Qiu Si's translation and appreciation of the whole poem.

Appreciation of Qiu Si's translation of the original text and the whole poem 1 Chuanyuan is clearly reflected, and the moonlight is misty, leaving a boat like a leaf. Shoping, Pugen, Shui Han, Liuyan. Don't sing autumn in a lonely corner, roll on the breeze. The red sun is three poles, and the drunken head is still timid.

My thoughts are tangled, and it seems gradually. Who cares about dancing shirt fans? I used to be very affectionate, but I had a lot of money. Sadness gave up the ghost, and tears doubled at night.

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Clear water flows through the vast Yuan Ye, reflecting the sky and clouds, misty, with hazy moonlight, and distant boats float on the water like leaves. The long river bank is a flat sandbar, and the geese staying in the reeds feed and swallow in the cold autumn water. Whispering to the breeze, it is the lonely corner on the river floor singing autumn. Woke up after drinking, weak and dizzy, and the sun has risen high.

Parting thoughts are intertwined. On closer inspection, the hair on the temples is unbearable. Silk fans for dancing shirts, the goods are still the same, and now some people like to look at them closely? Counting the time of love, only the book box is full of letters and poems about her. Cut the burnt wick with a sad face. Tears and candlelight set each other off last night.

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Hua: This piece of music was composed by Zhou Bangyan. Chen Ben annotated "Huangzhong" Palace with "Qiu Si" as the same as "Hundred Poems".

MengMeng: It's vague.

Swish: swallowed by waterfowl or fish. Don't sing autumn with lonely horns,

Rolling on the small peak: this sentence is translated into the sentence of "rolling on the corner of the river tower, making a sound, and the sun is cold" in Du Mu's poem "Riding on the Temple Tower".

Intertwine: Intertwine.

Bones can be used as tweezers: hair is thin and white, and it is uncomfortable to clamp it with tweezers.

Tweezers: Tweezers, an instrument for plucking hair. This is the verb "pull".

Check: that is, check.

The book box is full of old letters and poems.

Feng Jian: A good name for writing paper refers to the paper with golden phoenix painted on it. A small box, such as a book, in a row.

Snuff: The shape of a flower formed by the embers of a wick.

Fold in half with tears: it means that when you look at snuff with tears, the flowers are folded in half.

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Qiu Si, the songwriter of this word, has a profound meaning from saying goodbye to telling the pain of parting. Acacia's eagerness and frosty sideburns show the singer's persistent love. Looking at the source of Sichuan, the autumn moon is misty, and the road is human.

The first film of Ci captured the word "autumn" and expressed the sadness of autumn everywhere. Distant love and sad feelings are displayed on paper one by one. "Kawahara is clear, the moonlight is misty, and the boat is like a leaf." What a cool autumn scenery! The vast Yuan Ye, hidden in the clear river; The clouds of the autumn moon are intoxicated and emit cold light. Dear people have boarded the ship and set sail. So he left, and the farther he went, the more the boat became like a small leaf floating away. On the surface, it is about scenery, but in fact it is about mood and inseparable feelings.

"The shore is very flat, and the water in Pugen is very cold, which makes the geese swish." The long river bank is a flat sandbar, and the calamus is old, and the river is soaking people, as if it still has the sound of geese sipping. Write another sad scene to strengthen the feeling of cool autumn. "Don't sing autumn in a lonely corner and roll over Xiaofeng." One-horned is an ancient musical instrument, made of bamboo, wood, leather or copper, and painted with color, with a piercing and high-pitched pronunciation. "New Ode to Yutai" Liang Jianwen's "Folding Willow with the King of Eastern Hunan": "The city is high and short, and the forest is empty and sad." What I want to say here is that I heard the lonely corner painting playing a sad tone and singing this sad autumn color. With the autumn wind in the morning, it makes a whining sound. The more you write about cool autumn and sad autumn, the deeper your feelings are. "The red sun is three poles, and it is awkward to be drunk." Last night, I drank to drown my sorrows, but now I'm too drunk to wake up. The sun has risen very high, my brain is still groggy, and even I am a little shy when I look up. I'm so worried that I can't even get out of bed.

