Those innocent days with honey in the sun are getting farther and farther away in the birthday songs again and again.
Will there be more? Lying on the hillside at night, watching fireflies flashing warm light across the tip of the tree, watching the silver moonlight hanging on the branches and slowly illuminating the treetops with warmth.
Will there be more? On a grass favored by the sun, holding the thin thread of a kite, running with dreams, the wind whistling behind you, whispering beautiful fairy tales with you.
Will there be more? Silly holding a paper windmill, standing on the street corner facing the wind, letting the wind make the paper fan rotate, "bang" … I don't care what others think.
Our childhood, like a gust of wind, was thrown out of the world after the paper plane flew out of the horizon. Putting down our wayward tears, we began to replace our accumulated dreams with thick books. The distant bell rang, blurring the trajectory of growth. The dolls and puppets that grew up with us are now dusty in the long river by time, dreams become illusory, angels' wings are cut off, and elves are expelled from their minds. ...
Childhood, hidden in the sweet smell of chocolate, hidden in the doll's heart, hidden in the tired rubber band.
Colorful windows, a corner of the sky, sweat can no longer reflect colorful light. We're just traveling through time.
I once fished for stars in the river, believing that the brightest one must belong to me; I once picked fruits from trees and enjoyed the fruits of my labor with relish. I used to dance for my small achievements; I once dropped a sincere coin in a beggar's rice bowl ... until now, my ears are still ringing with the silvery laughter that I played with my friends.
It was not until one day that I suddenly found them sneaking out of my pocket that I realized that my childhood was gone forever.
I believe that innocence will last forever, just as I believe that all light and shadow are reflective, just as I believe that the flowers full of trees only come from a tenacious seed in the ice and snow.
My childhood and I, like two lines at the same point, are not parallel or intersect, but farther apart.
I only believe that as long as I have a dream, I am a free child.
Bundles of flowers, wisps of sunshine, may also be a warm blessing. But in my heart, it is my campus life, which renders the blue sky all the way on my pale life.
Peach blossoms in childhood are always brilliant; Childhood is not sad; Campus life is pure. A beating heart; Smiling face full of youthful breath, we sincerely edit that touching song.
Whenever the teacher appears on the three-foot platform, our hearts will swim with the teacher in the ocean of knowledge, feel the fresh sunshine, appreciate the exotic customs of another world and talk about how to experience it together. Rest is pleasant. There are brilliant laughter everywhere, the friendship and respect between teachers and students turn into strings of notes flying in the air, and everyone's heart is beating happily. Every corner of the world has its wear and tear, but the teacher's goodness is endless. Whenever I encounter setbacks and feel depressed because I failed in the exam, the teacher is like a bright lamp hanging in front of my helpless soul, teaching me to urge me to be a strong man in life, because the joy of victory belongs only to the strong man in life.
Friendship is the soul of life and the beacon of the soul. My campus life is sweet. Because there are familiar faces in life; A sweet smile; Warm wishes and greetings. In our successful days, we cheer together and share every successful fruit together; Play the music of the heart with happy notes together. We share weal and woe. Whenever I hear birds singing and leaves rustling, my heart becomes more and more full. Walking on the grass under my feet, my troubles disappeared among the flowers as I walked. Everything is so natural and comfortable.
My campus life is like a gurgling stream, flowing happily, with glittering and translucent waves from time to time. Looking up is spring, looking down is autumn, the full moon is painting, and the lack of the moon is poetry. Campus life in the silent years decorated me with pictures of life, which made my life full of joy and enrichment.
There are traces of years, which have left me a love for campus life. May the flowers in everyone's heart be fresher; May the sunshine on everyone be brighter; May everyone's smile be sweeter; May the blessings in your hearts warm your hearts. Let's fight with our hearts and everything in this blue sky, to forge ahead, to create the brightest spot in our life and to create our beauty.
Farewell-a kind of courage
The fish bid farewell to the pond. Do you think she will die? No, she is pursuing her own river; The bird bid farewell to the bamboo cage. Do you think she will starve to death? No, what she pursues is her own mountain forest; The stone bid farewell to the mountain. Do you think he will be lonely? No, he is pursuing his own world. ...
Everything in nature is trying to say goodbye, because they have their own pursuits. I have to say: Farewell is a kind of courage.
