2. We need to inherit and give full play to the fine tradition of hard work in the four modernizations.
3. At midnight, thunder suddenly rumbled, and then lightning flashed.
4. Rice is an important producing area in Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces.
5. in a short time, we cleaned several unclean places.
6. At present, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world come in droves.
7. Miss Wang is very kind to us, and always speaks sweet words.
8. Beneficial birds such as swallows, woodpeckers and frogs are good friends of human beings.
In September and March, more than 7 new films, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, will be shown in Beijing cinemas.
1. Our teacher has a good eloquence, and he talks a lot about truth.
11. The CPC Central Committee attaches great importance to and supports the development of scientific undertakings.
12. Every student should be a worker in moral education, intellectual education and physical education.
13. Today is my little cousin's fifth birthday.
14. He was criticized by everyone for his violation of his mistakes.
15. Lan Lan's spirit of helping others deserves everyone's touch
16. All the students listened to the teacher's lecture with great enthusiasm
17. The comrades of the British model group reported to all our students
18. The interest groups of two schools started activities yesterday
19. It was not until the second half of the 19th century that corals were discovered to be carnivores living in the sea <
21. When Eight-Nation Alliance invaded China, it burned and looted the Yuanmingyuan in the western suburbs of Beijing.
22. Wang Ping and Li Huajian have established a profound friendship
23. When working, teachers and Datong University do heavy work, while female students do light work
24. Recalling their own growth, every step can not be separated from the cultivation of "gardener"
25. After hard work, Xiaodong's sloppy problem-solving phenomenon has improved
26.
the students warmly welcome the teacher.
② Xiaoming cherishes time very much.
③ We should be firm in our correct opinions.
① Zhang Lin's suggestion is correct, and everyone agrees with him.
② He is tenacious and refuses to accept the opinions of his classmates with an open mind.
③ At the class meeting, the students practically exposed his strengths and weaknesses. Underline the inappropriate words in the following sentences with "_" and correct them in the brackets.
(1) We wish Li Lin a "three good" student. ()
(2) Xiaoling is very arbitrary and never hesitates. ()
(3) He greeted me warmly and shook my hand. ()
(4) Qiqi did something wrong and was in a heavy mood. ()
(5) The school playground has expanded a lot. ()
(6) I just take growing flowers as a kind of interest in life. ()
(7) Through hard work, I finally achieved good academic achievements. ()
(8) If you want to write a good composition, you must have the spirit of not being afraid of difficulties. ()
(9) The soldiers hid in the forward position. ()
(1) During the War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression period, there were many anti-Japanese heroes in China. ()
Modify the second sentence-Incomplete sentence
Generally, a complete sentence should include two parts: subject and predicate, and clearly state "who, what and how".
sometimes, the subject is missing.
① I can sing "Only a mother is good in the world".
② Under the teacher's education, I understand the meaning of learning.
③ After reading this article, I was greatly educated.
sometimes, the predicate is missing. (
① We should have lofty revolutionary ideals.
② The bus will be on the meeting road in front of my house.
③ We should make our country more prosperous.
sometimes, the object is missing.
① I gave it to Xiaoli.
② The person I respect most is.
exercise: read the following sentences and complete the incomplete ones.
1. Dad is in the light.
2. The room looks warm when it shines on the table through the glass.
3. If you look at the tiny feet of Parthenocissus tricuspidata, you will think of pictures.
4. We should pay attention to hygiene.
5. The sound of piano coming from the hut.
6. Young people should be educated to love the motherland.
7. The boat left the dock quickly, like an arrow leaving the string and heading for the middle of the lake.
8. Uncle PLA opened it.
9. Kong Fansen has helped many Tibetan orphans.
1. The beautiful Xuanwu Lake Park.
11. The beloved teacher shows meticulous care.
12. From this ordinary trivial matter, a profound truth is explained.
13. Our school has launched a "hand in hand" activity.
modify the third sentence-improper word order
Example:
① Li Yong was definitely rated as a "three good" student by his classmates.