The next film caught a word "Xiang" and showed acacia everywhere. Recalling old feelings, lovesickness with lonely tears, lovesickness with white sorrow. Qiu Si is bitter and haggard.

"I miss you, I look forward to it, and my temples are like tweezers." After parting, I miss you day after day, and my temples are white, so I can pull out the silver silk. It's really sadness that makes people old. "Dancing shirt Fan Song, who cares?" The clothes used to be worn for dancing and the silk fan used for singing are still the same. Now, where do people like to watch carefully? It means, a poor singer, only you have ever really loved me, sympathized with me and pitied me. Now that you've gone away, I'm even more lonely. "I used to love you, and the wind is full." Thinking of you, I opened the book box, and there was a box of love letters you wrote on beautiful stationery! It recorded our old feelings and soothed my lonely heart. "I'm worried that cutting snuff will double my tears at night." However, I can't get rid of my worries. I sat alone in front of the candlestick, sleepy. More think more lonely, more think more sad. I can't stop crying. Sad tears and candle tears, the two are superimposed together. People often refer to the melting of candles as tears. Lonely people look at candles with tears, which makes them sadder. The reflection of tears and candles deepens the description of acacia and bitterness, which is indeed a wonderful pen.

The whole word goes in one go, from late to early, from early to late, and is closely related internally; I miss you day and night, and I am worried about it. Between the lines, the scenery changes with the mood, the mood moves with the scene, and the wife is sad and moving. Writing like Youlong is meaningful. Kawahara, Smoke Moon, Going to the Ship and Lonely Horn; "Binsi", "Feng Jian", "Snuff" and "Folding Tears" are all related to Qiu Si, which is a unique structure. Poets have a taste other than taste, which can be said to be a touching chapter of writing different feelings.

Creation background

According to Su Huang's Selected Poems of Starting a prairie fire in Qing Dynasty, Zhou Bangyan was unwilling to cooperate with the traitors in Cai Jing in his later years and was expelled from the court. Huizhou Pavilion should be made into Zhishunchang House and Chuzhou, and the word is written Shunchang House and Chuzhou.

Qiu Si's original translation and appreciation of the whole poem 2 Qiu Si

The annual autumn wind blows to Luoyang city, and my wandering son doesn't know how his relatives in his hometown are; Writing a letter to peace has too much to say and I don't know where to start.

When the letter is written, I am worried that I have not finished what I want to say; When the messenger started, he opened the envelope and gave it to him.

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The autumn wind blows gently in Luoyang, and my thoughts are surging. I want to write a letter to greet peace.

I was worried that I didn't write anything in time, so I opened the envelope again before the messenger was about to leave.

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Significant: there are many ideas and ideas.

Fear again: I'm afraid again.

Pedestrian: refers to the person who transmits information.

Here we go: we're going to start.

Kaifeng: Open a sealed letter.

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Autumn wind is blowing again in Luoyang city, and the cool wind blows up thousands of thoughts buried in my heart, so I want to write a letter to express my homesickness for my family.

I was worried that there was something I didn't write in a hurry. Before the messenger left, I opened the envelope again.

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In the prosperous Tang dynasty, quatrains were full of feelings and scenes, with less narrative elements; In the middle Tang Dynasty, narrative elements gradually increased, and daily life events often became the common theme of quatrains, and the style changed from vigorous romance to realism in the prosperous Tang Dynasty. Zhang Ji's "Qiu Si" is full of emotions. With the help of a pregnant episode in daily life-the details of thoughts and actions when sending a letter home, it truly and delicately expresses the deep nostalgia of people who are away from home for their loved ones in their hometown.

The first sentence is that the poet lives in Luoyang, and it is autumn now. The poet doesn't have a lot of thick ink to render the bleak autumn wind and the swaying vegetation. Of course, readers will not have the sadness of "autumn wind and autumn rain" in reading.