Zhu Gekongming, who lives in Longzhong, likes farming and singing. He seems to have no intention of fighting, but he often compares himself with Guan Zhong and Le Yi, which shows that he has a long-term ambition to enter the phase. Therefore, even if Liu Bei doesn't stage a trip to the cottage, Zhuge Liang will come to recommend himself eventually. Because he bid farewell to the comfortable life in Longzhong and devoted himself to the arduous political struggle, which is a kind of courage.
Tao Yuanming was originally an official of the imperial court, but he hated the darkness of officialdom and pursued fame and fortune. Therefore, he abandoned his official position to live in seclusion, fame and wealth, because he had his own pursuit-"picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely." But he bid farewell to the powerful, abandoned the secular and devoted himself to the beautiful scenery, which was absolutely courageous.
Lu Xun devoted himself to medicine, hoping to save China by treating diseases, but he later discovered that China people not only suffered from diseases, but also suffered from mental and ideological diseases. Therefore, he abandoned medicine to join the army, picked up a pen to remove the pain of the soul for the people of China, and the integrity of "bowing down as a willing ox" also radiated from the pen tip, because he had his own pursuit-revitalizing New China. It is undoubtedly a kind of courage for him to bid farewell to medicine and embark on a long road of literature.
Now, I am sitting in the examination room of the senior high school entrance examination. It should be said that I am on the battlefield, just a pursuit-to fight with all my strength. I bid farewell to all distractions and stay in this battlefield. I seem to see the light of hope for victory. Isn't this a kind of courage?
Fish bid farewell to the pond and may face drying up; Birds bid farewell to bamboo cages and may face death; Stone may face loneliness when bidding farewell to the mountains, but they have their own beliefs, so they chose to bid farewell, shining with the brave light of heroes, and began their journey to find the place that suits them best. ...
Brief comments:
The author looks at the problem with a unique eye, and he finds the interest of saying goodbye to himself-saying goodbye is a kind of courage. In this paper, the method of deductive reasoning is adopted, and various farewell phenomena in nature are put forward first, and then conclusions are drawn; Then it lists all kinds of farewell stories of human society and draws the conclusion that farewell is a kind of courage.
Starting with familiar natural phenomena, the author makes profound truth easy to understand. The full text has clear thinking, clear reasoning, appropriate rhetoric and rich language. It shows that the author's Chinese literacy is very high.
Courage refers to the courage, boldness and decisive style of dealing with things. Based on this, the elaboration of Zhuge Liang's case remains to be discussed. Tao Yuanming's seclusion in the countryside is neither "seeking" nor "doing". These factual arguments still need to pay attention to the pertinence and rigor of their language expression.
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Farewell = a new beginning
"Gently, I'm going. Just like I came here gently ... "Mr. Xu Zhimo's poem" Farewell to Cambridge "triggered our thoughts on farewell.
In the writings of ancient and modern poets, farewell is often a kind of sadness. "Reunion after a long separation, reunion after a long separation, the east wind rises and flowers fall", what a sad farewell! "Then he disappeared at the corner of the pass, leaving only his hoofprint", what a lost farewell! However, I don't like this reluctant farewell. I prefer the enlightened farewell of "However, as long as China keeps our friendship, heaven is still our neighbor". Because farewell is actually another new beginning of life.
When Edison left his caring mother to look for a job everywhere, this farewell to his mother meant the beginning of Edison's invention career; When is Bill? When Gates left his hometown Seattle to set up Microsoft elsewhere, this farewell to his hometown meant a new beginning of his career. When Lu Xun gave up medicine and returned to China to start his writing career, this farewell to his mentor, Mr. Fujino, meant another beginning of his life journey. It can be seen that saying goodbye to old things means the beginning of new things, so saying goodbye is not a sad thing.
However, not everyone can face farewell with an open mind. Many people forget the new beginning after saying goodbye because they are so sad about it. These people are often too attached to the past to face new people and things, let alone start over.
Everyone will encounter this kind of thing in his life. People will say goodbye to their classmates and friends. They will say goodbye to their parents and relatives. If we take these farewells as a new beginning, we can go better in our later life. Countless great men and celebrities in history have provided us with examples: Helen bid farewell to the deaf and became a blind female writer and social activist; The Wright brothers bid farewell to the playful bamboo dragonfly, but invented the plane; Hawking bid farewell to the pain of terminal illness and wrote A Brief History of Time. Therefore, as long as you treat farewell with broad mind and tenacious perseverance, success may be beckoning to you.