(2) This is a night in Qing Dynasty.
① Beijing in May is a beautiful season.
to tell the truth, he doesn't sing well.
I have told everyone the news of victory.
④ We discussed and listened to the headmaster's report.
this year's wheat harvest is in sight, and the growth is gratifying.
⑥ These two old and new societies are really in sharp contrast!
exercise: find out the improper word order in the following sentences and correct them.
1. Chinese is particularly interested in me.
2. Cars running along the road.
3. China has the largest population in the world.
4. He held the old worker's tight hand.
5. There are abundant minerals buried underground in our country.
6. On the rostrum sat an old worker with gray hair.
7. There is not much time before the exam, so we should review quickly.
8. Through the review at this stage, the students' general grades have been improved.
9. We discussed and listened to the report of the old Red Army.
1. The teacher praised Li Xiaoming's spirit of helping others.
Revise the sick sentence 4-repeat wordiness
Example:
① The teacher repeatedly told us to study hard.
② There are fruit trees everywhere in the mountains.
③ All the teachers, students and principals of our school participated in the National Day Gala.
Exercise:
Correct the repetitive parts in the following sentences.
1. Grandma remembered many past events.
2. We listened to the teacher without blinking an eye.
3. The school is a big park with beautiful scenery.
4. The flowers in the park are very beautiful.
5. We should save water and don't waste it.
6. Xiaohong answered the teacher's questions like a stream.
7. It was sunny this afternoon, but I didn't expect it to rain heavily in the afternoon, which was really beyond my expectation.
8. The wheat is ripe, and the color in the field is golden.
9. I have a bright red scarf.
1. After reading the sketch "So Packaged", everyone laughed in unison.
Revise the wrong sentence 5-Inconsistency
Example:
① The whole class is here, except Wang Gang.
it rained heavily all night last night.
① I am about to graduate from primary school.
② I conclude that he is probably Lu Li's brother.
③ The students lined up neatly and crowded into the cinema.
exercise: find out the inconsistencies in the following sentences and correct them.
1. A thunderstorm lasted for a day and a night.
2. In the morning, the afterglow of the sun filled the campus.
3. I was writing my homework when Sun Lin came to play with me.
4. I am good at all subjects, but my music is not good.
5. Almost none of the class failed in this exam.
6. As soon as the bell rang, the campus gradually boiled up.
7. Look at the skillful movements, he must be a professional athlete.
8. I bravely rushed down the hillside, and I was a little scared.
9. The sky is full of dark clouds, and the sun makes people blind.
1. I fully agree with your method, but I disagree with one point.
modify the sick sentence 6-concept confusion
Example:
① There are various snakes and many birds on display in the crawling hall of the zoo.
② There are many trees in the park, such as pine, cypress and peach blossom.
③ I like apples, bananas, cucumbers and other fruits.
④ There are extracurricular books such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art and China Youth Daily in the book corner.
Exercise:
Correct the confusing concepts in the following sentences.
1. I love reading China Youth Daily and Childhood.
2. Today, my mother bought many vegetables: vegetables, radishes, fish ...
3. The Oriental Pearl Tower, the Great Wall in Wan Li and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are all famous historical sites in China.
4. Li Ming's father can speak three or four foreign languages, especially Chinese.
5. papermaking is one of the four great inventions in China.
6. His hometown is from Nanjing, Jiangsu.
7. The West Lake is a good place to visit in spring.
8. The Party Central Committee sent planes to deliver food, medicine, rice and clothes to the people in the disaster area.
9. There are all kinds of sports equipment on the school playground, such as horizontal bars, parallel bars, climbing poles, bunkers and basketball courts.
1. In the zoo, we saw many interesting animals such as monkeys, elephants, tigers, lions, Siberian tigers and polar bears.
modify sentence 7-improper collocation
First, improper collocation of subject and predicate. The homework that the teacher asked me to do was carried out on Saturday.
