"The title is half good." Drawing up a novel and unique topic can not only add color to the article, but also attract the attention of the marking teachers, make them find everything new and fresh, leave a good first impression, and play an important role in grading the article.
A beautiful topic has three basic requirements: novelty, novelty and sincerity.
First, seek "novelty"
Writing is new, as is the topic. This requires students to try to get rid of those cliches and parrot-like topics when writing; In particular, we should abandon those ordinary, tacky and tasteless topics and choose extraordinary and distinctive titles.
For example, the composition on the topic of "family" is very common, and it is difficult to arouse readers' interest if such topics as "my father" and "interesting things about my family" are drawn up. On the contrary, such as Happiness Holding Your Hand, I can't walk out of your deep love all my life, Love is selfless dedication, Autumn Rain is heartless, and Love Equation are all extraordinary and will bring extraordinary feelings to people. Can be an excellent topic for it.
Second, seek "difference"
Titles that are often selected or conceived in the usual form always give people a monotonous feeling. Sometimes, we can put aside our distractions and conceive from a unique angle to create a surprising and strange topic.
For example, "1+ 1=?" Suspense comes one after another, which fully arouses readers' curiosity. Therefore, the wonderful title is the symbol of an excellent article, which allows people to spy on the charm of the article through this window, thus generating a powerful shock.
Third, seeking truth.
The content of the composition should not be false, big or empty. Of course, the title of the composition should not be false or empty, otherwise it will make people feel frivolous. There should still be authenticity and sincerity. A few words, a gentle sentence, can be an excellent title, because it melts the author's true feelings, and such a title is also very attractive.
Such as "Dad, my daughter doesn't love you" and "Brother, come back quickly!" My Old Father in the Countryside is a straightforward soul and a perceptual cry, which is easy to cause * * *. Therefore, it has achieved twice the result with half the effort.
What are the ways to draw up a good title?
Clever use of rhetoric;
1, metaphor: "He is an poplar tree": He resolutely left home, stationed in the frontier of the motherland, indomitable, just like a standing poplar tree. Another example: "Love is like jasmine". Motherly love silently exudes an attractive fragrance in ordinary things, which is the fragrance of jasmine.
2, personification: such as: "encourage autobiography", in the first person, let encourage yourself to introduce their role and advantages.
3, parallelism: such as: "Grandpa? Grandma? Rose ",by making a bottle of rose flower dew, connects the love stories of your grandfather and grandmother in life, which is sincere and admirable." "Another example is:" Bees? Hawkeye? The Mirror shows that if you want to write a good composition, you should accumulate as diligently as a bee, observe with an eagle eye and review as often as a mirror, which will benefit you a lot and give people a brand-new feeling.
4, contrast: such as: "Pain and Happiness", during the growth process, you will encounter all kinds of unexpected things. Sometimes, a heavy blow and a huge setback will make you feel miserable; But after all, when I grew up, I slowly learned to cope freely and learned to be strong, so I was full of happiness.
5. Quotations: The Corner Forgotten by Love quotes a famous literary article as its title, which shows the author's regret that as a poor student, he is often forgotten and can't get the care of his teacher and the help of his classmates. "Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you" quoted Confucius as the title, which vividly reproduced the theme of the article.
1. The topic of "sincerity"-"Looking in the crowd"
2 "Missing" topic-"The so-called Iraqis are on the water side"
3. "Environmental protection" topic-"I want to have a home-the voice of a bird"
4. "Tolerance" topic-"Clouds made of rain in the wind"
5. "Understanding" topic-"Look at the opposite teacher"
6. "Family" topic-"Only mothers are good in the world"
7. The topic of "reading"-"Love you is not negotiable"
8. "Learning" topic-"Stones from other mountains can attack jade"
6. rhetorical question: "tired of playing with things?" The article clearly points out that playing knowledge games can be closely and interestingly combined with learning. Instead of losing confidence, it will increase your wisdom and strengthen your will.
