1, the hibiscus flowers beside the moat fluctuated in the sudden wind, and the oblique rain whipped the vines on the wall. -Liu Tang Zongyuan's "Going to Liuzhou Tower to Send May to Seal Four States"
Appreciate:
"Hibiscus flowers are blowing in the moat, and vines along the wall are whipped by oblique rain" is what you saw from close range. It's just a close-up, so it's written in detail. As far as describing the sudden storm scene is concerned, this is a "fu" pen, which has both contrast and interest. Qu Yuan's "Lisao" has a cloud: "Make the clothes of lotus, and pick the clothes of hibiscus. I don't know if it is already embarrassing, and I feel that I believe it. "
Here, hibiscus and Ficus pumila symbolize the beauty and elegance of personality. Climbing up the tower and looking around, I deliberately picked out hibiscus and Ficus pumila from those I saw. Obviously, their situation in the storm made the poet tremble. The wind, the rain, the anger and the inclination show that objective things project the poet's feelings.
Lotus water, why because of the wind, and the wind is still chaotic; Ficus pumila wall, rain is difficult to invade, dense rain oblique invasion. How can this not remind the poet that his worries are pervasive! Here, the contrast between the emotion in the scene, the meaning in the environment and the fu is like the salt in the water, without trace.
2. There is no dry place in the bedside table room, and the rain feet are not cut off. -Tang Du Fu's "The Hut Was Blown by Autumn Wind"
Appreciate:
This poem depicts the scene where the house leaks in the autumn night and it rains all night, and truly records a fragment of the life of the thatched cottage. Finally, I was born in a strange place, pushed myself and others with my own personal experience, further put aside my hardships and dreamed up a vast mansion that sheltered the poor in the world.
This unrealistic fantasy is based on the poet's idea of taking the country as the country and drowning in hunger; The broad-minded performance makes the work exude a positive romantic atmosphere. The language of the whole poem is extremely concise, the image is prominent, the waves are superimposed, and there is no treatment, so it can be gripping.
After a night in Shan Yu, hundreds of silky waterfalls will appear on every mountain top. -Tang Wang Weizhi Zizhou Ambassador Li
Appreciate:
The language of this sentence is fresh, which fully shows the majestic beauty of mountain springs. There are not only visual descriptions of spring after rain, but also auditory descriptions of gurgling water, which shows that the poet's ease and leisure bring readers fresh and natural feelings. The first couplet was written from the big picture, with extraordinary momentum; Couplets are written from the details, which is particularly good to undertake. It is worthy of everyone's handwriting.
The poet showed a wonderful spectacle: after a night of rain and water immersion, hundreds of flying springs appeared in the mountain, which seemed to hang from the treetops from a distance, fully showing the preciseness of the mountain and the majestic beauty of the springs.
"In the mountains" has the word "mountain" and "tree" has the word "tree", and the two sentences are poured repeatedly, which is naturally ingenious. These two couplets are naturally wonderful, with excellent pictures, artistic conception, momentum, structure and language.