The first one: read it through in the traditional way;
The second type: read the recommended poems in this issue first, enjoy them by yourself, and read them against this article;
Third, you can skip the appreciation part and start reading directly from the poetry writing part.
Before I begin to appreciate this poem, I want to thank the recommender of this poem: the author "Yang Youyang".
-Give warmth
The fallen leaves finished their last trembling.
Flowers disappear in the blue crystals of lakes and swamps.
The anvil in July is still far away.
warm
The geese are not in the autumn sky.
Write down their beautiful sonnets.
warm
Horseshoe leaves and flowers.
On the hill road in the south.
The singer left a broken rhyme.
In the dim temples in the north
Autumn, autumn left nothing.
Leaving only a warmth.
Leaving only a warmth.
Everything was left behind.
When I read this poem, which is as warm as sunshine, I can't help but think of a picture of a poet standing lazily in the warm sunshine on a crisp and sunny autumn day, holding a book of poems sung by the ancients in his hand and looking into the distance. He saw the last fallen leaves on the tree, the reeds beside the lake and marsh, looked up at the geese that had disappeared in the autumn sky, and remembered the poems of the ancients who were sad about autumn. When melancholy and melancholy are all over my eyebrows, I feel that my whole body is covered with sunshine. He thought, in autumn, the flowers in the south are still in full bloom, and the horseshoe must be left behind; In the north, although everything has declined, there are still Zen sounds in the faint temples. Everything in spring is too cold, everything in summer is too hot, everything in winter is too cold and everything in autumn is warm. The poet bathed in sunshine, looked at the autumn that was about to leave, and wrote a song about warm Qiu Ge for it.
The first impression of autumn is full of cold and desolation. This is the traditional consciousness left by classical poetry. When we think of autumn, we think of fallen leaves, which are dying one after another, symbolizing the decline of a kind of life. The poet will hang in mid-air, and the autumn leaves will be rustled by the west wind, shaking like an adult in the rustling wind. In The Last Trembling, a picture suddenly appeared: a yellow leaf, trembling and slowly falling into the dust from the bare treetops, was the last autumn leaf. It shows that autumn is deep and desolate, coming towards me.
The lake is like a pair of eyes, and purple flowers float on the blue crystal. Intoxicating beauty. But at this time, the flowers have disappeared, and such beautiful scenery no longer exists. Let us vaguely feel that there is a feeling and helplessness that beauty is gone. It is also emphasized that autumn is really deep.
The image of "anvil sound" is often used in classical poetry, such as "clearing anvil, cold anvil and dusk anvil". Du Fu's poem "Autumn Prosperity" is "Cold clothes urge knives and rulers everywhere, and Baidicheng is anxious". The sound of anvil here is the sound of rushing through the city wall and dusk, and there is a chill that attacks the heart and spleen. This anvil sound belongs to late autumn.
In the poet's eyes, the sound of anvil in July must be such a picture: women gather by the river to pound clothes, while working, while pulling home, not far away, children are chirping in the river to catch fish, men are carrying water for their tanks, and everyone is happy and carefree. Unfortunately, this anvil is far away, and the poet once again makes readers feel the impression of "deep autumn" and further strengthens it.
The sudden appearance of "warmth", like a dark night, suddenly lit a torch, which danced proudly in the dark. Against the background of the dark night, it is even more dazzling and precious.
In autumn, geese migrate to the south in droves. In the sky, they are arranged in herringbone for a while and in herringbone for a while. With this description, everyone will remember the primary school texts they have read. Here, the poet shows you a picture of geese flying south. And personify them into poets who are good at writing sonnets. The ever-changing formation of geese is their beautiful lines. The pictures of art make people linger. But unfortunately, the geese have flown away, leaving no trace of wings, and of course we can't see their lines. In this passage, the poet further deepened the impression of "deep autumn" and made you feel a kind of melancholy that lingered in your heart for a long time.
"Warmth" appears again, just like when you are in despair, there is always a force to support and encourage you. Warm, like a timely help. When you are about to fall into darkness, this torch will always illuminate you. Warmth, like fire, soothes these full little scatters in the whole poem.
The warmth at the end of the second quarter finally warmed the poet's slightly sad mood. The poet began to think: in this late autumn season, the horse must have left the remnants of the southern mountain path, and the singer must have left the rhyme of the northern temple.
These two sentences suddenly remind me of Haizi's sentence in autumn, "What should be gained has not been gained/what should be lost has long been lost". The third section is full of melancholy eyebrows because of the "atmospheric loss" in the first two sections, and now it has been lengthened, and the mood has gradually become warm from desolation. Warmth brings change and hope to the poet, and lights up the emotional tone of the whole poem.