The second sentence is followed by "look at the autumn wind" and the word "think" is written on the front. Hans Zhang in the Jin Dynasty "thought of Wuzhong leek, soup, and lived because of the autumn wind, saying,' Life is expensive but you don't want it. Why do you stay thousands of miles and become famous?' Then I rode home (Biography of Hans Zhang in the Book of Jin). Zhang Jizu was born in Wujun and now lives in Luoyang. The situation is similar to that of Hans Zhang. When he was homesick, he thought about "Looking at the Autumn Wind", which may be associated with the story of Hans Zhang. However, due to various unspecified reasons, Hans Zhang could not "drive home" and had to write home to express his homesickness. This makes the homesickness already deep and strong, and adds the disappointment of wanting to return, and the thoughts become more complicated. The word "desire" is quite interesting. It expresses the poet's thoughts and modality when laying paper and stretching his pen: I have mixed feelings in my heart, and I feel that I have something to pour out, but I don't know where to start or how to express it at the moment. The original abstract "meaningful" is vivid and easy to imagine because of this "book for writers".

It is the poet's psychological activity and action when he writes a letter, "Don't worry about it, pedestrians will be surprised." The poet didn't write about how he forgot to eat and sleep in a big way, burning the midnight oil to write home letters. It was through such a common action that he explained that he was writing a letter home. In the past, the traffic was very underdeveloped, and it was a long way to send a letter home. Of course, it takes a long time to write home. I wrote the letter, but I found something left unsaid. Of course, I have to open the letter to add something. It is very close to life for poets to write poems in this way, but poetry should not only be close to life, but also be close to oneself and heart, so as to give people a shock. That's what this poem does. Mainly reflected in the last two sentences. Although the poet was worried that the letters from home were "inexhaustible", he sealed the envelope and didn't feel that he had written badly until the messenger left. It's not that the poet didn't finish writing this letter. Now he has sealed the envelope, which is a complete letter. In fact, his homesickness is at work, and he always feels that he has something to say, and that his letters from home are nothing more than that. In fact, even if you open the envelope, you don't have to add anything. This is a reflection of subtle changes in the mind, and the poet clearly expressed it through the action of "reopening Kaifeng". The reason for this vibration and change is homesickness. Structurally speaking, this is not a simple plane level, but a kind of movement, which embodies the subtle feelings of the soul. Compared with the feelings expressed in poems such as "heartbroken people are at the end of the world" and "I have come a long way". Sadness comes this autumn ",which is a subtle and subtle feeling in my heart. The poet expressed it in the most plain language, without too much rendering and modification, and it was also very touching.

The whole poem is coherent, clear, simple and truly expresses the wandering mentality. In feudal society, people who have lived in different places for a long time often have similar experiences. This very ordinary little thing, very ordinary subject matter, once refined by the poet, has a representative significance. Later generations often read it and often sigh with empathy. The so-called empathy, empathy.

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This is a homesick poem. Express homesickness by describing the feelings before and after writing a letter. The first sentence explains the reason of "The Writer's Book" ("Looking at Autumn Wind"), and the last three sentences describe the psychological activities before and after writing. Before writing a book, it is "full of meaning" and after writing a book, it is "endless fear". The detail of "opening the envelope" vividly shows the mentality of "endless fear of repetition" and integrates meaning and form. What is written is common to everyone, but not everyone can say it. As a guest in a foreign country, I miss my hometown when I see the autumn wind. Please send me a message. Afraid of missing something when I left, I quickly opened it and read it several times. Things are flat, and once they enter poetry, especially when a master like Zhang Ji enters poetry, it will become a wonderful place. This is not common in poetry. Of course, there are also many excellent works with letters from home as the theme in Tang poetry. For example, Cen Can's "On welcoming messengers to Beijing": "When you meet, you don't need paper and pencil, and you can report peace with your message." Writer Ma Jun, in my busy schedule, as an envoy of Lu Yu, sent comfort to Lu Yu's family. Du Fu's hope for spring: "After three months of war, a letter from home is worth a ton of gold." The writer was trapped in Chang 'an under the occupation of An Shi Rebellion. I don't know if his home in the war was Anji, and I am eager to come to comfort me. They all expressed their homesickness with unique skills. The uniqueness of this poem lies in its depth, shallowness and softness in twists and turns. At first glance, it is just a few words, but it is full of profound meaning.

