain in March can't be lifted.
Your heart is a small closed window.
My dada horseshoe is a beautiful mistake.
I am not a returnee, I am a passer-by. ...
Mistake has nine lines and 94 words. The whole article is not long, but its artistic skills are not only praised, but also recited orally.
Structurally, it implies two clues: vertical and horizontal. The obvious vertical line is from large view to small view, with distinct layers. The first two sentences are set in the vast south of the Yangtze River, then the camera moves to the small town, then to the streets, curtains and window leaves, and finally falls on the horseshoe, breaking the silence ahead. This writing is quite similar to the spatial treatment in Liu Zongyuan's Jiang Xue, from the big scene of "there are no birds in the mountains" to the small scene of fishermen fishing alone in the middle of the river, which pushed the poem to a climax.
Judging from the horizontal line, the first two sentences should be the end. It is precisely because "I" walked from Jiangnan to that woman's place and didn't go in. The woman's expectation of "face like lotus" became disheartened. The last two sentences should have been "I'm not a passer-by, just a passer-by", so "my horseshoe is a beautiful mistake". Here the poet used a small inversion sentence. This arrangement has created an uneven level of structure, which is more poetic and shines brightly in disharmony.
A blooming tree
Xi Murong
how
Let you meet me
In my most beautiful moment
for this reason
I prayed in front of the Buddha for 500 years.
Pray for Buddha to let us have a dusty relationship.
Buddha made me a tree.
Follow the path you may take.
Under?the?sun
Carefully full of flowers.
Every flower carries my previous hopes.
When you get close,
Listen carefully
Trembling leaves
This is the passion I am waiting for.
When you walked under the tree, you didn't notice me.
It fell to the ground behind you.
My friend,
Not falling petals
But my withered heart.
The soul of poetry lies in love, and only when love is sincere can there be poetry. Xi Murong's A Flowering Tree shows a girl's longing for love, which is really touching.
At the beginning of the poem, "How to let you meet me/at my most beautiful moment", a beautiful, dignified, bold and frank girl image gushed out, vivid and touching. There is no earth-shattering oath, and the word "most beautiful" describes the girl's pursuit of purity, holiness, greatness and beauty in detail and incisively, but it is not affected at all. It is a sincere and natural expression of the girl.
"The sunshine is full of flowers/flowers carefully, which is my hope in my previous life."
Some people say that love is fate. Love a person or not love a person is a feeling. Can't choose. Any effort is deliberate reluctance and futility. However, in the vast sea of people, how many people are waiting in line, holding the number plate of love, and looking forward from left to right, how many turns does love have to turn? The man I am waiting for, how far is he in the future? If it is fate, it is human feelings. Modern people flatter fate, which is a kind of negative self-abandonment comfort. The woman in the poem "blooms cautiously" on the roadside where lovers must pass, which is a declaration of love and a positive result of "sharing" with lovers. The word "prudence" describes the psychological activities of women who strive to improve themselves and treat love with a sincere heart. Life is in a hurry, and it's not just love that flows away inadvertently. Success takes three minutes, seven minutes depends on hard work, and love wins.
"The friend who falls behind you is not a petal/my withered heart." When the right person "passes by", it is not the petals that fall on the ground, but tears, blood and loss, crying like complaining, and its bleak situation makes people cry; However, falling in love is not heartless, and turning into spring mud is more protective. The girl who fell to the ground is innocent, without regrets, and born without regrets. Her true feelings are revealed and she is eager to pursue, which is really earth-shattering.