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Middle-aged speech
Ruan xianxi
Middle age is like autumn.
Feel the setting sun.
Quiet people begin to regard every day as a prosperous time.
It's beautiful-
There is dusk and noon every day.
Have a clean and clear morning.
Like spring, I keep on
Write poems for new plants and bless people passing by.
In the morning light, a bowl of millet porridge is full.
The warmth of the sun
Four blessings of heaven and earth
Cherish time and freedom, study.
Be a pure and kind person
I miss my loved ones and like flowers and plants.
Be tolerant of the people you meet.
If you ask why you are kind.
I admit, every time I see so much,
Flowers fall like flowers, English is everywhere.
I have little confidence in the fragility of life.
You should live every day as if it were the end of your life.
Brief introduction of poet
Ruan Xianxi, a member of Fujian Writers Association and Chinese Poetry Society, likes to read and write poems. His poems are scattered in Poetry Magazine, Selected Poems, Caotang, China Poetry Magazine, Jiangnan Poetry Magazine and Fujian Literature. He was selected into various annual poetry anthologies and published a collection of poems, Standing on the Branch of Time.
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"Yang Zhixue"
comment and describe
The author points out the personal feelings of all middle-aged people with the brushwork of wanting to promote first and restraining second. Middle-aged people have just passed the midsummer and come to autumn, just like the sun in the autumn afternoon, and there is a sense of stagnation in their enthusiasm. The whole poem spreads out in a calm narrative, like a flowing stream telling passers-by that middle-aged people can live a wonderful life. To sum up, it is: a "quiet person" who cherishes, is grateful, kind and kind, or a person who tastes and cherishes life. The author deliberately lists the dusk, noon and morning of a day backwards, suggesting that he enjoys every detail and time of every day. Middle-aged people know how to be grateful because people's happiness comes from gratitude. Once they are grateful, everything becomes beautiful and lovely. Because of this, middle-aged people can live a quiet and youthful life, although they are late in life. The last sentence "You should live every day as if it were your last" is like throwing a stone into calm water, which is shocking and thought-provoking.
"Huang Chunlie
"comment.
There are many poems about middle age. This poem is simple in writing, plain in language, full of charm and obvious in substitution. The second section begins with a "quiet person". In fact, the whole poem was written by a "quiet person". This quiet person is also an open-minded and positive person, close to gratitude, cherish time and be kind. At the end of the poem, the author ends with a fallen flower, which reminds people of "burying flowers", but the fallen flower is only a season, and there will be dusk, noon and dawn every day. Therefore, despite entering middle age and experiencing some stories, the author did express a hope. Cherish the present, live in the present, and don't mourn the autumn. This is the attitude of poetry and the author's attitude towards middle age.
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