Wang Anshi's poem entitled "Zhang" said: "It seems to be the most extraordinary, but in fact it is a piece of cake." It can quite tell the artistic style and creative bitterness of this poem. Poetry follows the autumn wind, which is a common technique since the Book of Songs. With the autumn wind, the wild geese fly north and south. They travel in other places, and it is easy to contact and think. For example, Liu Yuxi's "Autumn Wind" once said: "Autumn wind comes everywhere, and rustling sends geese. When I came to the court tree, the lone guest heard it first. " Let's look at the history of the poet again. It turns out that he is from Wuzhong (now Suzhou, Jiangsu), which reminds people of the story of Zhang. "Book of Jin, History of Han, Biography of Zhang" says: "Seeing the autumn wind, I miss Wuzhong leek, soup and perch, saying,' If you don't aspire to your life, how can you become famous after being detained for thousands of miles!'" "Then I drove home." And Hans Zhang Daitong, with all the officials to the north. Hans Zhang predicted that Sima Tong, the king of Qi, would make trouble, so he decided to abdicate. Zhang Ji may not have any political reasons, but when he saw the autumn wind, his thoughts about his hometown were very similar. Although he couldn't "drive home" immediately like Hans Zhang, he poured his homesickness on paper. Although this creative impulse of feeling things and feeling things uses the traditional "ascending" method, it contains such rich connotations, which cannot but become a feature of this poem.

"If you want to be a writer, you are full of meaning", in which the word "desire" is closely related to "watching the autumn wind". It turns out that the poet's mood is calm, like a clear water. The autumn wind blew his emotional ripples. The writing is fluent, but at the end of the sentence, the word "heavy meaning" suddenly came back, just like calligraphy. Therefore, the poet's feelings here are not downstream, but deeper. This technology, seemingly ordinary, is actually extremely high. We played poetry carefully: the poet was homesick for the autumn wind and wanted to write a book, and I didn't know where to start with a thousand words. "Meaning is important", but using virtual reality. Liu Yuxi said in "Song of the Knife Ring": "Today, facing each other, the pulse is full of gravity." "Ten thousand centers of gravity" and "ten thousand meanings" are extremely complicated thoughts and feelings. Every reader with life experience can understand how much care there is. How to write this book because it is full of meaning? Did you write it? The author didn't make it clear for the reader to imagine, which is endless and thought-provoking.

Although "the meaning is too heavy", I can't write it, but in a sense, the letter from home is still written. The problem is that I'm in a hurry to write, and I'm still unfinished. The word "urgent" is vivid and picturesque, which not only describes one's own side, but also reflects the sender's side. As can be seen from the following, the messenger met him immediately during the trip: he may be about to get on the horse and board the ship. Even if it's not as urgent as Cen Can's "meeting at once" in Beijing, he's still anxious for a long time. As the messenger is in such a hurry, the writer has to write quickly. It's difficult to express the ideas in a hurry. In this logical description, the poet's eagerness and haste are as vivid as they are now. The word "inexhaustible" also closely echoes the above-mentioned "heavy meaning", because it is "inexhaustible" and "heavy meaning" is also related to the homesickness caused by "seeing the autumn wind". Huang Shucan's Notes on Tang Poetry says: "The meaning of the first sentence has been generally seen, and the official letter is inexhaustible." When pedestrians come, Kaifeng opens, which is even more wonderful. Think about how to connect the second half of this song, and you will know that the first sentence is difficult to write. "Explain that the beginning of the second half of the poem and the beginning of the whole poem are closely linked. The conclusion of the sentence is even more ingenious and can be called a warning strategy. Yu Biyun nearby commented: "I wrote a book, but I can't talk for a long time. I am about to open, and I am homesick. " He added: "This kind of poetry is all about sex." The so-called "ultimate language" is to write the most sincere feelings of human beings and reach the extreme. Structurally, the last sentence says "I can't talk about it in a hurry" and the next sentence says "I'm going to open it soon", which makes the atmosphere of "hurry" full.

