Keywords: 200 words in the second grade of primary school
Word count: 200 words composition
This article is applicable to: the second grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 200 words in grade two of primary school. The title is A Children's Poetry. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I think I'll put my eyes on the ground and watch the industrious earthworm work in obscurity and selflessness. I want to put my ears in the depths of the sea and listen to whales and dolphins. Teacher's comment: A short children's poem expresses children's reverie and longing, with novel imagination and childlike innocence. The author has learned to choose specific images, such as earthworms, whales and dolphins. Poetry has architectural beauty and musical beauty, so in the underground, we should choose one or two images to avoid repetition. Before "I want to put my ears", I should say "I want to", so there is symmetry. It is better to change "in the sea" to "under the sea" and "melodious" to "melodious". Also, why is there no punctuation in the whole text? Even poetry should have punctuation marks. (China famous teacher: Teacher Cao) 2009-3-23 17:30:00