In the late autumn, the horse gets flowers and the singer gets rhymes. What did it get in the coming autumn? It seems that when it left, it left nothing for itself, only a warmth of its own.
The poet finally said: Leave a warmth and everything will be left. The meaning of warmth has been fully sublimated here. This passage is the climax of the whole poem, bursting out like the rising sun. The whole poem also came to an abrupt end in this climax, leaving the next blank, and the poet left the readers to ponder and imagine for themselves. This is the charm of poetry, full of words and infinite meaning. This poem is a typical example.
Through the reading and appreciation of this poem, we will find that this poem has several very distinctive features, which are very worthy of our study and reference:
The common images in this poem, such as "anvil sound, horseshoe sound, wild goose sound, falling flowers, musical rhyme and temple", are selected from a large number of classical poems, which makes readers feel that the whole poem has entered a beautiful classical artistic conception at once. This is a modern poem, which perfectly inherits the classical poetry and has a deep national brand. Therefore, absorbing the essence handed down by the ancients is one of the ways to enrich our modern poetry. Through these images, the poet described a beautiful view of late autumn with a sense of space, thus creating a unique artistic conception of sad autumn. Not only the image and artistic conception inherit the Chinese style, but also the spirit, but the poet is unwilling to go with the flow. He went against the current and bravely put warmth in the whole poem, which is a rebellion against tradition and a creation. Therefore, poetry should be actively created, not just to recombine images.
Here I want to focus on the difference between image and artistic conception: image is a concrete thing, such as pots and pans in daily life, which can all be the image of poetry. Artistic conception is a group of images, an abstract emotion, atmosphere and scene composed of * * *. Only with artistic conception can readers feel the emotional and spiritual realm that the poet wants to express. The relationship between image and artistic conception is just like building a pavilion. Image is a brick and a wood, and artistic conception is a pavilion made of brick and wood. From the shape, layout and decoration of the exhibition hall, we can understand its style, interest, use and significance.
(1) anthropomorphic
"Leaves tremble" and "Poems Written by Swallows" are anthropomorphic and add interest, but they also defame images, arouse people's interest and give readers more imagination.
(2) Metaphor
Blue Crystal in Lake Marsh and Broken Rhyme. Metaphor makes the image to be expressed more vivid and impresses readers.
(3) Symbol
The image of "warmth" is a symbol. At the beginning, you can be regarded as a person's name, which can be a lover, a relative, a confidant, a warm and dedicated character and spirit, or the warmth brought by the warm autumn sun. No matter how you understand it, warmth symbolizes a soothing positive energy. Even if the whole world enters late autumn, the cold winter is coming, and the warmth will last forever. This is the function of symbolism, which can make your sentences ambiguous, thus enhancing the imagination and extensibility of poetry (I emphasized the use of symbolism in today's appreciation of mountains and rivers).
(4) Puns
Two related techniques are used in this poem. The use of the words "stay" and "warm" gives this poem many different understandings. Both "stay" and "warm" make use of the ambiguity of words. This makes the imagination of the whole poem expand invisibly, which makes people memorable. Another pun with the help of multiple voices is Liu Yuxi's Zhuzhi Ci: "Willow green Jiang Shuiping, I can hear the songs on the Langjiang River. Sunrise in the east and rain in the west, the road is sunny. " Sunlight and sentimentality are homophonic, thus increasing interest.
The emotional drive of this poem is like sunrise, and the first and second verses are like, before sunrise, it is full of darkness and cold. The feelings in the third season are like, with the gradual rise of a glimmer of light on the dark horizon, the feelings are cheerful. In the fourth and fifth quarters, the dawn slowly expands, and the rising sun generate from the dawn. Poetry is based on emotion, structure is skeleton, image is flesh and blood, and artistic conception is soul.
From the beginning, the poet used fallen leaves, flowers, imaginary anvil sounds and flying geese to render the typical sad artistic conception of autumn, which played an emotional role in rendering and strengthening, and the two paragraphs were juxtaposed; In the third section, the sound of horseshoes and falling flowers, the singer and the rhyme, one south and one north, are a group of juxtaposed images, but they play a turning role in the whole poem. The front is full of "loss", and the third paragraph means "gain", which leads to a self-question and self-answer sentence about what autumn left behind. Finally, point out the theme: leave a warmth, and everything will be left.
(I talked about the benefits of Zhang Xianzhi in detail in Today's Hills, so I won't go into details. Please forgive me. )
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