First, import
The green word "Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan" has always been praised by people. It is said that Wang Anshi used "Zhi" at first, then "Zhi", then "Zhi", then "Guo" and finally "Zhi Qing". A sentence has gone through many trials and tribulations before it is finally determined. How can I appreciate it?
Second, the college entrance examination examples
Refined words appear repeatedly in college entrance examination questions, such as the Guangdong paper in 2006 and the Guangdong paper in 2007.
1, Guangdong college entrance examination in 2006:
Two Poems of Yue Xiufeng's Watching the Dusk with Xanthium Philosophers (I) Tan Jingzhao
Mountains and rivers, far sail pieces belong to Lu (1).
The old crane flew south and took the bell to the sea building.
Note: ① Small boat. ② Offshore architecture, namely Haixia Temple.
(1) What images in the poem reflect the "belated hope" in the title? Please answer from "late" and "hope" respectively. (3 points)
(2) Briefly analyze the beauty of the word "belt" in the poem. (3 points)
2. Guangdong Volume of the 2007 College Entrance Examination.
Xi Lin ting Jing Xi
There is thought in clear autumn, and the pavilion is still dusk. At the beginning of the month, the trees are tall and white, and the breeze is half awake.
Walking alone in the fallen leaves, sitting around and counting fireflies. Where does the fishing song begin? A solitary lamp is separated by a distant pavilion.
(1) What time-varying images did the poet use to express his feelings? (2 points)
(2) Please comment on the artistic effect of the word "wear" and "number" in the third joint according to the whole poem. (4 points)
Third, the form of the test questions
1. What's good about a sentence? Explain why.
Variant questions: A, the beauty of a word, B, the artistic effect of a word, C, whether a word is used well, D, a word is the key, E is the eye, and F is the most vivid word.
2. Can it be changed to a certain word?
Fourth, related methods
1, subject
A verb, b adjective, c numeral, d function word
2. How to analyze it in detail?
A, flexible use of parts of speech B, dynamic and static C, synaesthesia D, rhetoric E, tangible and intangible F, virtual and real, etc.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) answer mode
1. Explain the meaning of this word in the sentence.
2. What skills are used (not every sentence must have some skills)
3. Expand the association and put this word in the original sentence to describe the scene.
4. Point out what performance effect has been achieved (what artistic conception has been set off or what emotion has been expressed).
practise
1, crossing Ji Xiang Temple (question type looking for poetic eyes)
Wang Wei
Not knowing the way to the Temple of Heaped Fragrance Road, walking in the mountains and clouds.
Through the ancient forest without human footprints, but now I hear bells on high.
The stream sings on the winding rocks, and the sun is tempered by pines.
At dusk, by a dry pond, thoughts can conquer the dragon of passion.
The ancient people often used the word "poetic eye" when commenting on poetry. The so-called "poetic eye" often refers to the most refined and vivid word in a poem. Which word in the last two sentences of this poem do you think is poetic eye? Why? Please analyze the whole poem briefly.
2. Nanpu Bie (secondary verb)
Bai Juyi
Nanpu is sad, and the west wind is blowing in autumn.
At first glance, my heart is broken and I dare not look back.
In the past, people thought that the word "Kan" seemed ordinary, but in fact it was very vivid and could really reveal the image of the lyric hero. Do you agree with this statement? Why?
3. Chuzhou on Xixi (interrogative four-reward function words)
wei yingwu
Alone, grass grows by the stream, and orioles sing on the trees.
The spring tide brought the rain late and urgent, and no one crossed the boat in the wild.
Some people commented on this poem, saying that "Zi" and "Heng" were used wonderfully and were full of fun. Try to analyze the beauty of this word.
4. Nanjing hotel broke up (three adjectives)
Lipper
A gust of wind blew catkins, which made the shop more fragrant. A girl from Wu poured wine and advised me to drink it.
Comrades in my city came to see me off. When each of them drank his glass, I said to him when leaving.
Oh, ask this river flowing eastward, whether it can go further than the love of friends! .
Some people say that the word "Xiang" is excellent. Can you tell me where home is?
5. It's raining on the stream (second verb)
cui daorong
Sitting and watching the black clouds and heavy rain gush in front of the mountain.
Suddenly, there were dark clouds overhead, and the storm was coming, but it was the night before the mountain.
On the beauty of the word "topic" in poetry.
Reference answers to college entrance examination examples
Example: 1, (1) Night: Looking at the bell: Jiang, Qingshan, and CSI.
(2) "Dai" uses anthropomorphic techniques to give "CSI" action, not that the bell is broadcast in the distance, but that CSI brings the bell to the sea floor to make the picture dynamic.
Example 2, (1) White deciduous fireflies stand alone in the dusk and early month of autumn.
(2) The poet strolled in the Xiting at dusk in the clear autumn. On the high tree in the middle of the month, the wine was half awake, and his side was deserted. The word "wear" vividly conveys the poet's loneliness and wandering mood. The poet sat in the forest and counted fireflies bored. The word "number" vividly described the poet's depressed and bored mood.
Reference answers to exercise questions:
1 and "poetic eye" are "swallowing" and "cold" respectively. The flowing spring in the mountain is blocked by rocks, which sounds like a whimper. The color of the sun shining on the pine trees seems to be cold because of the dark forest. The words "swallow" and "cold" vividly show the tranquility and loneliness of the mountain pass.
2. agree. "Look" means looking back in the poem (the first step). I left people behind and turned around frequently. Every time I look back, I feel deeply grieved. This word makes us seem to see the image of the lyric hero who is in tears and wants to see it but dares not (step 2). Just a word "look" vividly shows the sadness of parting (step 3).
3. The word "self" is free, and the word "horizontal" is the display state of the ship. Use the words "self" and "level" (the first step) to make the image or picture very dynamic and reveal a carefree interest (the third step).
Note: lack of the second step combined with poetry analysis.
4. The word "Xiang" contains not only the fresh fragrance, but also other flowers floating outside the store, the splendid bouquets in the store and the delicate fragrance of Wu Ji. All these things blend into intoxicating fragrance. How can this not make Li Bai miss it?
The word "title" personifies the dark clouds and vividly reflects the scene of rain coming from the clouds.