7. Q: "Wrong? Right! " Point out a friend's mistake and be ridiculed by him. Whether it is right or wrong, just look at the punctuation marks on the topic.
8.top truth: "Reading is fun, reading is fun", which reproduces the fun and character of reading with the funny way of Top Truth.
9. Parody: Sleeping to the Last, imitating the TV series Love to the Last, vividly depicts the interesting story that the little author was deprived of sleep due to homework pressure and secretly dozed off in class.
10, irony: "Being a' god' for half an hour", the young author who never goes out alone wanders into the street with the Rao Xing mentality of "customers are gods". He doesn't want this "god" but suffers a lot and doesn't get the due treatment.
1 1, pun intended: "Draw a green leaf for life". "Green leaves" are not only the green leaves painted by the painter for a patient in the story, but also the "hope" for survival felt by the young author.
12, metonymy: "My Medical Records Consultation Book", borrow the medical records consultation book to reveal my own shortcomings and problems.
13. Duality: "A wisp of good books makes a hundred flavors of life", "Less indifference, more care" and so on.
Second, skillfully use the formula method
This method is to skillfully use numbers or use numbers to form mathematical formulas to design composition topics. This kind of title can often accurately summarize the content of the article, concise and accurate, novel in form, can stimulate readers' curiosity and inspire people. such as
1. The topic of "sincerity"-"7-1= 0"
2. The topic of "education"-"1+1=? 》
3. "Learning" topic-"8-1~ 8"
4. The topic of "unification"-"1+1~ 2"
5. "Morality" topic-"Patience ≠ cowardice"
6. The topic of "honesty"-"honesty+credit = wealth"
7. The topic of "success"-"success = strength+innovation+opportunity"
8. The topic of "knowledge"-"People× knowledge = ∞"
The title 1 emphasizes the pivotal position of "sincerity". Title 2 shows innovative thinking that dares to challenge authority. Title 3 shows that it is better to take 1 hour out of 8 hours to exercise than to take 8 hours to study. Title 4 shows that the power of "unity" is infinite. Chapter five denies a deep-rooted prejudice. The sixth chapter shows that "honesty" is a valuable asset. Title 7 shows that success requires three factors. Title 8 shows the power of knowledge. The above eight examples are enough to illustrate the infinite charm of this kind of numbers and formulas, which really gives people a refreshing feeling.
Third, the poetic method.
This method is to use the language of poetry and prose to create a beautiful artistic conception. Or hidden feelings in the scene, or seeing feelings in the scene, or blending scenes, both poetic and charming.
1. The topic of "life"-"Baiyun? Sunset? Song (surname)
2. "Homesickness" topic-"Which river? A boat? This man
3. "Footprint" topic-"Red shoes? The Smurfs
4. "Opportunity" topic-"Let's go to see the sea together in rainy season"
5. "Friendship" topic-"White handkerchief dancing in the wind"
6. "Window" topic-"Falling sky"
7. "Time and space" topic-"Love in the Dust"
8. The topic of "time"-"Happy Songs Flying from the Waves"
The above eight titles, or white clouds and cool breeze, or red dust in the night, or bright stars, or splashing waves, or filled with emotion, or singing, have beautiful language and vivid images, revealing the infinite meaning of life with limited words and creating infinite space for readers to gallop and imagine. At the same time, it is easy to touch readers' heartstrings, making them produce an emotional * * * sound, which has a strong artistic charm.
Writing skills of senior high school entrance examination
First, writing skills
As the saying goes, "half the articles are well written." The title is the eye of the article, and a good title can double the literary talent of the article and make people unforgettable. So, how can we quickly draw up a vivid and novel title?
Composition ending method
The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning". The ending is "leopard tail", which requires a strong, concise, vivid and just right ending.
1, at the end of the text.
