I never really liked it. Funnily enough, when I was a child, I went up a tree to pick begonia flowers and didn't want to be stung by bees.
I almost fell in pain. Adults told me that bees don't sting easily, and they must be mistaken for you.
Hurt it before it stings; Once you are stung, your life will run out and you won't live long. I heard it. I thought it was honey.
Poor bee, forgive it. But since then, whenever I see bees, my feelings are bumpy, and I have never.
How comfortable.
In April this year, I went to Conghua Hot Spring in Guangdong for a few days. Surrounded by mountains and a pool of spring water.
Water. The thick green scenery is simply a green landscape painting. The night I first went there, it was cloudy occasionally.
Leaning against the window, I wonder how so many black hills appear out of thin air in front of the building, one heavy and one heavy.
Yes, ups and downs? Remember that there is a garden in front of the building, not a mountain. What kind of illusion is this? Run to heaven
At first sight, I couldn't help laughing. It turned out to be litchi trees all over the mountains, one after another, and the leaves of each tree were dense.
It doesn't look like a mountain in the dark!
Litchi is perhaps the freshest and most beautiful fruit in the world. Su Dongpo wrote such a poem: "Three lychees a day."
A hundred, I will grow up to be a Lingnan person. "Visible litchi beauty. It happened that I came at a bad time. Litchi just bloomed.
Flowers. The tree is full of pale yellow flowers, which is not outstanding. The newly grown tender leaves are reddish in color and look better than flowers.
Some. It takes about three months from flowering to fruit ripening. It seems that I can't wait to eat fresh litchi here.
It is time to eat fresh litchi honey. Some people may not have heard of this rare thing, right? There are many litchi trees in Conghua.
Just like the sea in Wang Yang, when the flowers bloom, the bees are buzzing all over the place, so busy that I forget the morning and evening. Litchi honey special meal
Point is pure in color and rich in nutrition. Most people who live in hot springs like to eat this honey to nourish their bodies. Gracious
Comrade gave me two bottles. When the cork is opened, it is so sweet; Mix half a cup and drink it. It's sweet and fragrant.
It smells like fresh litchi. Drinking such good honey will make you feel that life is sweet.
..... How?
I don't feel moved. I want to see the bees that I have never liked very much.
Deep in the litchi forest, there is a corner of a white house, which is a beekeeping farm of the hot spring commune, but it is very interesting.
It's called "Beekeeping House". As soon as I approached the building, I saw swarms of bees coming in and out.
Flying around, the buzzing scene will make you think that maybe bees are scrambling to build a new life.
..... How?
The beekeeper Lao Liang led me into the building. Calling him Lao Liang is actually a young man, and his movements are quite stable.
Maybe Lao Liang wants me to go deep into the life of bees. He carefully opened a wooden honeycomb and separated it.
There is a row of boards, full of bees, crawling around. The queen bee is dark brown and very long, each one
Worker bees are willing to feed it with their own royal jelly.
Old Liang whispered admiringly, "Look at these little things, how obedient they are!"
I asked, "How much honey can such a swarm of bees collect a year?"
Lao Liang said: "You can cut dozens of pounds. Bees like to work. The weather in Guangdong is fine and there are many flowers.
Bees are not idle all year round. There is a lot of honey brewed, but you can only eat it yourself. Leave some honey every time you cut it.
Point, just enough for them to eat. They never quarrel and don't care about anything. They still go on working.
Honey, all day, one month ... "
I asked again, "Aren't you afraid that something will spoil such a good baby?"
Lao Liang said, "Why not? You have to be careful of bugs and bumblebees crawling in. Bumblebee is here.
Thieves are the worst. They often fall at the mouth of the hive and do bad things. "
I couldn't help laughing: "Oh! There are invaders in nature. How to deal with bumblebees? "
Lao Liang said, "Hurry! If you can't get rid of it, kill it. If you leave it there, it will kill the bees. "
I thought of a question and asked, "How long can bees live?"
Lao Liang said: "The queen bee can live for three years, and the worker bee can live for half a year at most."
I can't help shivering: what a lovely elf! I don't want anything from people, but I give them good things.
Bees are brewing honey and life; Brewing the sweetest life is not for yourself, but for mankind.