Say goodbye to the past, you will usher in a new beginning, and your future will be better.
Comments:
This is a masterpiece with unique techniques and novel ideas. The little author, a pervert, treats farewell with an optimistic, open-minded and rational attitude, regards farewell as a symbol of entrepreneurship, career development and realm sublimation, and makes a strong argument with the typical celebrities and great men, thus making his farewell equal to a new beginning convincing. The disadvantage is that the examples are convincing, weighty, less explained and slightly lacking. However, being in the examination room of the senior high school entrance examination, having such exquisite ideas, fluent writing style and concise language really shows the author's writing strength.
Say goodbye to pessimism
There is half a glass of water on the table-that's a fact.
There is only half a glass of water on the table-that's right.
There is still half a glass of water on the table-I see your smile.
It can be seen that it is the world that is not easy to change, but your mentality that can be changed. Facing the same door, some people are pessimistic about the darkness inside, while others are optimistic about the tranquility inside; Some people are pessimistic about the storm outside, while others are optimistic about the freedom outside. Pessimism and optimism, different mentality, I want to say: farewell to pessimism.
The experiment failed, and some people said: 1000 was a fiasco, so you should stop! Edison bid farewell to pessimism: 1000 failures at least tell me that 1000 materials cannot be used as filaments. Finally, at his insistence, the light bulb was invented successfully! If he hadn't bid farewell to pessimism, then human beings would have to grope in the dark for many years.
Cell failure, old age and death, some people pessimistically lie in bed feeling sorry for themselves, waiting for others to take care of them. Hawking bid farewell to pessimism, sitting alone in a wheelchair, tapping the mouse with stiff hands and exploring the unknown world. If he didn't bid farewell to pessimism, how could a great man work miracles with his will?
Laughed and humiliated by others, some people stayed in the corner and wept silently, while Li Yang shouted "English" in the hot sun. He bid farewell to pessimism and created "Crazy English" with this almost crazy behavior.
The grass was bent by the strong wind, but bid farewell to pessimism. After the storm, it regrouped and faced the sunrise. The fish was washed away from the harbor by the river, but bid farewell to pessimism, went upstream and finally lived happily in his hometown; Clouds were blown away by the wind, but they bid farewell to pessimism and gathered again, bringing showers to the earth-
Facing the same door, will you be too timid to choose and hesitate? Will it be pessimistic, afraid and uneasy? Say goodbye to pessimism! Maybe you can't change the world, but you can abandon your pessimistic attitude and face challenges and tempering.
There is still half a glass of water on the table. Let us smile.
Comments:
The advantages of this paper are obvious. 1, the idea is very good, reflecting the unique vitality of teenagers: farewell to pessimism, we just need optimism. 2. The language of this article is also very distinctive: the first three paragraphs convey the profound meaning of the topic and lay the emotional tone of the whole article by skillfully changing sentence patterns. In this paper, the author uses a lot of rhetorical devices: using contrast to highlight the victory result of "farewell to pessimism"; Use parallelism to make the theme of Farewell to Pessimism appear powerful; The use of personification reduces the elements of preaching and makes the view of "farewell to pessimism" easy to accept. The ending not only takes care of the beginning, but also blurs the topic again with "smile", making the article seamless.
Farewell is not sadness.
The mighty sorrow stays in the sky, and the whip refers to the horizon.
-Gong Zizhen
When waving goodbye, we saw the firm belief in their eyes; When we turned to leave, we saw their tall backs. They turned grief into peace. Their words make sadness rise; They leave sadness as loyalty. When they walk alone in history, they say goodbye instead of sadness.
Wen cheng ru fan
She looked back and saw the beautiful Datang Jiangshan drifting away on the endless ancient road. She clearly heard the whispers of swallows in her hometown and the kind cries. But after wiping away her tears, she bid farewell to prosperity and family and went to sow the seeds of peace beyond the Great Wall. Her youth disappeared in the yellow sand everywhere, and her beauty was eclipsed in the eternal cold. Looking back, it was her persistence in saying goodbye and the blessing of rockhopper.
Farewell is not sadness, but a colorful bridge of peace.
Gou Jian left the country.
The cry of defeat after the war still seems to ring in my ears. He stood at the gate in a slave suit. He is surrounded by his beloved city, which is now in ruins. Through the layers of farewell, he didn't see the sadness. His tearful eyes are expectation and support. Yes, he said goodbye and resolutely walked to the stable of the prince of Wu. He may be humiliated, but he won't forget to eat and drink. Goodbye.