Reasoning questions: such as "having a grateful heart will make our society more tolerant and understanding, and less responsible and entrusted;" More harmony and warmth, less quarreling and indifference; More sincerity and unity, less deception and distraction ... "("Have a grateful heart ").
Voting topic: For example, "What is certain is that no matter whether the road ahead is sunny or steep, I will be firm-painful and happy." ("Pain and Happiness")
Forward-looking topics: such as "I, my future is not a dream!" " "("My future is not a dream ")
Sentiment topic: for example, "She taught me tolerance and learned tolerance." (tolerance)
Step 2 echo from beginning to end
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. ("Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season")
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! ("Guarding the Fire of Spirit")
3. Express feelings and wishes.
For example, the "concern" at the end of the article: "The sun is shining outside the window, and the fragrance of cauliflower rushes into the classroom. Spring is so beautiful. Premier Zhou cares about us so much that we feel warm and happy. "
For example, at the end of the article, "Prime Minister Shili": ... The hearse gradually faded away and finally disappeared into the boundless night. People still stand quietly with their backs to the direction of the hearse, as if waiting for Premier Zhou to come back. "
Step 4 call call
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. ("Give love to others")
Step 5 ask clever questions
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? ("Ha ha me in the mirror")
7. Lyric discussion
In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud floating across the horizon, gently dotted with blue sky, fresh and natural.
Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (In the Mood for Love)
8, scene contrast, scene unity
The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance. (reading in the rain)
At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Growing up in the Sun)
9. Repeat this point
"winter's personality", the main part appears "I love winter. Winter is a sacred symbol ","I love winter. Winter is a respectable strict teacher ","I love winter. Winter is the cradle of spring. Click the sentence again: "I love winter. I love the sanctity, strictness and selflessness of winter, and I love her unique personality! "
10, From Syria to Love
The title of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination somewhere is When I am Conquered. A examinee used the first person "I" instead of the brave and unyielding little ant in the form of fable, describing the process of tenacious struggle between "I" and various atrocities that killed "I", which concealed the author's attitude of love and hate. In the end, the hidden feelings finally broke out: "That little guy, he foolishly thought he could conquer me, a little ant, but he didn't know that the desire for freedom and life could not be extinguished by violence!" " .
1 1, this and that
What is said here is the meaning there, which is the expansion and sublimation of thought. A candidate intends to write the topic of "ears are picky about food" in his composition, and write three major changes of ears by analogy, such as "eating soft but not hard", "eating hemp and not eating spicy" and "eating fat and not eating thin", and then end up like this: "If ears become more picky about food, I am afraid the truth will disappear!"
12, inversion or accident method
The key is to take a sudden turn. In the composition "Thanksgiving", a candidate wrote a touching life story between a terminally ill uncle and aunt. During the intermission, there was a quip made by menstruation before his uncle fell ill: "Your uncle knew he was talkative and an empty talker. He hasn't written a word, and he hasn't even read a love letter when he is old. " At the end, my uncle died suddenly, but the author didn't stop there, but unexpectedly pointed out the following contents: "On the third day after my uncle died, we saw my uncle's" love letter "in the column of" personals "and wrote in bold:" My wife, 32 years old, has lived with her for five years, testifying that she is the best partner, yes. My aunt took this love letter and burst into tears. "
13, response title
The article "Walking with Poets" chooses the poems and life stories of three poets, Tao Yuanming, Li Bai and Su Shi, as its own writing materials, thus showing its own extracurricular reading achievements and highlighting the theme of "more gains from extracurricular reading". All three fragments are well written, so there is no need to repeat them at the end. So he shouted with a call: "Poet! I am willing to walk with you! " .
14, leave blank.
