Draw lessons from homesickness to write a composition

1.600 words (homesick style) imitating homesickness composition, what? Nostalgia, patriotism or more?

When I was young, I obeyed everything and didn't know what sorrow was. Same, flowers, carefree. Happiness is short-lived, with no regrets and no stay.

Gradually, I began to grow up. Left home and went to a distant place. I haven't been home for a long time. Mother sent a core. The contents of the letter made my eyes moist. I closed the letter and saw a stamp on the envelope. Small square, but holding me far away from home and my mother who looks forward to it day and night.

This is my first "worry" when I grow up-homesickness caused by stamps.

Grow up, more mature than before. But a little childish about love.

I came back from far away to visit my elderly mother. I should get married.

The bride is beautiful and virtuous. My mother and I are also very harmonious and happy. The wrinkles on mom's face are clearly visible. But a little happiness still exists. Beautiful bride, my return seems to smooth the wrinkles on my mother's face, which is no longer obvious and seems to be looming.

Soon, I went to that distant place again, leaving only my mother and bride. Mother's face lost a trace of happiness. I gave up, but I left anyway.

The result is more yearning for the bride, less communication with my mother, and gradually forgetting my mother, but the yearning for the bride remains the same. We started to go home at both ends in three days, and a boat ticket narrowed our distance. But my heart only has the position of the bride, and my mother only occupies a small corner.

Many years have passed and I have really grown up. Go back to my hometown again and visit my long-lost bride. Suddenly found that there seems to be one person missing at home. It turns out that mom is not at home, and she has gone far away. -heaven. Further than me. I am separated from her by a thick layer of soil, my mother is lying inside and I am standing outside. My thoughts with my mother suddenly returned to the starting point, endless and endless, and she left with her.

-the third point is the "homesickness" across the short grave.

My mother's departure didn't stop me from growing up. I grew up and even began to get old.

There are a few wrinkles on my face, but I still haven't lost a trace of sadness after vicissitudes. I still miss my mother. The child has grown up.

Gradually, I began to yearn for the mainland, feeling that my mother was there watching me and expecting me to come back to her. I often tell my children that there is something new in the mainland that will make you feel warm. Right here, on the other side of the channel. Just cross the shallow channel of this bay and you can reach it.

So, with this hope, I hope I can return to my mother's side, that warm embrace. On the other side of the mainland-the strait.

I still miss it and look forward to it.

Until I leave, my thoughts will continue until I become "sad".

2. Imitate homesickness, the happiness of a grass.

Backward cable

Happiness is the nourishment of the vast land.

I am ignorant.

Parents are very concerned.

Indian summer

Happiness was diluted by the violent rainstorm.

I am making progress.

The teacher is teaching.

After autumn

Happiness is the companionship of passionate fallen leaves.

I'm wandering

Friends are encouraging.

After winter

Happiness is the wake-up call of lonely ice and snow.

I'm struggling.

Great men are inspiring.

Spring breeze rises again.

Happiness is the baptism of colorful seasons.

I have grown up.

Life continues

3. What writing techniques are used in Homesickness? Writing skills used in homesickness;

Homesickness is a very meaningful poem. As far as the format of the poem is concerned, the rhetorical device of parallelism is obviously used, and parallelism is used to strengthen the potential and expressiveness of the language, so that the deep homesickness overflows.

The creative background of Homesickness;

Yu Guangzhong's life was in frequent escape and migration, and he was separated from his relatives many times. 197 1 year, Yu Guangzhong, who hasn't returned to the mainland for more than 20 years, was homesick, and wrote the poem "Homesickness" in his former residence in Xiamen Street, Taipei.

homesickness

Author Yu Guangzhong Dynasty Modern

When I was a child,

Homesickness is a small stamp,

I'm at this end,

Mom is over there.

When I grow up,

Homesickness is a narrow ticket,

I'm at this end,

The bride is over there.

Later,

Homesickness is a short grave,

I'm outside,

Mom's inside.

now

Homesickness is a shallow strait,

I'm at this end,

The mainland is over there

English translation/ translator/ interpreter

When I was young,

My homesickness is a stamp,

I am here,

My mother is there.

When I grow up,

My homesickness is a narrow ticket,

I am here,

My bride is there.

Later,

My homesickness is a small grave,

I'm outside,

My mother is in there.

now

My homesickness is a shallow strait,

I am here,

The mainland is there.

Extended data

Appreciation of homesickness;

In refining and absorbing the impression, this poem has simple and rich beauty. Homesickness is an emotion that everyone can understand, but can't be accurately described in words. If you can't find an accurate directional image to compare and express, you will either fall into general mediocrity or fall into abstract emptiness.

This poem refines four images: stamps, boat tickets, graves and straits. They are simple, but not simple, but clear, concentrated and strong. They are also rich, and the impression deepens step by step with the progress of time: when I was a child, I grew up, and later, now, time is progressing, and I unconsciously entered an imagination.

The musical beauty of homesickness is also reflected in the rhythm of reciprocating and singing and sighing. In addition, the four paragraphs use words such as small, narrow, short, shallow and overlapping in the same position, which makes the whole poem deep and obscure, such as resentment. The use of the quantifier "piece by piece, curved side by side" not only shows the poet's literary creation, but also strengthens the aesthetic feeling of the whole poem.

Homesickness, like a "nostalgic song" with a slight lament in music, is an expression of deep affection of overseas wanderers for their hometown and the most beautiful love song for their motherland.