Creation background

Zhang is a man who lived in Luoyang when he wrote this poem. It was autumn, and the autumn wind evoked the poet's loneliness in a foreign land, which made him miss his hometown and relatives, so he wrote this poem.

Qiu Si's translation of the original text and appreciation of the whole poem III. Apes cry at night, and the new autumn rain falls into the sky.

Who loves the bright moon and sits in a boat?

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Zhang Bi: A mountain with green as its barrier.

Yoshida: Clear sky Wan Li.

Who: who; Which one?

Dongting: the name of the lake. Dongting Lake.

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Qiu Si: Lonely and desolate thoughts in autumn. "Ancient Songs" in the Tang Dynasty: "Fallen leaves flow to Yutai, and the night is cold and autumn, thinking about the bridal chamber." Su Songzhe's Xu Zhengquan Xie Shiminzi Temple and Huiji Eryun: "Xixi Qiu Si is full of sunshine, and the shogunate has been worried about learning for a long time." Gao Mingqi's poem "Xie Ren gave his brother a picture of mountains and rivers": "The sky is frozen with clouds, and the setting sun of the flying spring is so small." Zhou Yong's "Autumn Huai Liu Xiang You" No.8: "The lake and sea are full of old, full of Qiu Si."

Zhang Bi: A mountain with green as its barrier. Tang Li Bai's poem "Remembering the Old Tour in Xiangyang and Giving Ma Shaofu Giant" said: "Open the window full, brush the mirror and splash the river." Song Fan Chengda's poem "To Double Songs" says: "Sapphire is like a broken stone, and the painting is opposite to two heroes." Yuan Youxian's poem "Send Xu Youyinan": "Look at the canopy right away, the home is in the east."

Yoshida: Clear sky Wan Li. Tang Song Wen Zhi's poem "Playing the County Zhai Liu Hai" says: "Zeguo Youth, the curtain rises." Tang Du Fu's poem "Crying for Doctor Wei's Gold": "The city is deep and the rivers and lakes are ethereal." Guan's "Man" said: "The sky is vast, the clouds are light and the Chu River is clear."

Who: who; Which one? Lv Chunqiu Gui Xin: "The Lord of mortals must believe. Believe and believe, who doesn't kiss? " Don Wang Jian's poem "Silkworm": "I heard that the village urged me to knit. Who shall I marry?" "The Surprise of the Second Moment" Volume 12: "When Hui Weng finished this, he said to himself,' Who will do this except helping the weak? Sichuan Opera Wutai Brothers: Yang Yande: Follow the teacher's orders. (Calling from the horse) Master! Whose horse barks in the silent Buddhist temple in Wutai Mountain? "

Dongting: the name of the lake. Dongting Lake. Han Feizi first saw Qin: "Qin fought with Jing people, defeated Jing, attacked Ying, and took Dongting, Wuzhu and Jiangnan." "Who is the biggest in Dongting Kyushu?" Tang Hanyu wrote in the poem "Four Knowledge of Yueyang Tower" Julia Yan Ting's Poem of the Duke of Zhou Yu-ehua in Oubei: "Dongting spring water is rising, and flying back to the old forest looks good." See Dongting Lake.

Qiu Si's original translation and appreciation of the whole poem IV. Self-pity for Chu Ke is sad for autumn, but it is difficult to write Si Tong. My eyes are broken and my books are red. This is the plain, and the mountains are shining.

Whose water quarrels with whose hatred, yellow leaves and west wind. Draw the east side of the bridge. Twelve jade building is empty.

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This word was probably written in the autumn of the third year of Zhezong (1 100), and the author went north from Suzhou via Yangzhou.