"Xiangming" expresses the theme that "the weak always make excuses for themselves" by drinking tea and listening to the dialogue between father and daughter across the hall. At the end of the article, I wrote: "The conversation through the door made me think a lot. I took another sip of green tea, which was really bitter, but soon I tasted a heartfelt fragrance, which made me very comfortable. I suddenly remembered something, turned around and took out a bottle of green tea from the refrigerator and walked across the hall ... "
15, clever use of postscript
You can quote poems, provoke discussions and express your feelings; It has the function of strengthening expression and deepening theme.
For example, "Fish and Water" uses anthropomorphic techniques to write the story that fish are ungrateful, always want to jump out of the sea, get freedom, and wait until they leave the sea to regret it. At the end of the story, add the following words: "The sea creates life and protects life, so there will be happiness when fish get water." Philosopher said: Fish know that water is the source of happiness. "It's wonderful to state the theme concisely with the postscript, highlight the topic of' gratitude', change the writing object, be free and flexible, be apt to nature and deepen the theme.
16, clever use of rhetoric
Clever use of rhetorical devices, especially parallelism, metaphor, truth, duality, quotation, etc.
For example, at the end of Looking at the Mountain and Becoming a Peak: "Innovation is a stone that sparks a single spark; Innovation is fire, lighting the lamp of hope; Innovation is a lamp that illuminates the way forward; Innovation is the way, guiding us forward! "
17, go to the back
For example, at the end of Kiss and Understanding, "Plato betrayed his teacher and said,' I love my teacher, especially the truth'." When Brutu pierced Caesar's last sword, he said,' It's not that I love Caesar less, but that I love Rome more. How admirable their words and actions are when emotional intimacy conflicts with the truth of the matter! "。
18, fully expressed
Comprehensive use of narrative, description, lyricism, discussion and other expressions, the ending can also be boldly used.
For example, at the end of "Communication": "So a picture came to my eyes: my mother walked carefully step by step in the sunset glow, walking steadily and comfortably. The wind is blowing gently, beating a place with Phnom Penh in Ye Er. The water gleamed and looked into the distance. Birds frolicking in the air ... Walking is the communication of love. -I firmly told my mother that we would come for a walk tomorrow. "
12 Ways to make the ending of your composition radiant.
As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end." A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. The so-called "leopard tail" means that at the end, the brushwork should be concise, bright and clean, just like the leopard tail sweeping vigorously, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and aftertaste. So, how to write the end of the article? I summed up twelve common techniques for entertaining students and friends.
First of all, this is a matter of course.
The so-called natural ending refers to the natural closure of the full text after the content of the article is expressed, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms, and the full text ends with the end of the event, which is clean and neat.
For example, an interesting science class ended like this: when the bell rang, students reluctantly put down their experiments and could not help but complain, "Why is this class so short!" "
Second, Zhang Xianzhi made the finishing touch.
This way of ending means that at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text, the theme is clearly expressed in concise language, or at the end of the full text, the writing intention is clearly stated, so that the center of the article stands out clearly.
For example, when a classmate wrote "Commitment", he ended up like this: No matter what difficulties he will encounter in life, he will never give up and be a strong man in life-this is my promise.
Third, echo the main idea from beginning to end.
Echo from beginning to end, the structure is complete and seamless, which can arouse the inner beauty of readers.
Please look at the beginning and end of a classmate's "beating himself":
Beginning: I am good at beating myself, which is my strength. This "self" is a self who is afraid of difficulties, lacks courage and is proud when he succeeds.
Conclusion: I am good at beating myself, which is my strength. Don't lose heart in the face of difficulties, but have the courage to overcome them: don't be arrogant when you succeed, see the shortcomings and keep a cool head.
Fourth, the quotations are rich and colorful.
End with famous sayings, aphorisms, poems, proverbs, lyrics, etc. , full of poetry, reveals the true meaning, shows the profound and thought-provoking content, which is deeply imprinted in the reader's mind and meaningful.
For example, a classmate wrote the ending of "Beautiful Tomorrow" like this: Tomorrow this song says: "Tomorrow is another day, and there are so many tomorrows. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain ... "I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow.
