Castle Peak is in the north of the city, and east of the city a white curve of water.
Here, we shake hands and say goodbye. You are like a loose grass wandering in the journey of Wan Li.
A wanderer's heart is like a cloud in the sky, and the afterglow of the sunset is more difficult than friendship.
Waving goodbye frequently, the horse hissed goodbye. ...
Comments:
This is a farewell poem, full of poetry. The first couplet is very special. Write the scenery elsewhere first: Castle Peak runs across the outer city, and and east of the city a white curve of water flows. These two sentences use "Qingshan" for "Baishui" and "Northland" for "Dongcheng". "Green" and "white" alternate with each other, with bright and beautiful colors. The word "horizontal" is engraved with the static state of mountains and the dynamic state of calligraphy and painting. It's so descriptive, floating at will, beautiful and fresh. The middle couplet is related to writing the parting line when breaking up. The first two sentences are concerned about the wandering life of friends, and it is very comfortable and natural to write. The last two sentences are about the feeling of parting, and the "floating clouds" and "sunset" are skillfully compared to express their feelings. There are scenes and feelings written, and the scenes blend. Tail couplet goes further and expresses inseparable feelings. The word "ban" is embedded in a sentence in The Book of Songs Xiao Ya Che Gong Pian, which shows that Ma doesn't want to leave the group, let alone people. Baking a romantic friendship is really ingenious. This poem is novel and unique, rich and diverse. Bright colors, fluent language, subtle feelings, natural beauty and human beauty are particularly tasteful.