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Luo, also known as picking mulberry seeds, is named after the folk song mulberry in Han Yuefu. He Zhu's title consists of 15 words. From the third part, I wrote "Southeast is a prosperous place since ancient times, singing Yangzhou, twelve brothels, the most first-class Qin Niang", knowing that this word was written by Yangzhou.

The main idea of this word is to express strong sadness about autumn, and the resulting deep sadness about the impermanence of personnel gathering and leaving.

The first sentence, "Self-pity for Chu Ke's sadness for autumn", points out the feeling of sadness for autumn and sets the tone for the whole poem. Press Chuke and point to Song Yu. Song Yu, a Chu, once said, "Alas! Autumn is also a sigh of anger. Self-pity, self-pity "Two words" show the author's anguish of living alone away from home. It is precisely because he is far away from his old country and lives alone in other places, which coincides with the cold and sad autumn, and the poet's depressed mood adds a bit of melancholy. " It's hard to write a silk tree, "followed by the last sentence, which means that the sadness brought by this autumn is hard to express by any wonderful music." The four words are concise and well rendered, which convey the author's "sadness" and "thinking" caused by autumn very tactfully.

"The eyes are broken and the book is clear, and the scenery is falling." These two sentences connect the preceding with the following: I am sad because of autumn. I live alone and naturally miss my hometown. But as far as I can see, I can't see the bright shadows of any books, only the plain mountains and rivers I see every day, hidden in the oblique light of the sunset. The word insipid, used properly, really shows the author's mood at the moment. Imagine the author's idea of viewing the scenery, shrouded in a homesickness in autumn. Since I have no intention of enjoying the scenery, I naturally feel that what I see is unremarkable. At dusk, the red sun sets in the west, and the autumn colors are bleak. What the poet first feels is an inexplicable sadness. Fortunately, although the poet has no intention to appreciate the scenery, the scenery will not change because of the poet's subjective feelings. The advantage of this sentence is that the author presents a very objective and vivid picture of mountains and rivers in the sunset, giving people a feeling of harmonious colors and appropriate shades.

"Whose water is complaining, yellow leaves and west wind." According to the water, the name of the tune. Du Mu's Yangzhou poem: "Who sings Shuidiao, the moon is full in Yangzhou". Mink is a commercial tone with a sad voice. According to legend, when Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty entered Shu, he felt deeply that "the mountains and rivers were full of tears". This word was written in Yangzhou, and naturally it was a poem written by Du Mu. But the beauty lies in its seamless application and integration. With the help of autumn scenery's description of the yellow leaves and the west wind, the auditory feeling of the original poem is integrated with the visual feeling in front of him, rendering a sad mood, which is in line with the sad autumn atmosphere at the beginning of the poem.

Painting the east of the bridge makes the Twelve Jade Buildings more empty. Qi painting, colorful painting, here refers to brightly decorated buildings. Yulou, the building where immortals live, is the laudatory name of brothels here. Twelve, there are many forms. The author associates Du Mu's reputation of being poor and rich in Yangzhou in the Tang Dynasty with Du Mu's poems. Inspired by the yellow leaves and the west wind, I feel infinite sadness, which is naturally associated with the gathering and dispersion of the world and the joy of men and women. I deeply feel that any wonderful and prosperous scene is fleeting. The wonderful moment of reunion in the past now seems like an illusory fairy tale world. Therefore, the old party, no matter how wonderful it felt at that time, was really unbearable compared with today's dispersion. The word "empty is more empty" entrusts the poet's impermanent feelings of gathering and dispersing in the infinite world, and his sadness of being pregnant with others has been fully vented.

The first half of this word focuses on expressing sadness about autumn, and the second half focuses on expressing feelings about the gathering and scattering of human beings. The expression of his thoughts and feelings, either directly or through scenery, is simple and natural, elegant and beautiful. Its deep and heavy feelings are expressed with the help of smooth and round artistic conception, which can quite reflect the lingering and ingenious organization of the congratulatory message.