Hello, I’m crazy about you, and I’m deeply homesick for you. It’s definitely not a poem written by the ancients. No matter in terms of context, writing style or the use of meter, the meter of the seven words in it is as follows:
廄平平平平廄平.
Completely inconsistent with the phonological rules.
In poetry, rhyme is the last word (personally, everyone like Li Qingzhao, Jiang Kui, etc. think music is very important, but many poems only leave meter but no music score, which is difficult for modern people to understand The beauty of phonology at that time, so this needs to be discussed separately), artistic conception is the most important (an important point to mention: music itself also has artistic conception, the ancients may express artistic conception through the rhythm of music, etc., but the same sentence , the music score has been lost).
The seven characters "Qing is crazy about lovesickness" are not beautiful in terms of structure. The first four characters mainly focus on expressing the word "crazy", and then suddenly comes "lovesickness". It does not mean that, after A kind of contradictory mood is used to express the poet's mood (such words often appear in the appreciation of ancient poetry). I want to say that the two are not contradictory, but they are not compatible, and they are neither fish nor fowl when used together.
Let’s make a comparison. Let’s start with four words. I’ll use the four words “I’m crazy about singing” to compare “Crazy for Qing”. If it’s just four words, there’s nothing wrong with “Crazy for Qing”, but there’s also It's not a masterpiece, it can only be said to express this meaning. Being crazy about you is mainly expressed in the extreme point of lovesickness. In layman's terms, I like you, I always like you! I love you so much! .
The sentence "Lovesickness" comes next. Why is Lovesickness so sad? It's very simple. Thinking about each other means missing each other. Of course, missing each other is more elegant in writing and can better reflect the beauty. Then worry, why are you worried? Because they weren't around, or they were rejected, or whatever.
However, on the one hand, these two are forms of confession. Of course, they are not confessions to the person they like, but they are just violent expressions of this feeling. On the other hand, they want to express their suffering in a lonely way - by infatuation. The suffering caused by it can be used in this way, but when concentrated in one sentence, there is no sense of reversal or beauty. Let's compare it with Liu Yong's "Die Lian Hua" (also known as "Feng Qi Wu") ", most people call it "Feng Qiwu", but in terms of Ci Pai, "Die Lian Hua" is the most famous and commonly used Ci Pai name, so it is called "Die Lian Hua" here):
Standing in the dangerous building, the wind blows softly, looking at the sky full of spring sorrow and confusion. In the grass-colored smoke and the lingering light, there is no one who would care to lean on the fence.
I want to make the madness drunk, and the drunken singing and forced music are still tasteless. The belt becomes wider and wider, but I don't regret it anymore. I feel haggard because of the beauty.
First of all, I must state that Liu Yong’s poem is a political poem, not a love poem, but many people regard it as a love poem. Here, let’s use it as a love poem.
The worry in the upper column is that kind of sadness, and then the release and no regrets in the lower column are the reversal and strong succession. The sorrow in the upper column has laid a great foundation for the wider belt of the lower column. With good logic and structure, the last two sentences of Xia Que directly become the eternal song.
It must be mentioned here that literature, whether it is poetry, poetry, scriptures, or prose, scientific thinking, that is, logic and structure, are very important!
There is no logic and the article written is nonsense!
I want to say that these words are just pieced together, and in ancient poetry, I never recommend fighting alone. What do you mean? There are some verses that people like to separate from the whole poem. For example:
Poor and lowly couples suffer from everything.
Many people understand that couples need a certain financial foundation. I want to say, fart! This is what separates the verse from the whole!
The reason why I said Liu Yong's "Butterfly Love Flower" is a political poem and not a love poem is because I looked at it from a holistic perspective! Not from a partial perspective!
Nowadays people always look at it from a partial perspective, without the overall logic and structure! This is due to the consequences of current literature majors who only study liberal arts and not science (I majored in Chinese language and literature in college and was a high school science student). This has led to the limitations of these people. In one sentence, some of them can be analyzed. Things come in, but you definitely can’t analyze them all! Holmes can indeed analyze whether he comes from the Mississippi River or the Nile with a drop of water, but he cannot analyze the entire universe from a drop of water!
Original text of "Sorrow for Poor Couples":
"Removal of Sorrow", author: Yuan Zhen (Tang Dynasty).
In the past, we joked about the consequences behind our lives, but now we are seeing them before our eyes.
The clothes have been put on, but the needle and thread are still there.
I still miss my old love and pity my maidservant, and I also gave money to her in my dream.
I sincerely know that everyone has this hatred, and poor and lowly couples suffer from everything.
Modern translation:
I once joked about the arrangements after our death, but I didn’t expect it to be here today;
The clothes you wore have been given away. , but I couldn’t bear to open the box that you used to thread the needle;
Because I missed you so deeply that I felt pity for your maid, and because I dreamed of you many times, I burned paper money for me;
Who doesn’t know that everyone will be sad and painful when a couple lives and dies after separation?
It makes me very sad to think of all the things we suffered together when we were poor (this sentence is the most important thing).
This is the consequence of misinterpreting the author’s meaning! The meaning expressed by the author is very simple. Let me give you the simplest example, Jack Ma.
Suppose Jack Ma’s wife dies.
Ma Yun said: Every time I think of it, when I graduated from college, I was poor and ugly, and my ideas were said to be unrealistic by countless people. Everyone looked down on me, but in this My wife has always been with me. She and I were college classmates, but I had nothing when she married me. Whenever I think of me when I was starting a business or when I was in poverty, she was with me every step of the way. Every moment, I couldn't help but shed tears sadly.
This is the real reason why poor and humble couples suffer from everything.
So, this poem is about my crazy lovesickness. It has no structure, no logic, and no poetic beauty. It is obviously written by a modern person (it cannot be written by you, the poster), and it needs more. Just learn this knowledge.