Bees are small, but how noble bees are!
Through the litchi forest, I looked at the fields in the distance, where farmers were standing in the rice fields, dividing them vigorously.
Seedling transplantation. They are building their own lives with labor, but they are actually making honey-for themselves and for others.
People also brew the honey of life for future generations.
That night, I had a strange dream that I became a little bee.
1. The idea of the article.
This paper can be divided into five parts.
Part I (1): I have never liked bees. The function of this part is mainly to promote first and then suppress, which makes the organization of the article materials tortuous.
Part 2 (2-4): I saw litchi trees and ate litchi honey.
The third part (5- 17): This is the main part of this paper, mainly writing about the situation of honey production by bees and praising them. In this part, the author's feelings for bees have changed fundamentally.
Part IV (l8): Praise the hard work of farmers.
The fifth part (l9) ends with "Dreaming to be a little bee", expressing the yearning and pursuit for the dedication of bees.
2. The characteristics of material selection.
The text shows the selfless dedication from things to people, and writes a lot of content, but it is well organized. One of the important reasons is that there is a clue running through the whole article, that is, the author's emotional changes to bees.
The author began to write about the psychology of not liking bees, which originated from the experience of being stung in childhood, but later he became curious about bees because he tasted delicious litchi honey, so he decided to see the life of bees. After visiting a beekeeping farm, I learned about the life of bees and their selfless dedication. The author was deeply moved, so his feelings for bees changed greatly. He was associated with bees and remembered the farmers and other hardworking people who made selfless contributions in Qian Qian. So he praised this spirit and expressed his yearning and pursuit for this dedication.
In this way, the article organically combines memory, vision, hearing, thinking and other materials into an inseparable whole through the author's emotional changes to bees.
3. Expressive methods of borrowing things to express feelings.
The object of praise is people, which is a kind of spirit, but the article is not written directly, but around a big bend. Let's talk about being stung by a bee first, then gradually understand the spirit of a bee, and then praise it, praise it, and praise people who are similar to it through association. Writing on the surface is actually describing people and spirit, and euphemistically praising the selfless dedication of working people with bees. This kind of expression is to express feelings through things.
1. Visiting the Bee House, when Liang said that "worker bees can live for half a year at most", why did the author "have no choice"?
"I can't help shivering" here shows that the author's inner view of bees has changed fundamentally, from "dislike" in the past to inner shock. After eating litchi honey, I went to see the bee farm. When I listened to Lao Liang's preliminary introduction, I just thought that bees were very good and the honey brewed was delicious. But when the author learned that the life of bees is so short, and in such a short life, bees keep working and make great contributions to mankind, but they get very little, that kind of selfless dedication deeply touched the author's heart, so "I can't help but tremble."
2. Why do you think farmers are actually making honey when you see them transplanting rice?
Farmers are similar to bees. Bees make honey for human beings, adding sweet colors to human life; Farmers, like bees, work hard all their lives, create a happy life and make great contributions to society. Therefore, farmers are brewing the honey of life, making selfless contributions like bees to make life sweeter.
Finally, I said I had a "strange" dream. Is this dream strange? Why do you have such a dream?
At the end of the article, the author experienced some emotional changes and was moved by the selfless dedication of bees and farmers. He has a keen yearning and pursuit for this nature, so that that night, the author dreamed that he had become a little bee. This dream is not strange at all. "I miss it day and night."
I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again!
When people walk under the bare buttonwood, they always say so regretfully.
The place where this phoenix tree was born is really strange. The house we lived in was originally divided into two rooms for two families. This phoenix tree just grows in the middle of the house, impartial, and can be said to be the boundary card of the two families.
Although there is only one stone step in front of the house, there are two roads from the front to the outside of the garden-one for each family, and the phoenix tree was born in the middle of the two roads. The shade of trees covered the pastures of the two families. It rains at night, and the rain that falls on the plane leaves is also shared by the two families.
It's a pity that there are too many ants in the garden, and the branches of the phoenix tree are eroded by ants and gradually lose their fruit. After a night of thunderstorm, its upper part was split, leaving only a tree more than 20 feet high, standing there as slender as sapphire.
