Su Shunqin's poem "Summer Meaning" can express a quiet and secluded feeling in the heat of midsummer.
"Farewell hospital is deep in summer, Xia Ming": the word summer indicates the festival, and the words "Farewell hospital", "deep" and "bright" go deeper and deeper, forming a quiet atmosphere from the beginning. The other yard is the small yard next to the main yard. Deep, it is said that this small courtyard is deep in the house and deep in the courtyard, with a winding path leading to a secluded place. In this extremely quiet environment, some people have a bamboo mat. Han Yu's poem "The Gift of Zheng Qun" once described the bamboo mat as "eight feet of wind blowing" and "a clear blow when in doubt". "Summer mat is clear", which means that although it is midsummer, bamboo mats are cold in the depths of the yard. Deep is overlapping, deep and clear, with similar vowels and clear sound quality. This gives people a cool and profound feeling not only from the image of words, but also from the image of music.
"Pomegranate flowers are full of curtains": Inheriting the word "curtain", the porch spreads the Mingxia seats. The poet lay on it and looked out, only seeing the pomegranate in full bloom, showing its bright charm through the curtain. Han Yu once said, "Liu Hua will shine brilliantly in May" ("Liu Hua"), but the second sentence changed its meaning, but added a heavy curtain. Looking at pomegranate through the curtain, although the bonus is like fire, it is not harsh.
Tao Yuanming has a saying: "Love the forest in front of the hall, and store shade in midsummer" (The Book of the Republic of China). The third sentence of this poem is translated from Tao's poem, which says that although it is noon in midsummer, the yard is still clear, gloomy and cool. This sentence contrasts with the previous one. As you can imagine from the "shade everywhere", trees have become forests, not trees, but shade, which makes the yard cool and quiet.
What does the poet do in this quiet environment? It turned out that he had been comforted by the clear scenery in the yard. Although it was noon under the scorching sun, he was fast asleep. When he was "dreaming", he could only hear the crisp rhyme of one or two songbirds coming from the depths of the garden from time to time. It is the sound of warblers rather than orioles, which can not only see the shade of trees, but also reflect the deep tranquility of this small courtyard with the sound of whispering in silence. Tonggong Mountain is more secluded. According to Wang Ji's poem "If you enter Ye Xi" in the Southern Dynasties, Wang Wei's "Wu Xinyi" says: "The birds are surprised when the moon rises, and the spring water rings when the moon rises." The artistic conception of the last sentence is similar to that of two poems.
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There is not a sentence in this poem that doesn't touch the summer scenery. Every sentence is full of refreshing meaning, which seems a little embarrassing to read.
There are three points to pay attention to in the expression of poetry:
Light and ethereal with a pen: write about the courtyard and leave ink in the courtyard; Write pomegranate flowers and then apply curtains; Write green trees, as seen from the clear shade; When writing oriole, you can hear it from crows, and every sentence starts from the air, thus forming a bright and ethereal artistic conception corresponding to daytime and sleep.
The structure is natural and ingenious: the poem is about sleeping during the day, and the first three sentences are actually scenes before sleeping, but it was not until the last sentence that the word "dream sleep" was highlighted and the scene after sleeping was continued. It doesn't seem to continue. In fact, the first three sentences are all paving the way for a quiet and hazy atmosphere, and the sentence "It's noon" has laid the groundwork for sleeping first during the day. When the last sentence was pointed out, I felt that I fell asleep quietly and woke up suddenly. My style was lively and gratifying, and I avoided going straight to the disease.
Distinctive but not weak. The backyard of the Broken Mountain Temple, usually built in the Tang Dynasty, reads: "My road twists and turns through a sheltered valley, branches and flowers, leading to a Buddhist retreat." Its image is similar to one or two sentences in this poem, but it often describes the thought of being born and the feeling of loneliness, and this poem gives people a free and easy feeling. Ouyang Xiu called Shun Qin "bold and unrestrained" (the beautiful article "Sacrifice"), so although he wrote, he could be in a secluded place, beautiful but not light, escaping without hair, which distinguished him from Wang and Meng. Agree with 856| Comments (2)