5. Clever questions are thought-provoking.
At the end, questions are raised in the form of questions, which inspire readers to think, have the effect of infection and emphasis, and can be described as endless.
If a classmate writes the end of my Chinese teacher like this: Isn't my Chinese teacher a competent and good teacher? Have you ever seen such a teacher?
Sixth, Lenovo is colorful.
At the end, expand the association, from this to that, from the outside to the inside, sublimate the theme.
For example, at the end of "Flowers" written by a classmate, colorful flowers bloomed on campus and planted seeds in my heart. ...
Seven, express feelings extraordinary.
Ending an article in a lyrical way can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers, arouse their voices and give people a real and full feeling.
Such as the exercise "Autumn in the Park": Ah! I love the charming autumn colors, and I love a dress that Miss Qiu gave to Mother Earth-Autumn.
Eight, the scenery sets off the scene.
Describing the end of a scene is like enjoying a beautiful piece of music. Although the music ends, it echoes around the beam, leaving people with endless charm.
For example, when the rainy season is over and the rain stops, the sunshine radiates his gentle light, and a rainbow appears in the sky, just like a colorful bridge in the sky, and my heart becomes pure and clear.
Nine, inspiring thinking is still not completed
That is to say, the author organizes sentences with appropriate words, leaving readers room for thinking at the end, which makes people enlighten and feel something, which can be described as profound feelings.
For example, a classmate wrote the fable "The Fox and the Crow" at the end: "The crow didn't think calmly when he was in trouble, and blindly listened to the fox, and he was cheated again." This has aroused readers' deep thinking: no matter what you do, you should learn to think calmly and distinguish right from wrong.
Ten, unexpectedly come to an abrupt end
This ending is not to deal with the ending of characters or things according to the usual logic of the story, but to come to an abrupt end with an unexpected ending, which makes people stunned and can't help but sigh the author's whimsy and ever-changing life.
For example, a classmate creatively wrote "The Race between the Tortoise and the Rabbit": Just when the tortoise was complacent about winning the championship for its cleverness, the referee announced a result that surprised everyone-the rabbit won. It turns out that the rule of the game is who runs slowly.
Eleven, subtle and profound aftertaste.
Implicit ending writing is to hide what you want to say, express your true feelings, and leave a blank at the end of the article. Metaphors, symbols and blank art are often used to make people think deeply, leaving readers with endless imagination space and leading readers to a more far-reaching situation, which has the miraculous effect of "reverberation around the beam for three days".
For example, at the end of the article "Mountain Picker": I came back from Mount Tai and drew a picture-a mountain picker wearing a red vest bent the load on his shoulders on a steep mountain road, and he climbed up step by step. This painting has been hanging in front of my desk for many years because I need it.
Twelve. Sublimation theme reveals essence
The so-called sublimation theme is a natural extension on the basis of the theme, which reveals the essence through phenomena and enriches and deepens the connotation of the theme.
For example, at the end of "Mother": "But an inch of grass has a few feelings, and I have three rays of spring." My mother is such a selfless and great mother. However, she is one of thousands of working people in Qian Qian, who created this beautiful world. We should study hard and repay the motherland and people with practical actions in the future. It is of far-reaching significance for the author to associate personal feelings with ordinary working people to express his praise.
There are thousands of ways to end a composition. No matter how you put pen to paper, you must conform to the text and be indispensable. The ancients said, "Closing a sentence is like ringing a bell, and there is more than enough voiceless sound." It can be seen that the key to the end of the article is to have rich and profound content, which can withstand chewing, inspire readers to imagine and think, and achieve the situation of "lingering sound, more than three days".
Writing ending skills
2. End to end echo
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" "
3, pawn Zhang Xianzhi style
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous aphorisms
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5, lyrical argument
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
Mastering the crested leopard tail, plus more training at ordinary times, junior high school composition should not be a problem!