Spring has come, and there are many green leaves on the tree, which are attached to the end of the tree and look like a palm tree.
Who says this phoenix tree will never live again? Now it has new leaves and even new skills, and will soon be able to restore its former beauty.
A gust of wind passed, and Ye Er was cut down again. When I picked it up, the snowman had bitten off two-thirds of it-it was the ants who bit it off again. Oh, shit!
But the brave phoenix tree didn't stop it from surviving.
The ants are coming again, and the wind is rising again. Ye Er, which has grown as big as the palm of your hand, has drifted away again, but it is still sprouting new leaves and has been busy for a whole spring and summer.
Qiu Lai, old cypress trees and oranges are still lush, but other trees are gaunt. Close to the ancient old elm tree, protecting its green leaves, just like the old people want to save the furniture they have worked hard for half their lives, but how can the west wind not be like a loser and ripple in their ears every day? Now its leaves are almost gone, and the lush green leaves in the garden have also decreased, but the blue sky has also increased. Li Xue, who climbed the dried elm tree, was also very happy. There is no shelter on it. He can drink wind and frost. His face is as red as a maple leaf. He is so confident. No matter how old and broken that elm tree is, he groans on his head.
Dali chrysanthemums stagger and struggle to bloom in the weeds. Petunia's vines have withered for a long time, but they still bloom, only more beautiful and pitiful than before, when it was small and full of lavender and bright red flowers in the cold dew. There used to be fields where musk flowers and impatiens were planted, and sometimes a few residual flowers could be seen. In the autumn wind, the jade butterfly flies around and stops on the flowers from time to time. It is sad and freezing for a long time. It is willing to freeze in the cold flowers!
At this time, another phoenix tree in the garden, Ye Er, has flown to most of it. The bare buttonwood naturally has nothing but a slender and graceful branch, standing in the bleak sunset.
This phoenix tree. Afraid that I can't live anymore!
If people walk under the bare buttonwood, they say so regretfully.
However, I know that next spring will come.
Will there be ants and breezes next spring?
However, I know that a tung tree has fallen into the soil.
"Wutong" is an excerpt from Su's prose collection "Blue Sky", and it is a lyric prose.
This article describes a dying bare buttonwood tree. Even after being struck by the wind and eaten by ants, there are still many green leaves on the tree when spring comes, but this new life is attacked by the wind and hurt by ants. However, the brave phoenix tree did not lose its ambition to survive. It is still sprouting and spitting new leaves, and it has been busy for a whole spring and summer. The author endowed the Chinese parasol tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, which fully demonstrated the author's love for life.
In writing, this article has the following characteristics:
First, express your ambition with something. Since ancient times, many literati have pinned their feelings on the phoenix tree, which has always been a symbol of desolation and sadness. For example, Wang Changling's Poem of Long Letters in Autumn says, "The phoenix tree in Jinjing is yellow and the autumn leaves are yellow, and the bead curtain does not roll frost at night. The smoked jade pillow has no color, and you can listen to the Nangong for a long time. " It is about a girl who is deprived of youth, freedom and happiness. In a desolate and lonely palace, she lay alone, listening to the palace leak. The first sentence of the poem begins with a phoenix tree with yellow leaves by the well, which sets off a bleak and cold atmosphere. Another example is Zhou Zizhi's "Partridge Sky" in Song Dynasty: "A little residual red will be exhausted, and the autumn wind will cool the screen. It rained on the leaves of the plane for three nights, and the leaves were leaving. " It depicts a lonely, lonely and melancholy hero image. However, the author Su did the opposite, endowing the phoenix tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, and revealing that life is not always smooth. In the face of difficulties and setbacks, we should have firm faith and tenacious perseverance!
Second, if we want to promote it, we must first suppress it. At the beginning, the author tries his best to describe the withered state and harsh environment of Indus. "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again." "The branches of the buttonwood tree were eroded by ants and gradually weakened." "After a night of thunderstorm, its upper part was split, leaving only a tree more than twenty feet high." In this state, the phoenix tree actually reveals a lot of green leaves, highlighting the theme of the work.