② Everyone pays attention to school hygiene, and the health and diseases of the whole school will be guaranteed.
③ The people's lives are constantly improving.
Second, the verb-object collocation is improper. With the help of the teacher, I quickly overcame my mistake.
② At the farewell party, the students performed songs and dances.
③ I listen to radio and TV every night.
④ The students gradually corrected their attitude and purpose.
Third, improper collocation of related words. Although Mr. Liu is over sixty, he is in good health.
② In order to improve people's literary appreciation ability, this poetry recitation was held.
Exercise: Find out the improper collocation of words in the following sentences and correct them.
1. Dad's password was brought home on time.
2. The path between the two mountains flows slowly.
3. Mom made a cup of tea, which was delicious!
4. After the teacher's education, I have improved my interest in learning.
5. He likes playing football and table tennis very much.
6. during the exam, I meticulously answered and handed in my papers.
7. after sweeping the floor today, we arranged the tables and chairs neatly.
8. We strolled on the waterway in the suburbs.
9. Because he made great progress, the teacher praised him.
1. You can correct your shortcomings only if you accept others' opinions with an open mind.
Comprehensive exercises
Modify the following ill sentences, pay attention to the use of modification symbols, and think about what kind of mistakes they belong to.
(1) The streets are lined with people.
(2) It's very kind of Miss Li. She always laughs when she sees us.
(3) The West Lake has beautiful scenery.
(4) Zhang Yan and Li Wen have an appointment to review their lessons together at their own home.
(5) The athletes completed the whole race with firm perseverance.
(6) Reading extracurricular books can increase our knowledge and writing level.
(7) Only by thinking independently can we improve our academic performance.
(8) Li Gang doesn't care about collective affairs.
(9) I like painting, especially portraits.
(1) Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and purpose.
(11) We not only exercise regularly, but also strengthen our physique.
(12) On her way to school, Xiaoli walked to school alone.
(13) My mother is very concerned.
(14) Old workers help the police to keep order on the road.
(15) In the autumn fields, you can see the ripe fruit and its fragrance everywhere. Last year, China was one of the countries that exported the most oil in the world.
2. We need to inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of hard work in the four modernizations.
3. In the middle of the night, lightning flashed suddenly, and then thunder rumbled.
4. Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces are important rice producing areas.
5. in a short time, we cleaned several dirty places.
6. At present, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world are coming in an endless stream.
7. Miss Wang is very kind to us, and always speaks softly.
8. Swallows, woodpeckers and other beneficial birds and frogs are good friends of human beings.
In September and March, more than 7 new films reflecting ancient and modern Chinese and foreign contents will be released in Beijing cinemas.
1. Our teacher has a good eloquence, and he speaks logically.
11. The CPC Central Committee attaches importance to and strongly supports the development of scientific undertakings.
12. Every student should be a worker with all-round development in moral, intellectual and physical education.
13. Today is my little cousin's fifth birthday.
14. He was criticized by everyone for his wrong way of violating discipline.
15. Lan Lan's spirit of helping others is worth learning.
16. The students all listened attentively to the teacher.
17. The comrades of the British model group gave a report to all our classmates.
18. Two interest groups in the school started their activities yesterday.
19. It was not until the second half of the 19th century that corals were discovered as carnivores living in the sea.
2. On the opening day of the exhibition, many people, such as workers, farmers, soldiers and students, attended.
21. When Eight-Nation Alliance invaded China, it looted and burned the Yuanmingyuan in the western suburbs of Beijing.
22. Wang Ping and Li Huajian have established a profound friendship.
23. At work, teachers and male students do heavy work, while female students do light work.
24. Recalling your growth process, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of "gardener".
25. After hard work, Xiaodong's sloppy problem has changed.
26. Studying various laws is one of the important tasks at present.
27. Air, like other substances, has the characteristics of expanding with heat and contracting with cold.