Farewell is not sadness, but persistence.
Qu Yuan threw ginger.
Alone in the boat, he gradually moved away from the capital. Chu Huaiwang's cold eyes still echoed in his mind. The river was cold and he didn't miss it. Standing by the river, he saw the expression of people trying to retain, and also saw the children holding high the translation and reading materials of Li Sao. That's enough. It's better to go home after being humiliated. This is the last farewell of life. He's smiling, smiling at Yong Jun, smiling.
Farewell is not sadness, but touching loyalty.
Birds bid farewell to their mothers and embrace the sky; Falling leaves bid farewell to branches and breed hope; Fan Xiao bid farewell to the ocean and accept the challenge.
Farewell is not sadness.
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The author skillfully and innovatively interprets three familiar stories closely related to "farewell". The article is clear in thinking. At the beginning, it briefly summarizes the connotation of "farewell" in the three stories, and then uses a four-word phrase as a subtitle to tell us that Princess Wencheng's farewell sacrificed herself and won national unity. Gou Jian's farewell stifled sadness and waited for revenge; Qu Yuan's farewell gave up the body and left the eternity of the soul, so the ordinary emotion of "farewell" has a richer and deeper content in the author's pen. The author has rich knowledge accumulation and good language control ability, and the language is neat and imposing, which is easy to read. As an exam composition, it is really rare.
Say goodbye to the night
When the sun goes down, it will be endless night. I am curled up in the corner of the city, but I am meditating in deep melancholy. When will the thoughts of passers-by in Jiangnan be cut off? How can that lilac girl not worry? Who can point the way for a long journey? So I can only wander and be confused. I looked up and asked softly, Night, how long do you have? At this time, Yinger on that branch sang slowly: Learn to say goodbye, there is light behind the night, and the song is long and slowly echoing. ...
Farewell to the night is a gorgeous color. In spring, the skirts are full of flowers, and thousands of butterflies are flying, but one wintersweet after another is sprouting in the cold abyss. Above its body is hard rock, dark and boundless. It cries, it is decadent, it is melancholy, but the pace of growth never stops. The light of life shines on its chest like this. When the cold wind blows, all the trees wither and shine.
Farewell to the night is a heroic shock. In the past years, life was turbulent like catkins and duckweeds. From a distance, it is free to spread, but in the vicinity, it is helpless. Together, it is glory, and falling is the abyss. Look at the surging waves at the source of the Yangtze River, you can't wash away your grief and anger, and you can't hide the heroic life. Li Bai stood in the wind, stroking his sleeves and wiping his tears, knocking at the sky and sighing: One day, I will ride the long wind and break the waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea! So strength belongs to him, praise belongs to him, and night does not belong to him. Another example is Gong Zizhen, who sacrificed flowers: falling red is not a heartless thing, but turned into spring mud to protect flowers. It is more like a generation of immigrants who bid farewell with tears and worked hard silently. The long scroll of history was rolled out for them, bidding farewell to the night, and it was another generation of heroes!
Farewell to the night is a beautiful success. Tai Lihua's name deeply touched everyone in China and gave them infinite shock. A thousand hands of Guanyin, a thousand words of blessing, the cruelty of fate made her unable to appreciate the beauty of life, but gave her a beautiful heart and colorful dances. It is she who lives tenaciously in the dark, and it is also she who portrays bravery and outlines nobility among thousands of troops. Tai Lihua, her life is small, but it reflects the light of the whole sun. This is a light in the dark.
Say goodbye to the night, learn to be strong, I stand timidly, say goodbye to the darkness, the sun and the moon shine together, lingering, they hold me a big sun. ...
The nightingale continued to sing. On the other side of the water, the sunrise was born. ...
Comments:
In this paper, the most common natural scenes alternating day and night in life are selected as the perspective, and the materials are selected from three aspects. From the growth of natural plants to the heroic success of people with lofty ideals in ancient and modern times, the author's joy, confidence and freedom in bidding farewell to the night are all displayed between the lines. The writing style reflects the examinee's solid writing skills and extensive knowledge, and the article is atmospheric and highly conceived. At the same time, the structure of the article is clear and accurate, echoing from beginning to end and meaningful. It would be better if candidates could pay attention to the level of content between paragraphs in the text.