Third, the side foil. In order to express the theme more deeply and widely, and leave a broader imagination space for readers, the author not only praised the phoenix tree positively, but also set off its tenacious vitality from the side. "Old cypress orange is still green" and "close to the ancient elm to protect its green leaves", but in the end, I couldn't help moaning in the west wind, which was in sharp contrast with the optimistic and strong phoenix tree and once again praised its tenacity.
Fourth, use analogy. Dali chrysanthemum struggling in weeds, morning glory withered by vines, and even peach and impatiens stubbornly live in cold and cool dew, blooming fertility. When the author praises them, he is actually praising the phoenix tree, which makes its tenacious vitality universal.
Fifth, echo from beginning to end. In this paper, the change of bare phoenix tree in different seasons is used as a clue to organize the materials, which echoes before and after. At the beginning, I wrote in the plaintive voice of passers-by, "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again!" " At the end, I wrote people's regret, "This phoenix tree may never live again", responding to the beginning. But the author didn't stop there. The phrase "I know a tung tree has fallen in the soil" has brought people new hope. Even if this phoenix tree dies, its seeds will continue to live!
"Wutong" is an excerpt from Su's prose collection "Blue Sky", which is a lyrical prose.
This article describes a dying bare buttonwood tree. Even after being struck by the wind and eaten by ants, there are still many green leaves on the tree when spring comes, but this new life is attacked by the wind and hurt by ants. However, the brave phoenix tree did not lose its ambition to survive. It is still sprouting and spitting new leaves, and it has been busy for a whole spring and summer. The author endowed the Chinese parasol tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, which fully demonstrated the author's love for life.
In writing, this article has the following characteristics:
First, express your ambition with something. Since ancient times, many literati have pinned their feelings on the phoenix tree, which has always been a symbol of desolation and sadness. For example, Wang Changling's Poem of Long Letters in Autumn says, "The phoenix tree in Jinjing is yellow and the autumn leaves are yellow, and the bead curtain does not roll frost at night. The smoked jade pillow has no color, and you can listen to the Nangong for a long time. " It is about a girl who is deprived of youth, freedom and happiness. In a desolate and lonely palace, she lay alone, listening to the palace leak. The first sentence of the poem begins with a phoenix tree with yellow leaves by the well, which sets off a bleak and cold atmosphere. Another example is Zhou Zizhi's "Partridge Sky" in Song Dynasty: "A little residual red will be exhausted, and the autumn wind will cool the screen. It rained on the leaves of the plane for three nights, and the leaves were leaving. " It depicts a lonely, lonely and melancholy hero image. However, the author Su did the opposite, endowing the phoenix tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, and revealing that life is not always smooth. In the face of difficulties and setbacks, we should have firm faith and tenacious perseverance!
Second, if we want to promote it, we must first suppress it. At the beginning, the author tries his best to describe the withered state and harsh environment of Indus. "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again." "The branches of the buttonwood tree were eroded by ants and gradually weakened." "After a night of thunderstorm, its upper part was split, leaving only a tree more than twenty feet high." In this state, the phoenix tree actually reveals a lot of green leaves, highlighting the theme of the work.
Third, the side foil. In order to express the theme more deeply and widely, and leave a broader imagination space for readers, the author not only praised the phoenix tree positively, but also set off its tenacious vitality from the side. "Old cypress orange is still green" and "close to the ancient elm to protect its green leaves", but in the end, I couldn't help moaning in the west wind, which was in sharp contrast with the optimistic and strong phoenix tree and once again praised its tenacity.
Fourth, use analogy. Dali chrysanthemum struggling in weeds, morning glory withered by vines, and even peach and impatiens stubbornly live in cold and cool dew, blooming fertility. When the author praises them, he is actually praising the phoenix tree, which makes its tenacious vitality universal.
Fifth, echo from beginning to end. In this paper, the change of bare phoenix tree in different seasons is used as a clue to organize the materials, which echoes before and after. At the beginning, I wrote in the plaintive voice of passers-by, "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again!" " At the end, I wrote people's regret, "This phoenix tree may never live again", responding to the beginning. But the author didn't stop there. The phrase "I know a tung tree has fallen in the soil" has brought people new hope. Even if this phoenix tree dies, its seeds will continue to live!
Attached to the original text: "The Bare Indus"